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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: FoxTail on 2017-12-02 15:19:38

Title: Italy / France Pone Sneeze (F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2017-12-02 15:19:38
It is a comic showing two female ponies, one represents Italy and the other represents France.  France sneezes due to Italy's fur I think.

While it is nicely drawn, it is really hard to understand and see what is going on because of the artists color choices and outlines.  This is a perfect example of an artist still learning what colors they should and shouldn't use.

None the less, it's a sneeze and I hope you enjoy it.

Comic Link Deviant Art (https://vanillaswirl6.deviantart.com/art/Small-Comic-Italian-French-Sneezes-717994863)

Derpibooru (https://derpibooru.org/1598644?q=sneezing)
Title: Re: Italy / France Pone Sneeze (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2017-12-02 15:43:48
That is a shame, you are right.  I can't even tell what is happening here because of their outline choices and totally over the top OC design.  :-\ 

Title: Re: Italy / France Pone Sneeze (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2017-12-02 17:40:09
They need to learn some points in artistry for sure in terms of contrasts, colors, and what not.  Can't rip on the drawing style as that is their own, but you can rip on construction methods. 
Title: Re: Italy / France Pone Sneeze (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2017-12-02 23:11:58
Thank you for sharing.  :)  It is nice to see a new sneeze piece to me! 
Title: Re: Italy / France Pone Sneeze (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2017-12-03 12:23:33
Thanks for finding.  Any sneeze pic has something to get out of it. :)
Title: Re: Italy / France Pone Sneeze (F)
Post by: TheBeesSneeze on 2017-12-05 13:38:13
A lot of conflicting colors going on there with how similar they are in shape and white main coats.  But nonetheless, a sneeze.  Thank you for finding and sharing with us.