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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Rainberry on 2018-01-25 23:44:20

Title: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2018-01-25 23:44:20

Possibly leading into Twilight getting sick, possibly not, but it is still a Twilight sneeze!  Drawn by EStories.

I don't follow this comic, and had never heard of it before.  But I might follow up to see if Twilight does indeed catch a cold. Anyone follow this and want to shed some light on it?

DeviantArt (https://estories.deviantart.com/art/ES-A-pple-ffection-046-727288002)

Derpibooru (https://derpibooru.org/1639719?q=%22comic%3Aa%28pple%29ffection%22)

(https://i.imgur.com/UheUpAW.jpg) (https://estories.deviantart.com/art/ES-A-pple-ffection-046-727288002)

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2018-01-25 23:56:23

Nice.

Just a base vector with some altercations, so.... meh.

But still interesting.  Hope she catches a cold for some more sneezes. :)

Never heard of the series before.  Horrible name.

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-01-25 23:58:11

Cute, show style sneeze.

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2018-01-26 00:12:04

Very basic.

Never heard of the comic before but based on the name, I think it's Applejack related.  It doesn't have a wikia page so thats about all I got.

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2018-01-26 10:01:18

Always good to see a sneeze in a comic. :)

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2018-01-26 16:50:27

Vector work is nice.

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-01-27 11:34:59

Here is the full sneeze vector now released.

IMAGE (https://estories.deviantart.com/art/Vector-Twilight-Sparkle-25-727783534) (F)

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2018-01-27 20:28:38

Thats nice. 

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2018-01-27 20:41:36

If there was some actual spray to see she is sneezing, it would be better.  Nothing other then the text lets me know she is sneezing.

Title: Re: A(pple)ffection Sneeze (Twi - F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2018-01-30 16:29:58

Quote from: FoxTail on 2018-01-27 20:41:36

If there was some actual spray to see she is sneezing, it would be better.  Nothing other then the text lets me know she is sneezing.

I agree with that.  It needs some motions or something to show it as a sneeze.  A few specs of spit or something.  Even just lines of motion.