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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Silverwing on 2016-02-12 16:56:23
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Workout Series: Trixie (F)
Welcome to my mini-series called, The Workout Series. We follow various MLP characters in EQG form doing exercise in various forms.
This series was to teach me to better draw the human form and shape. I know it will not appeal to everyone, but that is how life is. I even took the extra time to do what I dislike doing, coloring. I then upped that by slapping on some light shading. I wanted to have a more complete looks instead of just sketch all the time. There are still hints of sketch on these though, which I don't mind leaving behind. They are not perfect, but it is a more complete project then I feel I have ever released yet.
AFTER you leave a comment, feel free to leave comments on who you wanna also see drawn, or if this series even interests you. The official title of the images are in the links at the DA pages.
So my first subject was Trixie, and here she is! Three different pics, three versions, two pics, one comic, and one special pic for the comic.
Image 1 (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Workout-Series-Trixie-s-Breaking-Sneeze-590390069)
Image 2 (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Workout-Series-Trixie-Broke-Something-590389885)
Image 3 Comic (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Workout-Series-Trixie-Broke-Something-Comic-590390009)
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•3• Dat butt.
Really nice poses, you've really improved man. We don't see much of Trixie, but I like this. I find it kinda funny how her sneeze threw out her back XD. Quite a humorous situation. And the expressions are pretty funny heheh, I love those little cartoon "pain" circle things. Really completed the picture.
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LOL! Those are terrific! I can really see you put effort in these as they came out amazing and the color is a very nice surprise indeed! I love the comic especially because it doesn't hint at any sneezy fetishdom and it is just funny! I can see that happening! Love the expressions and your take on the characters is a joy. Seeing them go from sketches, then sometimes colored by Sudosnz, to this is just a huge step forward.
Don't worry, we don't expect this level all the time! Lol! Just do what you like. Love seeing you improve as you said this was an "exercise" for you to do. Sort of like the exercise Trixie are doing. You are both doing a workout, just in different ways.
Female form is VERY good here. It will be interesting to see how you do other characters too, since all body types are different. Though this is a good way for to learn, since workout clothes often are tighter fitting. 11 out of 10!
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PFFFFFFFT GYAAAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!! Oh Crap!...hehe....thats too funny.
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I don't want too, but I can imagine that being edited with her being broken... lol!
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I love these! Very well done!
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I'm looking at this closer now and wow! It's a lot more detailed than I initially thought.
First off, Trixie's nose shape and small nose wrinkle is adorable. I think I rarely say a nose shape is actually cute, but this is. So cute and round ;3;
And then the shading under her breasts, wow, that's really nicely done. Gives them more of a shape. And then the wrinkles in the back part of her shirt, that's a really nice extra detail that kinda shows us how much she's stretching her back. And lastly, you've really improved with the hands. They look pretty good here, if a bit simplistic, they're still getting better.
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I've said it before, sometimes I like pics just for the nose shape. And this one is....perfect. That scrunch, the flare, I just wanna boop it and wiggle it.
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I gotta agree with Leap on this, the detail is muah (the sound you make when you kiss the tip of your fingers and put your hand in the air).
One of the first things I noticed was the wrinkles on the back.
Gotta say, man, this is a real awesome post! Hope you continue this sort of series (well, in your typical fashion. or whatever fashion you choose.).
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I don't want too, but I can imagine that being edited with her being broken... lol!
Oops, Trixie is broken.
(http://i1296.photobucket.com/albums/ag5/AnonymousNamePerson/Silverwing/trixieyogatiny_zpsncxkyeuc.png)
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I really shouldn't have drawn that update.... Sorry Silverwing. I am bad.
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RIP Trixie
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APD OH MY GOSHHH
This is really well-drawn though, Silverwing!! The female form is a difficult one, but you've got a good handle on it. And this situation IS particularly humorous. Looking forward to more!
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APD nu. APD wai. I'm dying XD
I can't handle it Ahahaha XD
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LOL! Trixie is broken! I like how simplistic the edit is. Lol!
I gotta agree with Leap on this, the detail is muah (the sound you make when you kiss the tip of your fingers and put your hand in the air).
One of the first things I noticed was the wrinkles on the back.
Gotta say, man, this is a real awesome post! Hope you continue this sort of series (well, in your typical fashion. or whatever fashion you choose.).
