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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: flemishcap on 2018-11-15 13:04:45
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Would love to have some feedback on how this turned out. I know it's not the smoothest, but for the most part, I am pretty happy with it. Feel free to be harsh on your feedback. :) Thanks and hope it helps me make better content for you guys. This is my first animation of an actual character and not some generic pony.
Animation (https://www.deviantart.com/psfforum/art/Starlight-Glimmer-Animated-Sneeze-772074486)
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Heyyy, that's pretty cute! I think the animation looks good. :) Nice job! :))
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Not the smoothest, but that doesn't mean it's not great! It's very nice to see another animation from you!
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I think it turned out really good. I watched it about a trillion times and I like how well you followed everything frame by frame.
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Really good if you ask me. Maybe a few extra slides for smoothness, but it's pretty detailed now as is.
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This turned out great! I love watching the spray over and over and how well you complete it all. It loops perfectly to play over and over without any weird break.
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You did a great job, FC. :) Nice expressions and detail on the release with all the particles being spread around. You followed them up well and did a nice job overall. Maybe just a few in-be-tweener slides for smoothness, but overall it was a great animation.
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Fantastic work here! A very cute animated piece. I know it is a lot of work to create even short animations. So thank you so much for doing this and sharing it.
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Great job on this, FC!! How long did it take you to make this?
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You could take commissions if this isn't too daunting a task to do.
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Really great animation, FC. I love how you make these once in awhile. Always worth it to me.
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Really cute animation here, FC. :) I think it was very good.
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You did a nice job on this. It's a lot of work to make an animation, especially without the hardcore tools. :) You did really good.
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Really good job on this animation! I would recommend adding some more frames in there, but it is great as is too! I think you did the sneeze really nice with the spray. Also the loop cycle fits perfectly. Really great stuff!
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I hope you respond back, FC. Would love to see what your plans are in the future. :) You got a lot of potential.
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Better than anything I could ever do. Could use a few more frames for smoothness, but it is absolutely fantastic as is! Well done!
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If you are reading this @FlemishCap, I hope you continue to do these animations. I have gone back and looked at as many of yours I can find. Each one shows progression in the attention to detail. Originally they were nondescript characters with simple sneezes, to now being fully realized characters complete with high intensity details. You are doing a fine job and look forward to your next piece of art.
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You did a nice job ANIMATING this. It's a lot of work animating and I love it when someone takes the time to do it and share it.