Swapping Spit Comic (F)

[Anyponedrawn]

Just something I have played with many times, but redrew with two random pones.  I like the idea and keep playing with and probably will continue to do so. 


Sneezy comic

[Death Blossom]

Haha, I just saw it on Derpibooru. Which also brings the question, was it you that uploaded it: https://derpibooru.org/1157748. If not...

But ha, this is really funny actually. The expressions are great XD I love how his lips droop down after she sneezes on him. And really quite the appropriate reaction from both lol, with Henry being pretty squicked out. Poor them, they both have tears in their eyes at the end of it all. Btw, I really like their designs, they're pretty cute. Love that bow in the females hair, and just love her hair design in general.

[Darrin]

I can picture this animated!  I got exactly what you were trying to do in my head.  She sneezes, his lips cartoonishly droop, probably accompanied by a funny drooping noise.  It was really cute, and funny.  I also give props for using to completely made up designs because we have no association with these two.  They were just funny.   You also did a good job on their designs and colors.  All too many designs or horrendous when average people try to make a character.  You are no average person though.  

[Anyponedrawn]

Thank you for the concern.  I did post that on Derps. 

Also thank you guys.  I am glad you like them both   I like the word "Squicked" used by LP.  Not sure what it means, but I made up a fun meaning in my head.  Yeah, they were both kinda weak sauce since they had tears at the end.  Henry just wanted a kiss (Tried to think of a very average name).  I like the idea of faces being touched or squished like this and a sneeze.  It always intrigues me.  

[Soda]

I love how her eyes get all big and teary after she is done.  That moment of pause between the sneeze and talking is classic too.   Very cute couple here. 

[Death Blossom]

Alright, just wanted to be sure.

Ah, well, squicked is a TvTrope. It usually is used to describe something icky or gross. So I use it as a verb. Face squishing is a thing people like during sneezing it seems, I know Rainy did something similar with a Lyra comic he did. It does make for cute faces.

[Grapefoot]

This is lovely!  Oh my!  What a cute comic and funny scenario!  Poor Henry!  Henry just wanted a kiss, is that too much to ask for? 

Based on the set up though, it seems they were both gonna have kissy kissy play time.  He had his hooves in a very lovey spot for some endearing kisses, and based on her reaction, she wanted to kiss too.  It just snuck up on her. 

[Silverwing]

APD, this is awesome.  I love it when you do comics! 

[1234]

That was so f%#$ing cute.

Poor Henry.

[NostradamusTheSeer]

And it's so something that could happen.  The perils of a sneeze (or any body function or noise, really ) during an intimate moment. An understanding partner will take it in stride (no Pony pun intended).

[Miggs]

RIP Henry

Sneezeblocked

I bet they were dating too.
That's a cute character btw! Her giant bow is adorbs!

THIS is an adorbs pic!

[MasterXtreme]

They come off as young to me.  But they are both very cute in design.  They are probably in the early phases of dating maybe?   It's a cute little comic here and very nicely drawn, with bright, happy colors. The expressions won me over too.  Poor Henry.  If he is going to stay with her, he might have to get used to that. 

[Silverwing]

I just noticed the snot string in panel two, then it breaks apart in panel three!  I love little details like that, and how the spray on poor Henry actually moved down his face between the two panels.  Nice generic pone designs.  The bow is pretty cool, and giving you props for not following the norm of making a female pone pink, just because she is female.  You even gave her dark blue areas. 

[RainySunshine]

This is a win.  Just start stamping WIN all over this pic.    Very cute. 

[Darrin]

I just noticed the snot string in panel two, then it breaks apart in panel three!  I love little details like that, and how the spray on poor Henry actually moved down his face between the two panels.  Nice generic pone designs.  The bow is pretty cool, and giving you props for not following the norm of making a female pone pink, just because she is female.  You even gave her dark blue areas.

I loved that too!   I love it when there are minor details like that.