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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-06-03 12:27:48

Title: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-06-03 12:27:48

Just minding her own business, a sudden urge sneaks it's way into Starlight Glimmer's nose!  She fights hard but will she be able to fend back a monstrous sneeze? 

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(https://i.imgur.com/b4wesKw.jpg) (https://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Sneezy-Starlight-Glimmer-Comic-748048325)

Hold to a dark background if you like mess.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2018-06-03 12:47:00

OH WOW!  WOW! That is a wonderful comic!  I love the build up and how she really fights that sneezes until, BOOOM!! Great comic and nice job, APD!

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2018-06-03 13:01:51

This comic may be more fitting for other people but I think you did very nice with your idea =) Out of all the main characters I seriously think Starlight would be the one to struggle the most with her sneezes XD

*spoilers. No she does not succeed in holding it back*

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Miggs on 2018-06-03 13:06:50

Hell yeah, more Glimmy sneezing. Cute build up. I dunno if I ever mentioned this, which is weird if I didn't, but I love the way you draw sneezing cheeks and mouths. How the little nose perks up a bit and the cheeks kinda push up to the mouth, with the mouth parted that way. Real cute. Love the spray.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Blurr on 2018-06-03 13:43:57

Oh my....oh my......wow. Just freaking wow! She is so expressive in her nose and the rest of her face. She's tryin to fight it but a sneeze wins most of the time and you captured that perfectly! Good on ya!

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2018-06-03 13:50:03

Really spot on, APD.  I never mentioned it either but your newer way of drawing sneezes with the cheeks is a very nice addition and new way to draw a sneeze expression. You and Silver do this well. :)  Really nice colors and a good build up with a strong sneeze. :)

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2018-06-03 14:36:03

Oh wow. :-0

I love it. The expressions are A+. ;D

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2018-06-03 15:36:24

Wow, I like this!  I really like comics so this makes me pretty happy to see a full on comic involving a sneeze and nicely colored.  Swell job, APD.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2018-06-06 15:05:53

This turned out really good, APD. :D  Nice job.  Good progression showing us how the sneeze built up with the expression visuals.  Nice one.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Darrin on 2018-06-07 13:19:07

Really good coming. Nice solid visuals and lots of nice spray.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2018-06-07 15:55:16

Wow!  This is a great comic, APD.  I love the build up and the colors are really nice. :)  Color seems to make things so much happier at times.  I like how she looks so bored in the beginning, lol!  Good thing that sneeze broke things up for her.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2018-06-08 14:06:38

This is a great comic!  Really nice build up with a good strong sneeze!  Nice!

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2018-06-10 16:12:31

Wonderful sneeze comic here, APD.  I like her build up and the actually sneeze release is really intense too.  Lots of fine details with the spray which is superb on your part.  Very nice!

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2018-06-13 18:58:23

This is a lovely comic.  I like how you showed us her sneeze building up!  I love comics that show the full process of a sneeze.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2018-06-14 21:16:15

You did a nice job, APD.  I think the strengths here are the expressions leading into that pinnacle moment, her tipping point, then BOOM!  Explosive mess.  All very well done.  I am glad that mess technique worked out for you.  You did a very fine job on it!

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Kiwi on 2018-06-15 18:32:33

This is a sexy hot comic.  Such good expressions.  I can feel her feels trying to dismantle this sneeze before it erupts. Great job, @AnyPoneDrawn !!!!

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Graymist on 2018-06-16 14:11:15

Such a cute comic.  Love the reaction by Starlight and how she sneezes.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2018-06-16 14:24:47

Quote from: Kiwi on 2018-06-15 18:32:33

This is a sexy hot comic. 

I'm going to agree with that.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-06-16 15:57:17

Hahaha. I don't know if it is hot, but if you think it is, thank you. ;D  Some artists are really skilled at being able to make stuff truly hot. ;D

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2018-06-16 21:47:24

Quote from: AnyPoneDrawn on 2018-06-16 15:57:17

Hahaha. I don't know if it is hot, but if you think it is, thank you. ;D  Some artists are really skilled at being able to make stuff truly hot. ;D

Don't downplay yourself.  You can absolutely do that!  ;D  You've got a good talent.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Captain Ridiculous on 2018-06-16 23:28:36

Really nice comic.  Nice expressions on this! 

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-07-24 18:39:27

Thank you all very much for the responses.  You're all too kind.

Title: Re: Sneezy Starlight Glimmer Comic (F)
Post by: flemishcap on 2018-10-21 21:22:17

Wow, this is hot!  Flat out hot!  This comic accomplishes a lot in my opinion!  I really hope you do more like this with more characters.