This is a surprise! Thank you so much for taking time to share this idea you did in the past here on PSF! =)
I did not know you drew different female characters. She has a cool and pretty design at the same time! The face expressions are great, but it is the story that got my attention. The build up. You write the need, the urge, the growing anticipation, and the urgency of the situation in a great way!
I love stories like this! *deep blush*