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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Umeko on 2018-04-06 20:32:07

Title: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-06 20:32:07
This is an entry for Mystery Serpent's contest he's running on DA.
My entry is a short comic called "Oops"
I'll post the pages as I finish them :D Enjoy!
Title: Page 1
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-06 20:33:19
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/f41d/f/2018/094/c/c/oops_page_1_by_umeko-dc7wqoj.png)

Skyiler is napping when something stirs in the rust colored grass.
He cracks an eye open looking directly at the intruder "Show yourself stranger"
A snake pops it's head out of the tall grass "Hey Ssskyiler! Long time no sssee"
The feral lifts his head looking down at the snake "Hey Mystery, been a while"
The snake starts to slither up the big feral's paw *not an easy task*
Title: Page 2
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-06 20:34:56
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/15c0/f/2018/095/1/b/oops_page_2_by_umeko-dc7zcxg.png)

The snake curls up on the feral's muzzle so he can look his friend in the eye when they talk.
However he didn't realize his whole body was covered in pollen from slithering through the meadow.
It takes Skyiler a split second to feel the effects from the yellow dust, his eyes began to tear up.
A red streak went across his muzzle and cheeks.
He sniffs softly "Hhh..."
The snake cocks his head to the side "Are you okay, Ssskyiler?"
The feral's muzzle wrinkles up underneath the snake "Heeh..."
Suddenly Skyiler tips his head back "Heeeeehh..." This causes the snake to slide down from the tip of the muzzle and flop between the feral's big eyes.
The snake's eyes goes wide when he realizes what's happening as the feral takes a last deep breath "Heeeehhh..."
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umbreon on 2018-04-06 21:38:42
Aww incredible work as always admire the style. :)
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-07 14:12:53
Aww incredible work as always admire the style. :)

Thank you so much *Hugs* Sorry for being so absent lately lots of things happening in rl
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: TheBeesSneeze on 2018-04-07 20:31:04
Cliffhanger.
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-08 05:56:58
Cliffhanger.

Yep :P
Title: Page 3
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-09 14:19:02
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/b626/f/2018/099/6/c/oops_page_3_by_umeko-dc8ddrk.png)

Then Skyiler jerked his head down "Haeh'KSHUUUH!" the poor snake goes flying off the feral's muzzle and disappears in the tall grass.
The feral shakes his head, then when he opens his eyes he realized the snake isn't on his muzzle anymore.
"Great, I just killed him... That gust was pretty strong" He said to himself.

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Third page in the contest entry... poor Snake XD

Skyiler & Art © Me
Mystery Serpent © Himself :3
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umbreon on 2018-04-09 14:56:37
Aww incredible work as always admire the style. :)

Thank you so much *Hugs* Sorry for being so absent lately lots of things happening in rl
It's alright *hugs*.
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umbreon on 2018-04-09 15:00:52
Ooh another pretty piece, poor skyiler and snake getting blown off.
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Binkyt11 on 2018-04-10 14:29:52
Ohh, this is amazing. :D I love the style and the coloring here! And the character interactions, while brief, we're very enjotable here!
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-11 02:18:57
Ohh, this is amazing. :D I love the style and the coloring here! And the character interactions, while brief, we're very enjotable here!

Thank you :o!
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/Male)
Post by: Umeko on 2018-04-11 02:19:23
Ooh another pretty piece, poor skyiler and snake getting blown off.

Thank you as always *Hugs tight*
Title: Page 4
Post by: Umeko on 2018-05-27 13:03:14
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/837d/f/2018/147/8/9/oops_page_4_by_umeko-dccp5yd.png)

But then the snake pops his head up from the tall grass "Bless you big guy!" He chuckled lightly.
Skyiler perked his ears "Mystery!" Feeling relieved that his friend didn't get injured or worse.
Mystery slithers up the feral's leg, making his way up around one of the feral's large ears and then settled down on top of his head "I'll sssit here inssstead" Mystery giggled and patted Skyiler's forehead.
Skyiler looked up at the snake and nodded "Yeah, less chance of another mishap there" He said, well at least the snake won't go flying in case it does happen again.

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4th page of the contest entry :D
One page to go

Art & Skyiler © Me
Mystery © :iconmysterysneeze:
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: Rainberry on 2018-05-28 21:16:45
Love the sneeze that blew the snake away!
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: FoxTail on 2018-05-28 21:18:56
Hot big sneeze!
Title: Page 5 *FINAL*
Post by: Umeko on 2018-06-21 17:23:16
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/e495/f/2018/172/d/6/oops_page__by_umeko-dcf1pvn.png)
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-06-21 18:30:54
Well done.
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: Darrin on 2018-06-21 19:41:51
Good work so far, Umeko.
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2018-06-21 21:04:22
Liked the strong sneeze on the previous page. :)
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: Umeko on 2018-06-27 08:13:20
I ended up in 4th place with this ^-^
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: TikoPiko on 2018-06-27 08:50:49
I ended up in 4th place with this ^-^

Hey congratulations you did a very great job   :).
Title: Re: Oops (Feral/M)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2018-06-27 15:18:26
Congrats!