Thank you! I am thinking of moving on with a Victorian era fashion next. ;) Mamma Mia!
I really appreciate it.
I've said it before, sometimes I like pics just for the nose shape. And this one is....perfect. That scrunch, the flare, I just wanna boop it and wiggle it.
Thank you so much! I know you love noses, as do I. I always try to do cute noses on my characters. Boop and wiggle it all day, my friend.
I'm looking at this closer now and wow! It's a lot more detailed than I initially thought.
First off, Trixie's nose shape and small nose wrinkle is adorable. I think I rarely say a nose shape is actually cute, but this is. So cute and round ;3;
And then the shading under her breasts, wow, that's really nicely done. Gives them more of a shape. And then the wrinkles in the back part of her shirt, that's a really nice extra detail that kinda shows us how much she's stretching her back. And lastly, you've really improved with the hands. They look pretty good here, if a bit simplistic, they're still getting better.
Wow, thanks so much, LP! I actually forgot about retouching up her hands. But yes, that is something I have worked on improving, and is still a weak point. Another issue I ran into was making the body look right. I didn't want to make the torso too long or too short, or the legs too long, etc. I am still not a fan of her heads position, but I really wanted to draw some fun expressions. Also tried out a different sneeze mouth.
Glad the nose had that effect on you. I like noses!
You noticed the shading on the breast! I did that throughout to try and add depth to the character, especially in areas of contours and curves. Even the curve of the body itself, like the torso, or the contour in the legs, calves, face, etc. :)
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It shows that you've worked on it! Hands are very difficult to draw, but you've come a long way.
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plus she's barefoot.....~
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She doesnt seem toned yet. Based on her pain, she doesnt do this much. Lol. I love her reaction and the form. With enough hard work she wont be soft anymore. Great work.
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Heh heh, well, a sneeze could have twisted her in the wrong position, or pushed her farther than she was ready for. But yeah, more practice Trixie.
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heh busted trixie. Use magic to weld her together
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Haha
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another detail I noticed. I like how in the second panel, remnants of her sneeze cloud are still lingering.
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Oh I thought those were like little pain circles.
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Nome. It's da cloud
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Cute.
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I love this. LOVE THIS! DUDE. This is great, and dat plot. :)
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Eeeey, das my line :p
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you have lines?
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As in my catchphrase, bruh.
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I don't have one....
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*shrugs*
You're the booper.
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Oh yeah. But thats a thing. not a phrase.
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Still, it's something.
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I'm glad you guys are still talking about this. Gonna upload the next one now.
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WOOHOO!
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Much excite!
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OH MY GOSH! Look what I missed from being gone ONE DAY! ONE DAY! :D Oh my word, she is gorgeously drawn!
I love that edit of her comically broken. It's like they didn't even try to make it realistic. ;)
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Oh APD, he knows when to not try lol
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hehe rain you miss stuff
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She's really working hard there. I see she only has her upper body off the ground. ;) Lol!
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I wonder what yoga position its called
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I have no idea... is it like THE KING COBRA or something like that? Her head is going up like those snakes in a basket.
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Oh oh hmm, I think I know it.
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king cobra huh?
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I think it is called the snake?
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It might be.
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makes sense
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Yeah.
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I am sure the names vary everywhere, but according to this really small chart (http://bretcontreras.com/wp-content/uploads/Yoga-3.jpg), it is called the, UP DOG.
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well trixie is a VERY good dog~
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THOSE are buns made for poking! Poke dem' buns! Love the picture, and the details here! Very awesome work.
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Lol, love how you call them buns haha
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hehe burger buns
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You can play those buns like bongo drums!
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Yes please
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Hahaha, APD, make an edit of her buns looking like drums or something XD
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PFFFFFFFT
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Sorry, I really like this pic. :) It's just a weird way you guys are expressing it.
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I saw that post you did in the RP Smiles...XD
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I saw that post you did in the RP Smiles...XD
I couldn't help it. You pretty much write this stuff! So predictable. I knew I could beat her post anyways. ;)
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Oh?
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PFFFFT
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It is pretty predictable sometimes, so I tried to word it differently.
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I'm confused as to what happened lol.
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Smiles made a post on the RP with me and soda then quickly deleted it
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Smiles made a post on the RP with me and soda then quickly deleted it
She was making fun of our interactions by acting out as us.
