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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: sarahgirl on 2017-12-25 19:44:22

Title: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2017-12-25 19:44:22

This was inspired by that one scene from Putt-Putt Saves the Zoo :P

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Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: Darrin on 2017-12-25 23:50:53

The "sneeze stopper" becomes the sneezer!  I always find these scenarios fun.  Also good work on this really long comic with lots of different actions, movements, expressions, and color. :)

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2017-12-26 16:35:23

Nice long comic, Sarah. 

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: ppl16 on 2017-12-26 18:30:33

Try to work on making your lines smoother. Maybe try adding some shading? And perhaps draw their full bodies instead of long necks with heads? ^^

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2017-12-26 19:54:50

Quote from: ppl16 on 2017-12-26 18:30:33

Try to work on making your lines smoother. Maybe try adding some shading? And perhaps draw their full bodies instead of long necks with heads? ^^

I don't actually know how to shade it in a way that looks good. ^^;

And I could draw their full bodies, but I didn't have enough space and I didn't want to risk breaking the lines that separate each panel from one another ^^;

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2017-12-26 21:55:48

Here's a tip too.  It is best to decide how many panels you want to have, then draw the panels FIRST before you draw the pictures.  It will help you control your sizes.

I saw some improvement with varied expressions and movements though!  Thanks for sharing, Hun!

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: ppl16 on 2017-12-27 06:15:11

Quote from: sarahgirl on 2017-12-26 19:54:50

Quote from: ppl16 on 2017-12-26 18:30:33

Try to work on making your lines smoother. Maybe try adding some shading? And perhaps draw their full bodies instead of long necks with heads? ^^

I don't actually know how to shade it in a way that looks good. ^^;

And I could draw their full bodies, but I didn't have enough space and I didn't want to risk breaking the lines that separate each panel from one another ^^;

Also, maybe try looking at pictures of cats to improve your anatomy-- especially the leg size and head shape. Just a few tips.

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: Erudork on 2017-12-27 10:00:38

Awww, cute! I love that scene from Putt-Putt. :D Thanks for sharing! I like how Dark holds onto the other cat while the snow is crashing down.

Edit: the nostalgia got to me so I found a walkthrough of the game and found the part where the avalanche happens. The time is around 8:53. I love Pep's little nose twitch -- it's a shame he didn't sneeze!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cnFViTQZIQ

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: Silverwing on 2017-12-27 16:33:16

I've always liked situations like this though!  So that is a bonus to me.  Fun comic here, Sarah!  Nicely done and it makes me think of the holidays simply because of the snow and their scarfs. 

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2017-12-27 17:06:15

Quote from: Erudi on 2017-12-27 10:00:38

Thanks for sharing! I like how Dark holds onto the other cat while the snow is crashing down.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cnFViTQZIQ

By the way, the other cat is named Light. So together, they're Light and Dark.

Title: Re: Cats and an Avalanche comic (M, cat)
Post by: Umbreon on 2017-12-28 08:46:42

Great job on this fun comic thanks for sharing. :D