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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Blurr on 2016-06-13 14:44:04
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Some of you know this, others don't. But I have a tumblr dedicated to my six elemental OC ponies and I've been wanting to do something with it for a while. So I got in contact with our very own Silverwing and he and I are collaborating on a comic together. Page one is now up on tumblr.
Page 1 - http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/145876528232/our-story-begins-page-1-artwork-by-silverwing
Page 2 - http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/145936189012/our-story-begins-page-2-artwork-by-silverwing
Page 3 - http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/146159998967/our-story-begins-page-3-artwork-by-silverwing
Page 4 - http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/146437117342/our-story-begins-page-4-art-by-silverwing
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This looks great! :D
Can't wait for more!
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Oh boi, I sense dark and edgy backstory incoming.
My question is why didn't Twi ask them this like, when she first met them? Either way, cool art. Why Twilight be so nervous looking doh, she be afraid of fire pone?
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Oh boy! I wonder who this Silverwing nerd is? :D Cool start to the story!
Oh and to help PSF, if you want to "link" to "Silverwing" the artist, feel free to link it to this... for the artist.... http://psfforum.deviantart.com/gallery/57702160/Silverwing But if not, since a lot of it is fetishy, I am cool with that too.... actually we should rob ably chat via PM.
I just searched "PSFForum" online and it came up with Silverwing- PSFForum. Does that mean people search me enough for that to happen?
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This idea is a lot of fun! :D I think that there are a lot that could happen.
With searching PSF , which is a thing for a lot of companies apparently, not many people know to type in PSFForum specifically. I think those that do know of this forum know who you are Silverwing :) I would not worry about that. The same thing happened to me on another forum awhile ago XD Google does stuff sometimes. It's not a big thing.
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This will be an interesting read.
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Oh cool, had no idea this was happening.
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Page 2 will be posted as soon as I get home today
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http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/145936189012/our-story-begins-page-2-artwork-by-silverwing
Here's page 2!
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And we're soon gonna get to the meat of this dark and edgy backstory.
I'll have to save my video link for when the time comes.
Smol pone is smol.
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Niiice. :)
It was cute until "all hell broke loose". :P ;D
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My question is why didn't Twi ask them this like, when she first met them?... Why Twilight be so nervous looking doh, she be afraid of fire pone?
Well, he is the god of hellfire, after all. He is to be feared and respected.
So gems and freezing are considered elemental forces? But isn't freezing covered by wind (and and enemy of fire and water), and gems part of earth's domain? Have wars been fought over this? What about love, metal, and plasma, all of which have been cited as the "fifth element" by various sources? AND do these guys get a lot of "Captain Planet" jokes when they're out and about, like hanging at the food court or something?
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So gems and freezing are considered elemental forces?
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The purple pony's name is just Gem. Her element is plasma.
And not really freezing. More ice and snow in general which I know isn't a big difference.
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And then.... the Fire Nation attacked.
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Have the releases been successful so far? :)
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Not really. My blog isn't really known
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I thought the Elementals were well known! I see their stuff at various places.
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What, you meant all the art of them? Those are all commissions.
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What, you meant all the art of them? Those are all commissions.
O_O; Oh. I . . . totally knew that. :-[
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Haha, I remember bringing that up with Blurr. How people wouldn't realize they were commercials and think it's fanart. I'm sure plenty of other people have made the same mistake.
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Second page is leading up to some action!
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I never intended for my commissions to be misinterpreted as fanart. Whenever they were posted they would say right there in the description that I commissioned it. On every single one of them.
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Not Derpibooru though. And that's where a lot of people go to see pony.
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I saw them on derpibooru... that horrible festering fest of fungus.
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Well if people would click the sources.
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I do! I always try to give the original poster the views and support.
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Truth be told I don't really care if it gets noticed or not. I've just always wanted to have this story told and now through the magic of a sneeze fetish I found a great artist to work with.
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through the magic of a sneeze fetish I found a great artist to work with.
This line, right here. It makes me feel all warm inside. :D Ha ha ha!
