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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Umeko on 2017-07-28 20:26:45
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So...
I wrote a drabble a while back called "Chains and Wounds" for a very long time I've been wanting to turn this into a manga/comic.
And so...
It has began :D
I'll be posting pages in this topic here to keep them in one place ^^
This is a SFW story just a small warning for a little blood and a little violence is all! :3
Enjoy!
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Very artistically done. I like how her eyes are colored and everything else is black and white. Nicely done.
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Very artistically done. I like how her eyes are colored and everything else is black and white. Nicely done.
Yeah this will mostly be monochrome except for eyes and maybe blood
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Very nice shading and shimmer on her hair too so far. Really good.
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An ulvbear is not something you want to witness. Great work.
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Lovely so far such a good comic brilliant job on this so far.
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Lovely so far such a good comic brilliant job on this so far.
Thank you so much :D The last page there took forever to get done, spent an hour getting Skyiler's pose right
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You are moving along fast. Getting intense.
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You are moving along fast. Getting intense.
Thank you ^^ Gonna take tomorrow to recharge and then I'll continue, it won't be as intense in the next ones :3
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Lovely so far such a good comic brilliant job on this so far.
Thank you so much :D The last page there took forever to get done, spent an hour getting Skyiler's pose right
well these are so worth it they are just so good.
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Lovely so far such a good comic brilliant job on this so far.
Thank you so much :D The last page there took forever to get done, spent an hour getting Skyiler's pose right
well these are so worth it they are just so good.
Aww you're so nice <3
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It is clear you have worked hard on this project and I'm happy that you did these! It is a lot more than I thought you would do. When you mentioned to me drawing something I thought you were only going to do a sketch or two, but wow these pages really help show what you were imagining as you wrote this drabble :D
When I have time I'll comment on each page individually. =) There's a lot of pages to comment on.
What I can say now though is each page has something I enjoy about it and there are details on each individual page I can see =) I like these pages!
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It is clear you have worked hard on this project and I'm happy that you did these! It is a lot more than I thought you would do. When you mentioned to me drawing something I thought you were only going to do a sketch or two, but wow these pages really help show what you were imagining as you wrote this drabble :D
When I have time I'll comment on each page individually. =) There's a lot of pages to comment on.
What I can say now though is each page has something I enjoy about it and there are details on each individual page I can see =) I like these pages!
Thank you so much snake ^^ yeah these are just 13 pages, there are more coming
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How are you making this so fast? Every time I check, there are like eight new pages! Lol! This is terrific.
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How are you making this so fast? Every time I check, there are like eight new pages! Lol! This is terrific.
Fullspeed ahead XD then take a pitstop to breathe refuel and keep going lol
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Quite dramatic actually and I can tell well cared for. Really stunning work on this series. Makes me think of it as a graphic novel, but with larger pictures.
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Quite dramatic actually and I can tell well cared for. Really stunning work on this series. Makes me think of it as a graphic novel, but with larger pictures.
Thank you so much ^^ I'll get to the next pages soon, just recharging :3
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Teaser for page 15
Page 14 is made just need to fix things
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You are pumping these out so fast! Looks stunning.
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I love her eyes. Wondering where this will go next. :)
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I love her eyes. Wondering where this will go next. :)
Thank you :D
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I have really enjoyed watching this progress. Your artwork varies from gorgeous, to bleedingly gorgeous! ;) It is actually quite deep and intense what is happening here.
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I have really enjoyed watching this progress. Your artwork varies from gorgeous, to bleedingly gorgeous! ;) It is actually quite deep and intense what is happening here.
Thank you so much ^^ It won't be that intense in the next pages ^^
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These are fantastic really enjoying this.
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These are fantastic really enjoying this.
Thank you <3
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I'm always amazed by how much bigger he is. Great work.
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Good progression on this whole series. I know it is a lot of work, and the effort you put into each picture shows.
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Hurt is an understatement.
Great work.
Everyone, just right click the image and you can see it full sized.
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Hurt is an understatement.
Great work.
Everyone, just right click the image and you can see it full sized.
Thank you Darrin ^^
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Ouch, ouch! Looks so painful. Good job.
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Ouch, ouch! Looks so painful. Good job.
Thank you Rain ^^
I'm currently sketching up more pages, it'll take a while before the next page is uploaded sorry for keeping you waiting :o
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Nice work on this whole series so far. It is a lot of work I can tell and truly a labor of love. Intensive love.
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Nice work on this whole series so far. It is a lot of work I can tell and truly a labor of love. Intensive love.
Thank you so much ^^
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Again, a very good update.
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I suffered a bit at the wounds! That would hurt so much! I hope everything will be okay. :-\
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Really well drawn. Great shading too. Really nice!
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Really well drawn. Great shading too. Really nice!
