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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Wolfwood on 2019-01-02 13:45:07

Title: Vinyl Scratch Hard Sneeze Zap Comic (F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2019-01-02 13:45:07

Like that horrible bad title I gave?  Okay, so this is kind of cringe with how it is written and done using one of those pony-maker things, but it has potential to build off of. 

Ponies losing control of their magic from a sneeze is no new concept from the sneeze fetish and pony community, but yet it is never used for anything.  No stories, no art... why is that?

COMIC (https://www.deviantart.com/agkandphotomaker2000/art/Comic-16-body-639068008)
Alt Source (https://derpibooru.org/1888882?q=sneezing)

(https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2018/11/23/1888882__safe_artist-colon-agkandphotomaker2000_dj+pon-dash-3_vinyl+scratch_oc_oc-colon-pony+video+maker_2016_canon+x+oc_comic_couple_female_furless_ho.png)

Title: Re: Vinyl Scratch Hard Sneeze Zap Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2019-01-02 13:51:48

I've never seen a sneeze end with such a harsh ending as this though, lol.

I agree, the sneezing and losing control of powers bit has never really been touched on and that's a shame. It could have been so much more.

Title: Re: Vinyl Scratch Hard Sneeze Zap Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2019-01-02 14:34:31

ARGHHH THE WRITING OF AGKANDVIDEOMAKER2000

*ahem* Nonetheless, it's a funny concept. I wonder what other kind of crap could happen in those circumstances. :))

Title: Re: Vinyl Scratch Hard Sneeze Zap Comic (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2019-01-02 18:04:52

Starlight Glimmer / TIME WARP, TAKES OVER THE WORLD.... oops.

Title: Re: Vinyl Scratch Hard Sneeze Zap Comic (F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2019-01-03 14:13:29

I like the premise for sure and I think this was a pretty funny comic idea, but it needs to be written and executed better.  They explain way too much.

Title: Re: Vinyl Scratch Hard Sneeze Zap Comic (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2019-01-03 16:28:39

Maybe I will explore it more.  I like the idea too.