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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Anyponedrawn on 2019-06-16 12:35:37

Title: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2019-06-16 12:35:37

Seeing all these animations out there, I wanted to dive in and see what I could do.  So I started very easy with a very generic stick figure girl sneezeing. I think I made it too fast.... uhhh..... oops? 

Hopefully I improve.

(https://i.imgur.com/fabuHit.gif)

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2019-06-16 12:36:16

I find it silly how her body just moves for no reason a few inches back... lol.  Oh geez. 

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2019-06-16 12:45:37

Ha, that's cute though.  You got to start somewhere. :)  Maybe she will learn not to stifle. 

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Miggs on 2019-06-16 12:59:17

Again! More tissues for these characters! Their sneezes are so wet and shizz!
I agree with Rainy, though. Gotta start somewhere, and so far so good!

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Kiwi on 2019-06-16 16:26:01

Promising and cute start!

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2019-06-16 16:34:08

Good animation. :)

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Darrin on 2019-06-16 16:36:28

Hahahaha! She needs a tissue and a mop.

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2019-06-16 16:46:24

It is very fast as you pointed out.  But going frame by frame, it seems like you knew what you were doing at least.  I would just say slow it down.

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2019-06-16 17:05:51

Not bad. :D  It's simply but cute.

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2019-06-16 17:19:36

That is a big sneeze for a stick figure girl.  I must say I like the xtra cartoony proportions you used for her snot drips.

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Ynona on 2019-06-17 14:05:36

Making stick figures is the starting point for any good animator!

It's really cute, I like it!

Keep it up!

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2019-06-17 14:32:05

Quote from: Ynona on 2019-06-17 14:05:36

Making stick figures is the starting point for any good animator!

Very true. We all start somewhere.

And hey, APD... This is better than most stick figures to begin with! ;)

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2019-06-17 14:50:10

That's true.  This isn't truly a stick figure, APD.  So you're already ahead of the ballgame. ;) 

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2019-06-17 18:32:18

Thank you guys for the tips! :D Always want to improve, so I always love hearing feedback like that. Thanks so much.

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Soda on 2019-06-17 18:42:18

HA HA HA!  HAAAA!  That's some goopy snot, APD. 

I got to give you some credit, you didn't make her bewbs bounce. ;) 

Title: Re: Simple Girl Sneeze Animation (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2019-06-17 18:45:35

Quote from: Soda on 2019-06-17 18:42:18

I got to give you some credit, you didn't make her bewbs bounce. ;)

That's because I am a man of class, Soda.

(https://i.imgur.com/fNyZQzQ.png)