Working with mostly greyscale *blacks whites greys* it let's you practice your shading :3
Thank you ^^
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It does look really good. Is there a way to see the image bigger?
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It does look really good. Is there a way to see the image bigger?
Right click the image - Open in a new window or tab :3
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I really love your work and this piece is absolutely good. :)
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I really love your work and this piece is absolutely good. :)
Awwwww *Blush* I try
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Lots of detail and heart put into this. A passion of love for sure.
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Lots of detail and heart put into this. A passion of love for sure.
Awww stop it you *Blush*
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Page 20 is really nice. Heck, all of this is a lot of work and very detailed.
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Ooh two pages that look superb so nicely done love them.
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Page 20 is really nice. Heck, all of this is a lot of work and very detailed.
Thank you ^^ Can't believe I've made 20 pages already and I'm not even halfway through the story X3
Ooh two pages that look superb so nicely done love them.
Thank you as always <3
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Dang, really good stuff here. I like the monochrome/black and white with only certain colors appearing. Really brings out the gore of course, but it seems to add intensity to the wounds.
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It hurts me to look sometimes because I get a bit squeamish. I hate seeing others in deep pain. I hope she helps him out and he can trust her more here without her getting hurt. :3
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Dang, really good stuff here. I like the monochrome/black and white with only certain colors appearing. Really brings out the gore of course, but it seems to add intensity to the wounds.
Thank you, yeah I like working with monochrome ^^ It helps getting better at shading :3
It hurts me to look sometimes because I get a bit squeamish. I hate seeing others in deep pain. I hope she helps him out and he can trust her more here without her getting hurt. :3
It won't be as much blood anymore after this ^^ She's gonna clean his wounds so it'll be easier for people after that :3
Next page is being worked on
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Really well done on these last several pages. A comic of artistry really.
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Next page is lovely. :)
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That is an incredibly powerful sneeze! Lots of force and strength!
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That is an incredibly powerful sneeze! Lots of force and strength!
And yet that one is not as strong as they can get :P
You should see the other stuff with this character :3Next page is lovely. :)
Thank you! :D
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Okay, thats a pretty sexy sneeze right there, Umeko. I loved that. :) Lots of power. :) Almost seemed WILD, like how I would picture a feral sneeze. ;D
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Okay, thats a pretty sexy sneeze right there, Umeko. I loved that. :) Lots of power. :) Almost seemed WILD, like how I would picture a feral sneeze. ;D
Thank you ^-^
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Ouch, ouch, ouch, ouch! *Squeezes eyes shut.*
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Oooh! Looks so painful. Those are big wounds.
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Aww this was sweet that she helped nice pages.
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"...and not eating me." It turned a tender and sweet moment, into a made me giggle at her flippant response! :) Really well drawn.
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The creature watched as she was walking away, looked down at the cleaned wounds and thought for a moment, then it got up.
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Dang, I didn't realize how close some of those wounds were to vital arteries. Neck and wrist. He's lucky honestly.
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Dang, I didn't realize how close some of those wounds were to vital arteries. Neck and wrist. He's lucky honestly.
Yes luckily they weren't that deep. He's still in a lot of pain tho as you can see in the last panel where he's getting up
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I can feel the raw emotion and pain in this. The environment adds to the effect with the rain and the colors too.
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I wanted to show a little layout of all the pages and upcoming ones.
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Closing in on 40 and I'm on the second to last page in the story!
I have already decided that I'll do the sequel to this story too so yeah :D
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^ Impressive work on the latest page too, but seeing all those pages listed out there makes it seem like so much more! What program do you use? I know you've answered this, but I forgot.
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^ Impressive work on the latest page too, but seeing all those pages listed out there makes it seem like so much more! What program do you use? I know you've answered this, but I forgot.
Updated screenshot, total tally of pages is 44 *45 with a cover art that I'll make later*
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I use Manga Studio :3
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Thank you! Looking good.
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Action scene sequence! I can imagine her running through the woods with something chasing her! Nice set up!
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Love what you did with the last scene there. Very artistic comic section here.
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Action scene sequence! I can imagine her running through the woods with something chasing her! Nice set up!
Nah she's walking, but he is running so it's from his perspective
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Very cool latest page!
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Very cool latest page!
Thank you :D
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Nice update!
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Nice update!
Thank you :D
More than half way through now.
There are 44 pages in total *45 with the cover art I'll make for it later*
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Really good he certainly looks better.
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Really good he certainly looks better.
It's only a mask, he is in a lot of pain.
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*Yay he finally speaks*
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Wow, someone had a busy day, lol
I have a question. You add the text in after drawing the pictures. Does it bug you to have the text bubbles block the art you've drawn or do you try to plan ahead so it doesn't cover much?
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Wow, someone had a busy day, lol
I have a question. You add the text in after drawing the pictures. Does it bug you to have the text bubbles block the art you've drawn or do you try to plan ahead so it doesn't cover much?
