It was okay. I like the idea, but I think it needs a lot of work still, mainly in the voice acting. That was pretty atrocious and lifeless. But the dynamic is there. I can tell they have a certain dynamic for the two main character's and it can totally work, if they removed the stunted voice acting.
She's adorable! Such a cutie and such a sneezer! Wet a spitty sneeze! So it's canon now she has very wet sneezes. She should probably cover then, but I understand her hooves are holding the bottle. Wonderful sneeze. I love your drawing, Gray!