No, that is great! You got a great artist! Just be warned, artists get busy, and while you may be frustrated on what they could possibly be doing, or whats taking so long, they do get it done. ;) I know first hand.
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Trust me dude. I'm the most patient guy on the face of the earth. I know he has a job do and I understand priorities
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Well if people would click the sources.
But that requires effort.
And sometimes the artists themselves post their art to Derpibooru. I know I do. So I don't care where I get the attention. But that's just me.
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It looks pretty good so far. I can tell he got more into the drawings by page two. :)
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Great start so far. :) I like it, Blurr. Good work by the artist.
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http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/146159998967/our-story-begins-page-3-artwork-by-silverwing
page 3
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Is it possible to put them on Derpibooru?
Never mind, it loaded. And oho boy, I've been waiting to whip this out. https://youtu.be/eCiFO7qV54E (http://)
Actually nix that, this one is more appropriate: Cuz I guess you totes got to nail in these guys are so evil they'd kill a child that poses no threat. For some reason their teeth amuse me, they have like their teeth sticking out when their mouths are closed or they have these kind of cartoony looking ones. Just something I noticed.
So Pyro runs out of the safety of his house to look for his mom? That's believable, he's a child and is scared out of his mind as people are dying left and right around him. But... Why was she outside when the fighting had gotten so close to the house? I can't tell if the previous comic was supposed to show Pyro waking up in the middle of the night, or if the fighting started in the morning.
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Strangely, neither Youtube link worked for me... hmmm.
NOOO! She did not just take an arrow to the knee for him!
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Well I linked "Crawling in my Crawl" then linked "How Could This Happen To Me?". Because edge.
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Yes it is the middle of the night.
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Ah. So why the hell was his mom not in the house? If she ran away, why didn't she take him with her?
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NO! Not his mom... :'(
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She was out running a few late night errands when the attack started.
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In. The middle of the night.
Yeaaaaah? No.
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Some things just shouldn't be done... ^^'
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What's wrong with that? Pyro came home from training late, her mother just got done selling flowers not long after he did and had to make a run by the market hoping the ponies running their stands hadn't gone home for the night.
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Yeah, makes more sense when you put it that way. :)
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Not really. The middle. Of the night. She thought stands would be open, in the middle of the night?
Late night is not the same as middle of the night. Also, again, how the hell do they not realize the fighting is getting close. It just feels full of holes.
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Okay....maybe I should tell you that it was only 9 PM for them
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That makes more sense. But like, if they're in a war zone, wouldn't there be a curfew? Or at least the citizens themselves be afraid to go outside?
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At this point, there wasn't any news of the war reaching the Ember Tribe.
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They didn't hear this shit getting closer? Looks like the evil overlords liked destroying and causing fires and shit.
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It was clear that war was declared by the Eneoji tribe but it was at first declared on the Aero Tribe. And those tribes are a distance away from each other so the Ember Tribe didn't let it bother them that much. Now the Eneoji tibe is expanding its battle to all the tribes and soon after this, all six tribes will be in a civil war with themselves. The Eneoji caused a spark, The rest of the tribes added onto it.
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What's the Enoji tribe? Is that Plasma tribe?
But that's interesting. Still don't explain how they didn't hear this shit getting closer, but whatever. I'll try to ignore that point.
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Yes the Eneoji tribe is the plasma tribe.
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So how many tribes are around them? Is this like Japan kind of?
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hold on a second.....
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1500 years before the Elements of Harmony defeated Nightmare Moon, the country of Alamante was founded by both ponies and zebras. Both races were granted powers of the elements of nature via a stray asteroid that fell off course from the centennial meteor shower. (as seen in Owls well that ends well) The years passed by and the ponies lived out their lives in their respective territories for each elemental trait and power. Each territory has their own culture and style. All of them though worship one of six elemental gods of an ancient pantheon. The fire movers of the Ember Tribe (Pyro's) pray to Agni. The ice movers of the Frost Tribe, (Cryo's) worship Skaldi. The plasma movers Eneoji Tribe (Gem's) pray to Cybelle. The water movers of the Hydro Tribe (Agua's) pray towards Poseidon. The wind movers of the Aero Tribe (Typhoon's) pray to Aeolus. And the earth movers of the Geo Tribe (Terra's) worship Gaia.
