Ask the Six Elementals comic

[Captain Ridiculous]

It looks pretty good so far.  I can tell he got more into the drawings by page two.  

[Grapefoot]

Great start so far.   I like it, Blurr.  Good work by the artist. 

[Blurr]

http://askthesixelementals.tumblr.com/post/146159998967/our-story-begins-page-3-artwork-by-silverwing

page 3

[Death Blossom]

Is it possible to put them on Derpibooru?

Never mind, it loaded. And oho boy, I've been waiting to whip this out. https://youtu.be/eCiFO7qV54E
Actually nix that, this one is more appropriate:

Cuz I guess you totes got to nail in these guys are so evil they'd kill a child that poses no threat. For some reason their teeth amuse me, they have like their teeth sticking out when their mouths are closed or they have these kind of cartoony looking ones. Just something I noticed.

So Pyro runs out of the safety of his house to look for his mom? That's believable, he's a child and is scared out of his mind as people are dying left and right around him. But... Why was she outside when the fighting had gotten so close to the house? I can't tell if the previous comic was supposed to show Pyro waking up in the middle of the night, or if the fighting started in the morning.

[Darrin]

Strangely, neither Youtube link worked for me... hmmm.

NOOO!  She did not just take an arrow to the knee for him!

[Death Blossom]

Well I linked "Crawling in my Crawl" then linked "How Could This Happen To Me?". Because edge.

[Blurr]

Yes it is the middle of the night.

[Death Blossom]

Ah. So why the hell was his mom not in the house? If she ran away, why didn't she take him with her?

[1234]

NO! Not his mom...

[Blurr]

She was out running a few late night errands when the attack started.

[Death Blossom]

In. The middle of the night.
Yeaaaaah? No.

[1234]

Some things just shouldn't be done... ^^'

[Blurr]

What's wrong with that? Pyro came home from training late, her mother just got done selling flowers not long after he did and had to make a run by the market hoping the ponies running their stands hadn't gone home for the night.

[1234]

Yeah, makes more sense when you put it that way.

[Death Blossom]

Not really. The middle. Of the night. She thought stands would be open, in the middle of the night?

Late night is not the same as middle of the night. Also, again, how the hell do they not realize the fighting is getting close. It just feels full of holes.