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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: 1234 on 2017-08-21 16:41:19
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Sometime ago (http://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4.msg94762#msg94762), Soda shared this pretty thing (https://derpibooru.org/1513315) on the Artwork Index. :)
This is the OC Dahlia Mist, who's half-batpony. There's a couple (https://derpibooru.org/1512669) other (https://derpibooru.org/1512673) pics of her on Derpibooru. She's a pretty cute OC, in my opinion. All those pics originally come from askamberfawn.tumblr.com (https://askamberfawn.tumblr.com). ;)
The current owner of this OC made her a (short-lived) ask blog on Tumblr: ask-dahlia-mist.tumblr.com (https://ask-dahlia-mist.tumblr.com) (Only now, in 2021, have I discovered this. This was in 2018. How did I miss that... XD)
ETA: They came back to make a few posts in November 2021.
Back to the sneeze thing, I decided to color it, and added my own touch to it. You'll understand once you see it. ^^' Unless, y'know, that five-letter word in the thread title gave you a hint.
I already shared it via PM with Soda and APD, and thought I'd share it here as well. DO NOT POST ANYWHERE ELSE! DX And be sure to comment about the original too. Let's be respectful to the original artist, eh? ;)
Here's the thing. (https://www.dropbox.com/s/n9vqe4zkmhkssnf)
Also, a version with just the colors (https://www.dropbox.com/s/dl2uhacwqc3ue0s).
And also, MY FIRST TOPIC! After almost 17 months on this forum. XDD
(EDIT July 20th, 2021)
What do we have here?... REVISION 2.0! (https://www.dropbox.com/s/hbpgldxbkpxb81l) ;D
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Really nice job on this edit! Dare I say, it looks better then the actual pic. ;) Both are stellar, but yours has some extra... OOOHMPH in it. Nice on closing the eyes too.
Seriously? This is your first forum topic? I find that hard to believe and crazy! Congrats!
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Closed the eyes cuz I wanted her reaction in the last panel to change from "OMG I skree'd when I sneezed" to "OMG I made a mess".
Thanks, MasterX. :)
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Ayyy this is pretty damn neat! I love the little quote at the end where she's asking for a tissue c:
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DUDE! Major props on this! It looks awesome! The artist did a wonderful job, great expressions, cute character. The edit is super, not only because I love the mess, but it all FLOWS so naturally. :) Really terrific job!
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I like the revised version better then the original! It is absolutely delicious that mess squirting out! :D Great drawing originally with awesome expressions, nice buildup and sneeze. :D
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Man, I don't know if I should feel good, hearing that I've done a great job on the edit, or if I should feel bad cuz people like it better than the original. ::) Pffhaha! XD
They're a great artist, yeah. They drew that sneeze so well. :D
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They did an awesome job! Let me make that super clear. For a non fetishist, they did almost everything we could possibly want! Spray is optional too, so in reality, they did everything they were supposed to do and excelled at it.
You just took it to a whole new level with the fetish touch.
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Yeah, that's kinda what I wanted to do. "Fetishize" it. There was nothing but a tiny bit of spray, and with such a beautiful pic, I had to fetishize it.
FETISHIZE EVERYTHING!
#wut
Srsly, thanks, APD. :)
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^ I think APD said it nicely. :) I like what he said.
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You did a wicked good job on that revision! If you were going to ask me which was the original, I probably wouldn't have known! You did a really nice job, 1234.
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A detail I wanna share: I solely used Microsoft Paint for the coloring and editing. ;)
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A detail I wanna share: I solely used Microsoft Paint for the coloring and editing. ;)
No, no. Hide that! Hide that! Don't take away the glory of us romanticizing how you did this!
Seriously though, it turned out really good, Numbers! I am really happy you shared this with us, because you did a fine job! The artist themselves did a stupendous job with this character, great expressions, etc. You upped it with a really nice revision. You added a personal touch to it, and it is really great. :)
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Hold the phones! You did this brilliant revision?! Dude, you did great! Really good job, Numbers! I like how you think, because I would have done the same thing... except mine would have looked like a three year old did it.
Might have somehow ended up looking like a elephant wearing a fire hydrant costume on a unicycle!