The years passed by and the country of Alamante seemed to thrive in peace. However close to the time Luna was nearing her escape from the moon, conflict started to rise. Territorial disputes were minor but the tribal chiefs were starting to get the thought in their minds that they were more powerful than the other tribes and the dominant element of the six deserved to rule not only over their respective tribal land, but ALL of Alamante. And this is when the war truly started. The only hope the country has now is six ponies who were born at separate times but they had two things in common.
One: They were born with their cutie marks already bestowed upon them.
Two: Those marks were the iconic symbols of the elements they reresented.
By having these cutie marks these ponies were destined for something great. But with a war coming, they have to find each other.
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Cool backstory. I'm gonna break it down a bit for more info, since I like discussion.
Is Alamante on the current landmass as Equestria or someplace else? Would they be effected by Equestria forming in the near future?
Are all six tribes warring at once or was one more aggressive then the others, and another maybe more peaceful?
Do you have the leaders of these tribes?
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Cool backstory, I like it. Only one thing feels unnessary to me and that's the whole being born with their cutie marks already. Like, just seems weird. Wouldn't it just be fine for them to have earned the mark with them doing something really mighty with their element, getting the special specific mark and then other ponies realizing that they're super special and giving them the training and stuff?
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I'll answer your question first, River. The idea is similar to Star Wars. When a baby was sensed by other jedi that it had the ability to use the force, the jedi would come for the child and train them right from birth into adulthood.
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And now for Rainberry.
Alamante is its own country east from Equestria separated by a large ocean. And no Equestria wouldn't be affected by them or vice versa.
All six tribes are at war with each other. The Eneoji tribe is by far the most vicious.
The leaders of the tribes I do have a few of them named.
Chief Niiharu is the brutal ruler of the Eneoji Tribe
Chief Tamaishi (Terra's father) is the ruler of the Geo Tribe.
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How do the Elementals meat Twilight? Do they travel to Equestria?
Very good comic so far. I wish it success.
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my six elements meet the elements of harmony in the fic that spawned this
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You got some backstory going here, Blurr. Nice job. :)
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You provided a lot of info.
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Thanks for answering my question, Blurr. :)
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no problem rainy. I've been working on this for five years. So I have a lot to say.
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Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere's page 4!
http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/146437117342/our-story-begins-page-4-art-by-silverwing
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Whoa. When that kid is triggered, he's triggered. :o
Nice new page. ;D
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Pretty sure that soldier iz DED. If not from the initial blast... there is like... fire growing around them. Lol! Great drawings by Silverwing!
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Pretty sure that soldier iz DED. If not from the initial blast... there is like... fire growing around them. Lol! Great drawings by Silverwing!
Soldier not dead. Just badly burnt.
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Oh, lol! Okay. So that wasn't Pyro's first kill?
I noticed it was a MARE soldier too. Just thought I'd point that out.
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That looks really good! Wow! It has a lot of detail and the characters look great. :) Cool story so far.
I would have planned a better time to upload it though personally. It will get no justice at 10pm at night. You need to think of the optimal time people on the west coast and east coast will view things. I would schedule a mid morning release. You can still do that.
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Pyro was trained to NOT kill. Incapacitate and bruise if need be but he was trained to not take a life.
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I would have planned a better time to upload it though personally. It will get no justice at 10pm at night. You need to think of the optimal time people on the west coast and east coast will view things. I would schedule a mid morning release. You can still do that.
Gonna have to agree. You will get no one looking at it at the time you posted it. Since you reblogged it in the morning too, I noticed it has gotten more notes. :D
But, BUT!!! This comic is shaping up really nicely. Good drawings and great story so far. Looks awesome.
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I reblogged it in the morning
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Yeah, i know. :D
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Hey, Blurr, you know what would be efficient for newcomers? If you also edited your first post and added each new page as they came out. That way people don't have to go through a bunch of pages just to find the next page, the first comment would be like an index. Anyway, onto this comic page.
>Kills a pony.
>No emotional response.
