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« on: 2024-01-27 14:53:44 »

so uh
i made another



alsoooo: click the pic for hi-res!
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« Reply #1 on: 2024-01-27 16:31:22 »

Oh my gosh! I LOVE HER NOSE! The pre-sneeze expression and the finger under the nose post sneeze is awesome! Really awesome job on this!!

I love how we as the player just say nothing as she is about to sneeze.  How cool would it be if character's in games like this randomly sneeze while waiting for us to respond or something?  That would be neat. ;D
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« Reply #2 on: 2024-01-27 16:32:17 »

How her nostrils flare to their widest extent in panel four just before she sneezes is a great touch of detail.
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« Reply #3 on: 2024-01-27 16:45:18 »

You're a very talented artist and there isn't a single piece of art you've posted so far I haven't enjoyed examining.  Really nice comic.  This one had a ton of work put into it.
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« Reply #4 on: 2024-01-27 18:04:00 »

Hahaha! This is awesome! Look at her excellent build up.  Some of the best I've seen for sure! You got a heck of a talent and I am LOVING what you post. This is probably my absolute favorite! I also noticed how her nostril's changed size as they flared leading up to the sneeze. What a beautiful nose and I love her eyes too. Great job on this!

My next step as the player would be to bring her MORE of those plants. ;D  See what happens.
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« Reply #5 on: 2024-01-27 18:23:43 »

My next step as the player would be to bring her MORE of those plants. ;D  See what happens.

giv her a spacecat ;3
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« Reply #6 on: 2024-01-27 20:29:38 »

I love this! I am not sure if I am supposed to respond here but I am choosing the option, "[Flirt] That . . . Was adorable."  What happens next? ;)
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« Reply #7 on: 2024-01-27 22:12:10 »

I do this option as well!!!  [excited]

"[Flirt] That . . . Was adorable." 

Awesome work on this comic. Extremely detailed and I love watching her expressions as she goes through the stages of a sneeze. Panel two is adorable how her nostrils flare and expand ever so slightly over the first panel. There is ever so slight a curl to her nostril.  Then how her nose turns up in panel three and her nostrils get wider again in four. I love how she sneezes into her arm this time, but I would love to see her sneeze openly in front of the player and see how she responds. That was great!!  ^b- Cute nose wrinkle too.
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« Reply #8 on: 2024-01-28 05:43:59 »

Love this. The player interface is really clever.
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« Reply #9 on: 2024-01-28 17:05:07 »

Fabulous! I have to agree with Sniffles if that option is actually meant for us to choose. :D I could see this continuing because it's so good. You have another hit on your hands. I love Raine's breakdown of the panels as she pointed out everything I would have noticed.
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« Reply #10 on: 2024-01-30 12:33:04 »

Awesome comic! I love her expressions and how you draw/colored this.  Looks really nice. That second panel glazed over, "i need to sneeze" look is amazing.

I could see her being someone allergic or sensitive to harsh and overpowering smells.  Like a strong cologne.
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« Reply #11 on: 2024-01-31 12:32:41 »

A very fine piece of comic work! I love her expressions and I can't help but be attracted to her eyes and nose. She is pretty. I choose the final option (to flirt).
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« Reply #12 on: 2024-02-02 11:58:11 »

This really turned out great! Fantastic work on the comic and I like the idea with the inspiration being a scene from the game. :D Superb!
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« Reply #13 on: 2024-02-02 23:41:25 »

This is incredible! Love this and her expressions. He smile is very cute too. :D How she has two fingers pointed, then curls them when the sneeze approaches her is a great touch.
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« Reply #14 on: 2024-02-04 18:04:57 »

How she has two fingers pointed, then curls them when the sneeze approaches her is a great touch.

I can go back over and over and find something new each time I didn't notice the first time.  Great catch there.  That really is a nice little addition to the comic. It ads to her personality and who she is.  A cute sneezy gal.
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