Seriously, great job and nice, tasteful changes.
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The original one is really good. They checked all the right boxes, except I would love a little more spray... hey, whats his, a revisited and updated picture? Wow! I'm blown away by artisanship and the amount of lovely juices! I like her eyes closed and wow! Who did this? Was it someone like APD... or some other artist? WHAT? Numbers did this? OUR NUMBERS?! No way!
YES WAY! You did a stellar job on this revisited revision. ;) I think you took a great comic and made it greater, and rarely do I say that about revisions! Love the coloring too. You and Blurr are great revisionists!
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Numbers, your greatness is showing again! Great job on these! Glad you brought this original one up too, because it needed some attention. You made this great!
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Bringing attention to the original, was another reason I made this. :))
Thanks, Darrin. :)
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The people before me left better comments. DON'T SINGLE ME OUT, MAN! ;D Now everyone is watching me...
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The people before me left better comments. DON'T SINGLE ME OUT, MAN! ;D Now everyone is watching me...
NOW we are watching you.
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*Looks at Darrin.*
(https://media.giphy.com/media/Q4ScVMm5oBP44/giphy.gif)
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I should thank everyone I haven't thanked yet. :)
Thank you, Soda, Silver, Wolfwood, Miggs, Rainy and Captain Ridiculous. :))
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I think both versions are darling, but the one that has a more personal tone to me is Number's adaption of it. :) It's so cute and adorkable! It has special meaning since this lil' guy posted it and took time to adapt it. :) It looks superb, Numbers. :D I...I saved it.
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You saved it too? Soda did. :D
Soda: "NUMBERS! DX"
Thanks, Smiles. ^-^
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I actually save a lot of the stuff you guys make because it's so special, and the memories we make. This deserves a special Numbers folder. :D I love it. :)
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These are certainly excellent and nice one numbers :)
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Thanks, Sparky. :)
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The original is really good, though I think I am a bit dumb because I don't get really why she sneezed or what was going on. ;D I'm daft I guess.
The revision is excellent! Numbers, you nailed it! :D High five my man! *High fives.* I really like that.... hehhh.... glorious mess. :) You did that very good and naughtily. >:D
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I think it was just a random sneeze? I had to look at it a few times to try understanding it, but I've got nothin!
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Heheh! Naughtily. XD
Thanks, Raine. :)
Sometimes, we forget that sneezes can happen randomly. ;p
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Yea, I didn't really get the joke the original was trying to say, but thats okay, because the pic itself was well done.
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To make it short, she's half bat-pony, and when she sneezed, she went "SKREEE", embarrassing herself. ;)
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Yeah, that part I understand. Maybe that was the joke? Cuz she's trying to be formal ish or something but she ends up letting out a SKREEE
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Ooooh, I get it. Skrreee, the sounds bats are supposed to make according to people. ;D Thanks, Numbers.
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The original is really nice. I don't really get the joke though? Screeee? That's how she sneezes? ;D HA! Ok. Really like the expressions and the build up, lacking in spray.
Now the edit was just the right amount of everything. The colors were nicely done too! I noticed some minor tweaks and changes to the expressions, but it looked for the better! Nice messy mess about to shoot out. Would love to see where it went and all. Really nice!
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I think it's the first panel that confuses people. She's actually answering an ask on the Tumblr linked in the OP. I guess the sneeze was pretty much unrelated to that answer, and was there for... fun.
It didn't shoot very far, pretty much all of it wound up on her muzzle. And her mane. XD
Thanks, Grape. :)
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I noticed how the smart artists called it a revision. The goofy artist (me) called it an edit. :P lol!
This topic for mucho attention!
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I'm goofy too, then. ;p
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I called it an edit too. I guess the REAL artists know how to make everything sound better in their line of work. ;D Lol! But edit isn't a friendly word. It is quite harsh. Revision softens it up and sounds nicer.
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Yeah. "Revision". Awright. :)
Lemme fix the title. ;p Done.
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Some people would be silly and get mad at an edit. Revision, they might not think of the connotations behind it. ;) Just a heads up.
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I know you are right too, Grape, ;D You're the wordsmith here.