You know, contrary to popular belief, killing someone tends to f*ck you up for life. And even in movies, the stoic killers are people who've done this over and over again that they've become numb. Or, were stoic to begin with, and keep all their emotions inside. If this truly is Pyro's first time killing someone, even if it was to avenge his mom, he wouldn't not show emotion at killing another pony. He clearly shows complete rage when he attacks, and is bawling at the sight of his dying mother, but doesn't at all emote when he kills that soldier? Not even a horrified expression at what he just did? No? Even if the soldier just killed his mom, he still killed someone, he took someone's life. that in itself is a horribly traumatizing experience, especially for a child.
The art as usual is really good, the second panel and the panel where the soldier is shot with the fireball especially stand out to me. Just great expression, and body movement, respectively. Silverwing's style of drawing eyes really works here, big ol' expressive eyes.
A little odd the mom tells him to go on when she seems to just be shot in the belly, actually pretty close to the flank. She should still be able to walk, albeit super painfully. You know, as surprising as it may be, if you wanted her to not die instantly, a shot to the heart wouldn't have done that. Deer have been known to be shot in the heart with bullets and still be able to run away a few meters before collapsing. This is even true of people. So if she'd been shot in the chest, she still would have been able to give her last dying words telling Pyro to run away and leave her. Though, Bubba did get shot in the stomach area too and he couldn't walk, but then again, he had already lost a lot of blood and it was upper torso, so likely the liver was also hit. But whatever, I guess plot. Anyway, off topic.
That lack of death tag. I think I hear Tumblerina's "reeeing" in the distance because they've been triggered XD It greatly amuses me.
(This comment was supposed to be posted last night but Internet died.)
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Pyro was trained to NOT kill. Incapacitate and bruise if need be but he was trained to not take a life.
Well that makes my whole comment pointless. Though badly burnt can equal death. But hey? You know what would have been a good story? If in his rage he did kill that pony. And was horrified at it. It would then actually explain why he feels he's dangerous and why he tries not to show emotions as he might incorrectly think him feeling anything at all gets people killed.
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Pyro was trained to NOT kill. Incapacitate and bruise if need be but he was trained to not take a life.
Well that makes my whole comment pointless. Though badly burnt can equal death. But hey? You know what would have been a good story? If in his rage he did kill that pony. And was horrified at it. It would then actually explain why he feels he's dangerous and why he tries not to show emotions as he might incorrectly think him feeling anything at all gets people killed.
Just wait til the next couple of pages. :)
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Yeah but I know from what you've told me before that he decides to be emotionless because of the death of his mom or something. Which doesn't really make much sense. Just was saying it would make more sense if he decided to hold back his emotions because he realized his rage killed a pony. It would also show that he's somewhat flawed here. Despite his teachings, and morals, his rage made him snap. Instead he's kind of "perfect" by still being able to hold restraint despite being unbelievably shattered and enraged.
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There's more to it than just the death of his mother. Which will be explained later. Just trust me.
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Okey dens.
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Can't wait. It is entertaining.
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Alright. All four pages are on the front post.
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Nice work. We got to try and help you push this out for more people to enjoy, Blurr. :) I want to see your stuff do well too.
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Lol someone just asked Terra if she's ever met maud
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Hmm, would she have? Because doesn't your story take place in the first 2 seasons?
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She will eventually. XD And its post season 2
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But before Twilight becomes princess?
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yes. post season 2, pre season 3
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Kek.
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So I realize this has been dead for a while but the fanfic its based off of, I Finally updated it, after more than a year too.
https://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/1175858
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You're just in a writing mood lately, aren't you? ;D
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Bringing this back eh? I noticed it had a good sized following when you originally started it. Try to see if you can get some back. :)
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Another new chapter to this! The season 8 premiere sparked my brony flame again.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/15942/39/the-adventures-of-the-elementals/the-battle-of-ponyville-part-5
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Sweet!! :D
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Forgot this thread was even here...
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This comic is like a lost media art. It should be archived on Derpibooru, lol.
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Oh it is. Somewhere. Still though I look back at these fondly.
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These were really good. I forgot about this.