PSF
Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Miggs on 2019-06-14 23:06:49
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I'm only putting this in it's own topic cuz other people told me to.
Needs some work, more oomf to it. But this is what I have.
Boosh. (https://66.media.tumblr.com/ad9096f54627d8236550d54d4049c812/tumblr_pt0pwj1ZUt1u08pr2o1_1280.gif)
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Oh my goodness this is wonderful! :D :D :D :D I love the snot mess.
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I like it a lot, S4. I think it's good, but I don't have the eye of an artist. I mean I guess you could add more frames for smoothness, but it seems great to me. Thanks for sharing this!
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The mighty Boosh... I was just reminded of that.
Anyways, THIS IS CUTE! Really good snez.
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Awesome job, Miggs! Really cute little sneezy Penny.
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Nice work on this! Looks really cute.
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What a wet sneeze! Very cute! :D I like the wetness spraying out.
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She's really cute. I like that build up and her release. Very nicely made.
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She's a cute character design, Miggs. I would love to know how you came up with her design. She looks really good and the animation here is good.
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Thanks y'all. Hopefully I can do another animation like this, or improve upon this one. Give it that extra oomf.
I would love to know how you came up with her design.
So, I started with wanting each character to have their own color scheme. And I knew this character was going to be the main character, and that they were going to be sick 24/7. So, naturally, their color would be a sickly green. I wanted to try something different, so I made her hair a little spikey but poofy looking, and I knew I wanted to give her a pony tail. I thought "Scarves and sweaters are cute" so I gave her a scarf and sweater. Here's the original concept doodle I did.
(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/D5M73GOW0AAw9iW.jpg)
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Thanks for sharing the backstory. Wanting to have distinctive colors so that the viewer would know them by reminds me of how Adorkable Twilight & Friends was created. I like that kind of style and I like your backstory to this. :)
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Sick 24/7. Yikes! That sucks for her, but I love the premise!
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Awwwwww! She's cute! :D I like continuing to see this character. She's cute.
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Really good work here. :) I think you did a nice job. I know you want that extra OOMF, but don't force it. It will come to you when you least expect it. :)
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I'm not an animator... So take my suggestions with a side of salt.
But I think that all you need to do is to learn how to key-frame animations a little better to give that extra OOMF.
Still, this is so good!^^
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Yeah, everything's still kind of off to me. Mostly in the sense of key frames and such.
I think I mostly need to add more towards the end, her reeling back to an initial position or something.
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I would love to know how you came up with her design.
So, I started with wanting each character to have their own color scheme. And I knew this character was going to be the main character, and that they were going to be sick 24/7. So, naturally, their color would be a sickly green. I wanted to try something different, so I made her hair a little spikey but poofy looking, and I knew I wanted to give her a pony tail. I thought "Scarves and sweaters are cute" so I gave her a scarf and sweater. Here's the original concept doodle I did.
Thank you for sharing. I think you achieved your goals quite honestly. She and the other characters I have seen are great.
When animating a gif, I always try to think that everything is looped. So if you can reel the animation back to a neutral pose so that it fires off smoothly in a loop with no jarring stutter, than you have achieved your goal!
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Great work! I love her teeth. :D