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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Erudork on 2018-03-31 11:48:20
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Two finished comic commissions! ;D The first is Fay from Star Fox, for A Pretty Cool Guy on the furry forum. The second is a comic of Sweetie Belle that Sudosnz commissioned!
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/c0b5/f/2018/089/7/3/fay_for_theexxtra_by_erudi-dc7e5qz.png)
You might want to open the second one in another tab to view the full-size file.
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/1519/f/2018/090/5/4/game_over_by_erudi-dc7hcp6.png)
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Both are super cute! Sweetie, you have tissues next to you! Don't sneeze in the air! >:C
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Fary is a really cute design. The comic is well done. Nice coloring on both.
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Oh my goodness, both are so cute! Poor Sweetie Belle though, sneezes then crashes! There go her high score. ;D
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Fay is the absolute cutest thing! Eeeee!!! :D :D
Also I love your Sweetie Belle's hair and her expression in the last panel! Ha!
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How can I possibly choose a favorite between the two when they are both so good? I love them both for different reasons! Really nice work!
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That pre-sneeze expression on Fay is brilliant! Super cute! Sweetie's sneeze is really cute too. She just lets it out at the worst moment for her and her game! Ha ha ha ha! :D Cyyyyuuuutte!
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Both are great, but that sneezy face by Fay is flat out hot and cute! Wonderful job on both of these!
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They're both adorable as fffff. <3 :))
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Both of these are adorable as can be! I really like the comic of Sweetie Belle. It's cute and reminds me of a real-life situation she would be in when sick. Fay is adorable in your style! I would love to see more of her. What a cute pre-sneeze then a sneeze to the side! Not to mention, nice shading on her!
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Both are really good drawings and cute. But Fay is my bae! Lol! I said a funny! She looks wonderful in your adaption!
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But Fay is my bae! Lol!
*Golf claps.*
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Thank you so much, guys!! :D I really appreciate it!
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Absolutely awesome! I can't express how much the first comic with Fay is to me! She's adorable and that build up to her sneeze! So cute!
Also got to say the sweetie Belle comic is great. I like how she just lets out a wet one all over her bed, tv, everything! Super cute! You got this sneeze stuff down pat!
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You are welcome!
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Aww these are so cute. :)
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What a wonderful design for Fay! I love her sneezy face and her cute sneeze! Sweetie Belle is adorable too with her sneeze and how she lets it go.
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Both really cute.
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There's a lot of cute/adorable comments here, and honestly for good reason XD It's hard sometimes to think of comments without stating the first words that pop in my head.
Seriously though @Erudi the way each short comics look turned out great! =) The ears on Fay are very nice looking, and the way you drew her holding onto the steering was a sweet little detail. I like the expressions a lot on Fay. Your style works great with her character.
Sweetie Bell. Oh you XD Sudo had a great idea and you did great with the drawing of the idea! It's not common seeing a cold effect the outcome of something a character is doing like this. Usually a cold just teases the individual or the people around the sick person. Having a high score attempt be thwarted by a sneeze is awesome to me. Sad, but awesome :)
I enjoyed both drawings ^^
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Than you so much, everybody! Your comments make me so happy and I love reading them. ^^