I actually sketch the bubbles in from the beginning so I know not to put anything too important in that area :3 then I work around it.
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*No he's not blushing he's getting sick. You can imagine the slight stuffy talk and sniffling*
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Lovely pages good work on them.
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It's great seeing an origins story like this.
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It's great seeing an origins story like this.
Thank you :3 you can read the story in my drabble thread :3
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Super work on those pages really like the detail and color. :)
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This comic is phenomenal! The prince character is very attractive. :D
Please continue, we love this! Your art is gorgeous.
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This comic is phenomenal! The prince character is very attractive. :D
Please continue, we love this! Your art is gorgeous.
Awww thank you! That makes me so happy to hear <3
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Really good so far.
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Lovely work as always really love them. :)
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Lovely work as always really love them. :)
Thank you :D
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Aww so cute and very nicely done.
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Aww so cute and very nicely done.
Thank you :D
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Fine job.
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Fine job.
Thank you so much ^^
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*This page shows how fluffy Skyiler really is XD*
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Lightening crack was cool. Good job.
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Lightening crack was cool. Good job.
Thank you ^^ I like working with lightning it's fun
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Very fluffy indeed and such beautiful work on this love it.
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Very fluffy indeed and such beautiful work on this love it.
Thank you ^-^ Not many pages left now
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Nicely done indeed! Lots of detail.
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Great job, Umeko!
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Good job, Umeko. Shake off that water! I am going to guess it leads to a sneeze. ;)
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Five pages to go!
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I can't believe it. All this progress. I remember when you first started this, it seemed like an impossible feat! Now look at you! Only five pages to go! This will be an awesome accomplishment with great artistry to go with it, Umeko!
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This is such great work as always you do such brilliant work on this the shading and colour are perfect. :)
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I can't believe it. All this progress. I remember when you first started this, it seemed like an impossible feat! Now look at you! Only five pages to go! This will be an awesome accomplishment with great artistry to go with it, Umeko!
It's been quite the journey ^-^ I feel like I've improved on my comic making, I even got commissioned for a comic on FA :3
I already got the sequel planned and will start sketching it out very soonThis is such great work as always you do such brilliant work on this the shading and colour are perfect. :)
Thank you so much for your support Umberon ^^ Makes me happy
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Really awesome, Umeko! You can even see improvements from the beginning till now! This was quite the endeavor.
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Nice. I like how the imagery just works nicely.
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Can't wait!
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The last page doesnt open for me, Umeko.
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It does for me.
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Nice, nice.
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Nice.
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Nice.
Thank you
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Good angles as usual. Moody work.
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Good one on this. So close!
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Good one on this. So close!
I know right ;o; it's gonna be so bitter sweet when I upload the last page *Last page being the cover art XD*
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I really enjoy how this page turned out ^^ You have a very nice way of showing different close up views with your characters. Skyiler has a great face but it is great how Aiyame looks on this page. Nice tones of background color!
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I really enjoy how this page turned out ^^ You have a very nice way of showing different close up views with your characters. Skyiler has a great face but it is great how Aiyame looks on this page. Nice tones of background color!
Thank you Snake *Hugs* Can't believe this comic is almost done, what a journey it has been.
Good angles as usual. Moody work.
Thank you! :D
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Nice shading and cinematics.
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Nice work. I can't believe it's almost done!!! :'(
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Nice work. I can't believe it's almost done!!! :'(
I know right D: It's going to be so bitter sweet when I upload the last page and the cover art D:
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How many more pages are there left?
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How many more pages are there left?
2 *3 with the cover art*
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It's done! It's finally done!
Over the course of 9 months it turned into a 46 page comic o.o
I'm also updating the front page :3 Be sure to go and look
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*Stands up in the audience and starts clapping, then the rest of the audience claps.*
You just did an incredible journey with this, Umeko. I tip my hat to you. Good work!
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*Stands up in the audience and starts clapping, then the rest of the audience claps.*
You just did an incredible journey with this, Umeko. I tip my hat to you. Good work!
Thank you so much X ^-^ it was so much fun!
I'm going to rest up a little and practice some feral poses and such and then I'll get started on the sequel :3
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Really good job, Umeko.
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Really good job, Umeko.
Thank you! :D
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Congrats on finishing this endeavor! Take a long and earned break. Nice story and good visuals.
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Congrats on finishing this endeavor! Take a long and earned break. Nice story and good visuals.
Heh that break lasted... 1 day XD I already got the cover art for the sequel sketched up, got the 1st page done and sketched up the second lol.
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Congrats on finishing this work of art! There was so much heart put into this. Nicely done, Umeko. My few words can't express everything you've put into this.
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Congrats on finishing this work of art! There was so much heart put into this. Nicely done, Umeko. My few words can't express everything you've put into this.
Thank you so much! Yeah it was quite the journey