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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: sarahgirl on 2017-07-22 12:28:33

Title: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2017-07-22 12:28:33

I apologize for how unspeakably awful this looks. I bet even DEEcat98 could draw Pio better than me... -n-

This was drawn with my Pencil software. The text was added with MS Paint.

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Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: Soda on 2017-07-23 12:29:04

This is not awful, lol!  I think it's kinda cute. I like the 1st and 3rd panel the best.  Maybe work on the sneeze mouth in the second.  It doesn't suit him in my opinion.  But how you have the head lift in the first one is really cute and good.

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2017-07-23 15:30:35

Quote from: Soda on 2017-07-23 12:29:04

Maybe work on the sneeze mouth in the second.  It doesn't suit him in my opinion.

I'll work on that, but the main reason I made it look like that is because that was how they made his mouth look when he appeared to sneeze in Montagna dell Arca.

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2017-07-23 19:21:20

I agree with Soda.  The first panel was your strongest here.  It showed depth with movement upward.  Nicely done.

Maybe try to smooth out the 2nd panel's motion in future pics.  I'm sure you will find a nice balance. 

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2017-07-23 21:23:50

I think you did a nice job here.  I would just work on the "O" mouth, it seems to stick out too far or something.  But everything else was good.

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: FoxTail on 2017-07-23 21:24:39

Surprised not to see any nostril flare!  Would have been a great opportunity with this honker of a nose!  Cute drawing. 

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2017-07-23 23:33:40

Quote from: FoxTail on 2017-07-23 21:24:39

Surprised not to see any nostril flare!  Would have been a great opportunity with this honker of a nose!

I'm afraid Pio doesn't have any nostrils. Hence why I didn't add any nostril flaring.

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: Umbreon on 2017-07-24 00:46:26

Well regardless I found this okay keep it up.

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2017-07-24 19:37:11

You did a fine job, Sarah. :)

Title: Re: Pio Sneezes comic (M, Pet Pals)
Post by: Rainberry on 2017-07-24 19:38:33

Cute comic, Sarah.  I like the first panel a lot. :D