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I guess so. Thanks for the warning. :))
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First art project by Numbers was an astounding hit. 43 posts in his topic of praise and glory! Good job!
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I guess so. Thanks for the warning. :))
You are welcome. :)
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I made a hit! ;D
I still don't feel like calling it my "art project", tho. I just took somebody else's stuff and added my own to it.
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You had to draw and color right?
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Color, yes. Draw, a little, but not too much.
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Color, yes. Draw, a little, but not too much.
Then you did an art project.
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Then it's an art project.
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AH! He beat me to it.
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By a whole second. ;)
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I understand what you guys mean. But still, I feel like, for example, it'd be like taking a photograph of the Mona Lisa, drawing a straw hat on her head, and calling it an "art project". If I did that, I'd kinda feel bad calling it so. :-\
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Well, if you ever want to show other stuff, you can do that too. :) To me, it was a great piece of art and another great piece of art.
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If you say so. :)
Maybe someday, I'll make stuff that's 100% "mine" for you guys to see. ^-^
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That would be a surprise indeed! Until then, we got this awesome pic, your smiley faces, and those cars you made. ;)
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Never forget the cars. ;)
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Back to the OC Dahlia Mist, according to the blog, she's actually an "adoptable". From what I've seen, I think it means you can literally buy her, and make her your property. :o
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Sort of like how you can BUY mail order brides! I'm sorry but that just sounds so wrong! Make money off a character that is based off the intellectual property of a company! Lol. How does that work?! :D
She is a cute design.
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I dunno. But after looking around the blog, that concept actually works.
She is cute. Just saying, I don't think anybody's taken her yet. ;)
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You.... thinking of taking her?
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Heck, no! I couldn't be able to. I mean, what would I do with her to equal such greatness from her original maker? She's pretty, I don't wanna do that to her. •_•
I don't have the means to buy her anyway. :-\
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Plus you could make your own better. ;)
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Please. ;p
Here, I found this (https://starshinebeast.deviantart.com/journal/What-are-adoptables-o-O-217749422) on DeviantArt. It explains the concept of "adoptables" more clearly.
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Aww she's cute! But yeah it's weird that her eyes are open when she sneezes. :P
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Sooo... there's a bit of a problem.
I felt a bit guilty about doing this behind the original artist's back, so I messaged them. I told them everything I told you guys (no reposting, commenting about the original, etc.) I told them what I'd changed (without getting too much into detail ^^'), and I also asked them if there was a problem with me sharing my revision with you guys.
Their reply:
[spoiler]Usually I don't mind if people add color to a sketch, but if you made some crass additions then I'd rather have it not be shared. More for the fact that I do not own the OC and it's a property of someone else.[/spoiler]
(According to that last part, she's already been sold, too.)
What do you guys think? Should I remove the link?...
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No. No need to remove. She never told you too. It's fine.
Great revisions here!
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No where in there did she say you had to remove it.
You did the right thing contacting them, but they won't remember or care in a bit. Leave it.
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There's a tiny problem...
I told them that I'd remove the link.
I was gonna do it, out of respect for them, but then I thought of how you guys seemed to enjoy it, and probably wouldn't've liked the link to be removed. So, I dunno anymore. :-\
I'm sorry. :(
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Why did you tell them that? lol? That is you own undoing. ;D You can do what you said, but they will never be here anyways. I still wouldn't worry about it. They didn't seem to care much. It is your own conscious tearing yourself apart here, my friend.
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I know... still, I didn't wanna cause us any trouble, so I told them that if I'd remove it if they didn't like it, and when they said it was the case, it sorta posed a dilemma.
I know there's chances they won't come here, but still. They don't like the fact that it's being shared, and...
Am I rambling? ^^'
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You are rambling and making an issue over nothing, yes. ;)
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Well, if you guys think it should stay, I guess it'll stay. ::)
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I will throw a wrench in everything though.
You should do what you feel is right. ;D Lol! <--See how unhelpful I am! ;D
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AAARGH! Silver! No! Quiet! Or else, duct tape! I'm not joking! I am. :)
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I really could use a new duct tape tie.