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Ahaha. So smiles is a troll lol
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Ahaha. So smiles is a troll lol
She has the power to ban. Shhhhh.
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Ahaha. So smiles is a troll lol
Hey now! I never called you anything.
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Smiles IS a troll. XD
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Not that kind of troll XD
I'm sure you're very pretty, Smiles.
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Smiles IS a troll. XD
I'm not like an angel, but I am not any troll. I'm not that bad looking.
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I'm sure you're very pretty, Smiles.
Pretty great. You are right.
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Pretty awesome
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Well yeah that too. But I meant like pretty nice looking ^^
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Well yeah that too. But I meant like pretty nice looking ^^
Thanks, but I don't roll that way. ;)
Sorry, I will stop being a dork.
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I wanna see what some of you look like IRL. Some of you I've already seen.
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Heehee, I figured. But still, just saying :)
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I wanna see what some of you look like IRL. Some of you I've already seen.
Okay, now picture the most beautiful human being on earth with all the right features. Now chip off all the best parts until they look average. There ya go! :D
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Cementing evidence Smiles is a female.
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Hehe. She ees.
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I knew it all along. I was waiting for her to finally say it or at least almost say it lol.
But hey, average is still good looking :)
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Yeah I knew it all along too. I just liked watching others try and figure it out
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I never said anything still.
Okay, I can't judge myself... maybe better then average? Worse?
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We can't say until we see you haha.
I'll see you as a pretty type of average.
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hehe. We're all not the most average bunch
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True in some ways lol
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in a LOT of ways
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Alright yeah.
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We are all pretty unaverage.
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I mean, we're in this forum for one haha
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Sneeze lovers~
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Let's move too offtopic thread. Don't derail this.
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fucking hell....
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What?
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spam....we're spammers....
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Yeah. We kinda are.
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Oh, come on, you guys made a new thread, and you're still spamming other threads?
Tsk. Tsk. Tsk.
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We try not to! Promise!
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I love her expressions and how she can barely do this pose or pushup! Very funny and a lot of work too. Nice you colored this, even thought you DESPISE coloring! Lol! Super awesome work, SW.
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WOW! So cool how this is a comic! Very well drawn and detailed. I love how form and her face when her back cracks. Lol!
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Alternative caption:
"The great and powerful Trixie should not have eaten three chili-cheese chimichangas for lunch."
Having a bad back myself, I can relate.
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Having a bad back myself, I can relate.
Oooohh, ouch. Sorry to hear that.
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I don't have a bad back but i DO have a misaligned rib cage.
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I don't have a bad back but i DO have a misaligned rib cage.
Naturally or did it happen due to an injury?
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I'm honestly not sure
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I'm honestly not sure
Odd. Okay.
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The thing is, I've never had this pain until....two or three years ago. Then it just came.
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*Looks, then EXPLODES.*
*Just shoes are left, a trickle of smoke coming from them.*
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STOP BLOWING UP! YOU LEAVE STAINS IN THE FLOOR!
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Bad backs yo, it's a feel many can relate to. I fucked up my back several times. I still need to go back to a chiropractor haha.
And damn it, Grapefoot! Now I have to clean up this mess!
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A few more pics like this of sexy girls sneezing in tight shiny yoga pants, and there's going to be some other sort of stains on the floor to clean up, if you know what I mean. ;)
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I cant get these mental images of.... exploding.... out of my head now. Ahhh!
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Loooooool
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blame grapefoot. He's basically an unstable timebomb
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This entire clip is giving me flashbacks to these workout series pics.
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blame grapefoot. He's basically an unstable timebomb
Excuse me? Care to explain yourself @Blurr? Lol
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Oh my gosh, I wish Silverwing would come back and do this stuff again. :D
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Me too ;D.
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blame grapefoot. He's basically an unstable timebomb
Excuse me? Care to explain yourself @Blurr? Lol
This is the beginning of the conversation that spawned this reply, lol. (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=148.msg8078#msg8078)
Care to explain the lack of spontaneous explosions in the last few years? ???
;p
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I think I matured....
OH NO! Lol!
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Silverwing draws a workout series EQG style of Soda pone...
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Silverwing draws a workout series EQG style of Soda pone...
And maybe a Raine pone, or whomever wishes? :D
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I'd be down.
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I seriously do plan to come back at some point and draw again. I really do. ;D It's just I need time.
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No pressure. :D