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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Erudork on 2018-06-10 15:59:47

Title: SEQUEL ADDED! Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Erudork on 2018-06-10 15:59:47
This is for mysterysneeze's contest on DA! Here you see my cinnadog character, Pop, chewing some bubblegum. When she blows a huge bubble that pops all over her face, some of it gets in her nose. She really doesn't want to sneeze because she knows it'll be messy, but she just can't help it!! aaaaaa she tried so hard to hold back :'D

(https://orig00.deviantart.net/a848/f/2018/163/2/2/pop_comic_final_by_erudi-dce8dxe.png) (https://orig00.deviantart.net/a848/f/2018/163/2/2/pop_comic_final_by_erudi-dce8dxe.png)
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (f, non-pony)
Post by: Silverwing on 2018-06-10 16:01:30
Full size (https://orig00.deviantart.net/3b63/f/2018/161/3/6/pop_goes_the_sneezle_by_erudi-dce179w.png)

This is wonderful and awesome!  Lol!  I love how the sneeze blows out the bubble gum too.  Really cute and a good contest contestant.
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2018-06-10 16:03:06
That is adorable!  Such a cute scenario and a fun sneeze!  Very happy and bright looking character too!  Really nicely done.
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2018-06-10 16:08:53
Nice detailed comic with a good character design.  She seems like something that would live in some alternative universe of happy gumdrops and candy coated streets. I like the general happy aura around the character.  But lets get on to that sneeze and the build up followed by the awesome release.  The sneeze mess is being trapped by the bubblegum, but the bubblegum is also being blown forward from the force of the sneeze!  Some funny implications from that!  Nice work!
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Umbreon on 2018-06-10 16:09:41
Aww so cute and nicely done. :D
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Erudork on 2018-06-10 18:37:20
Thank you so much, guys!! :D I'm glad you guys like her design. I had a lot of fun making her!
asdgkajshg I just realized I switched up her arm colors at some point during the comic. Right arm should be blue and left should be pink. I'll fix that... at some point.
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2018-06-10 20:03:22
Really nice cartoon there, Erudi!  I like how animated it all looks and feels and nice cute expressions.
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Miggs on 2018-06-10 21:32:57
Woah, now that's some sticky snot! Super cute, super well colored, Erudi! Awesome as always!
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2018-06-11 02:42:59
Poor Pop. She tried to not give in.

Thank you so much for taking time drawing for my contest! It means a lot to me.

The sneeze itself is interesting and the cause of sneeze here is something I haven't seen in a very long time. I am surprised at the choice of character too. Nice tail and you did very good with the colors you used =) I can see how you did her ears reacting to her sneezy build up and the release itself.

I never did like bubble gum as a kid. XD

Good entry here! Good luck with not just the contest but your own plans for yourself you want to draw over the summer, sneezy or nonsneezy =)
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Soda on 2018-06-11 14:09:54
I think it is really great you came up with this totally original design for this contest.  The comic is great and I love her reacting to everything that's happening in her sneezy nose!  Really fun comic! 
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Erudork on 2018-06-11 18:11:48
Oh well I didn't come up with her design for the contest. She's a character I already had. xD Thank you though!
Title: Re: Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Erudork on 2018-06-12 18:26:22
I decided to do a quick extra thing because aaaaa there's no way she won't sneeze again with all that sticky gum up there!!!
Here's a second sneeze: https://sta.sh/061pni3y5ia

Also, this is Pop's character page for anyone interested: https://toyhou.se/2173845.pop
You guys seem to like her so I figured I'd link you guys to more pics if you want. :D
Title: Re: SEQUEL ADDED! Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2018-06-12 18:55:44
Cute extras!  Thanks for sharing all that goodness.
Title: Re: SEQUEL ADDED! Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Miggs on 2018-06-12 19:03:47
W o a h! That mess, though! It's gum, yeah, but like... DAMN!

Also now that I think about it, gum up the nose would be...probably one of the worst things.
Title: Re: SEQUEL ADDED! Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2018-06-12 19:22:10
I love how that gum provides a barrier to the mess inside of it!  Really cute little doodle dash!
Title: Re: SEQUEL ADDED! Pop Goes the Sneezle (F)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2018-06-13 16:08:59
Nice little sketch you did for your idea. Poor stringy, sticky nose.

Gum XD I still don't like it when I try eating it myself.

Thank you very much for drawing for my contest Erudi! =)