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The original is very nice. I really like the sneeze, but why are her eyes open when she sneezes?! That bugs me! Great nostrils and sneezy faces though. I didn't get to see the other one because it didn't open for me?
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EDIT: I figured it out, nvm.
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I'd say it's because of her "skree"-ing, but come to think of it, that's no reason. Either way, the artist did a great job. I started following them. ;)
Did I do a good job? ^^'
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No you didn't do a good job.
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Whoops. ^^;
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Because you did an excellent job! You, in my humble opinion, made this picture far better then I could have done! It is now very in line with my fetishy likes! Such a great revision to this! Nice work on this excellent piece!
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Did I do a good job? ^^'
No you didn't do a good job.
Cold as ice. ;D
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Dang it, I was aiming for just "good". :P
Pffhaha, thanks, Kiwi. :D
Sorry I had to ask. I just want to hear the most opinions possible before I can officially proclaim that I made something good. ;)
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I can officially proclaim that I made something good. ;)
You didn't make something good! You made something excellent!
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Okay! Okay! I MADE SOMETHING EXCELLENT! XD
"You're so modest."
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Kiwi knows what she's talking about.
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Another version. (https://www.dropbox.com/s/dl2uhacwqc3ue0s) No mess, just the colors.
(Added to OP.)
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Well look at you! :D Getting all excited and doing more!
At first I didn't think I would like it without mess, but now I get to see those lovely nostrils! Really nice.
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The shades I used are a tiny bit different cuz I had to color it all over again. ^^'
I think it's the nostrils that finally pushed me to make that other revision... XD
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Those nostrils are too awesome to ignore. They are really good. This is just a great sneezy drawing to begin with. Nice new version.
But I love the mucus and spray from the other version too.
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Nice new revision!
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Why do you make it so hard to have a favorite? Can I like them all equally? :D
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Your call, man. ;p
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You can wrapped them both up in your arms and say they are both your fav... unless you don't want her snot on your back and shoulders.
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Get that mess on my for this circumstance! It's hot mess!
*Rimshot*
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Anything new..... Numbers?
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Nope.
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I loved these. So glad I am seeing these again. :)
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I couldn't sleep tonight. :')
I looked at this thing I did in 2017.
I was like, "you know, this is fine and all.. but what if I redid this?"
And by that, I meant, redo everything I had originally added... and add a little more. Nothing NSFW though.
BOY, I went to town with this. Naw, actually, I never left the house... and I don't see myself waving this around... :{
I tried doing things a little bit differently, maybe make it a bit more... tasteful, than last time? I dunno how to put this. :P
Anywho, I hope you enjoy revision #2. I'd like to remind again, this is not my artwork. I only made some small edits to the original comic. Please do not repost this anywhere. Any needed information is given in the OP. ;)
Here it is. (https://www.dropbox.com/s/hbpgldxbkpxb81l)
I hope the mess isn't too hard to see. If it is, tell me and I'll gladly edit this some more. Hope you like it. :)
Bonus: whoever replies first gets to make reply #100! Ain't that a freakin' achievement? 8)
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Very expressive faces ;D.
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I checked out the new and the old side-by-side and there are some good changes. I honestly enjoy them both but I also like the new revisions you made. They'd be good to have together. :D You can't choose just one. You did well at closing her eyes too and the extra nostril sneezy good-ness!
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Numbers!!! :D My dude! :D This is a nice update! A great update actually! I love it! :D :D Very nice work on it.
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Thanks, fellas. :) I'm sorry about my all too frequent and extended periods of silence... I figured I might as well give you guys something for once. I'm glad you guys like it. ^-^
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Wonderful! I love the big sneezy nostrils!! ^-^ Great job, Numbers, thanks for sharing! ^b-
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Nicely done, Numbers. I'd say it's a complimentary revision because they are both good. I can't say one is better than the other.
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Great work! It's really good! ^b-
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Thanks, everyone. ^^
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I like it a lot. Both are quite good.
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Nice revision, Numbers. :D I like it.
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Great revision here, Numbers. Whenever I see your name, I play that Numbers Inc intro you made a long time ago. ;D I love that still.
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I have to agree with everyone. This is a nice addition to the original. Two great versions.