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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Ynona on 2019-06-17 13:49:22
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Sorry, this time I around I'll just post the sketch... But to compensate I cleaned up the sketch much more than usual.
I hope that this is not a problem for y'all.
This is a comic all about the Persona 5 main girls.
Quick recap of the game for those who didn't played it:
In Persona 5 the protagonists have the power to enter the mind of people and manipulate them by interacting with stuff inside their head, like stealing their desires to make them feel regret for their actions.
They formed a group of vigilantes/super heroes named "The Phantom Thieves of Hearts" so they can make bad people that are too powerful for the law pay for their crimes.
It's MUCH more complicated than this, but to properly explain the story would take too much time.
Full size here: https://i.imgur.com/Of70keU.jpg
(https://i.imgur.com/Of70keU.jpg)
So... Everyone is making animations now, right?
I guess I'll have to join the party on of these days... ;3
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Because I'm a nerd, I laughed way too long at the first two panels. :) Really nice drawn comic and I am sure when the sneeze fetishists see this, they will like this a lot. Three sneezes in one comic!
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"Futaba sneezes like an idiot"
lmao, that's great
The comic as a whole is great. The way you do these comics by mixing in an actual little conversation, but throwing in some sneezes and stuff in there is pretty great.
And cuz I'm biased:
I liked these panels the most c:
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"Fatuba sneezes like an idiot."
That is the ultimate line in this whole comic! I love it all though! What an awesome comic from a handful of sneezy girls! What's not to love?
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*Claps strong hard claps.*
This is . . . perfect! *Wipes away a tear.*
The humor is great on this too. All hits.
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Thank you everybody for your nice comments!
Because I'm a nerd, I laughed way too long at the first two panels. :)
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The comic as a whole is great. The way you do these comics by mixing in an actual little conversation, but throwing in some sneezes and stuff in there is pretty great.
The truth is that I actually want to make fanfics rather than simple fanarts, however I suck at writing... So I mix writing with my drawing skills to compensate.
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So cute and funny! :D I like the "Real" conversation in these. It pulls back the comedy and sort of makes things more subtle and real... if that makes sense. I like it. All the sneezes were great though!
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This comic is beautiful as FUK! (I mean that lovingly) It speaks to me so well! I can do all those sneezes in one day! :D LOL! I loved the humor is this because it was so spot on and funny!
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Honestly, this is one of the best ideas for a sneeze comic I’ve seen. ^-^
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So cute and funny! :D I like the "Real" conversation in these. It pulls back the comedy and sort of makes things more subtle and real... if that makes sense. I like it. All the sneezes were great though!
Yes, it makes sense! I'm glad you like it! ^_^
This comic is beautiful as FUK! (I mean that lovingly) It speaks to me so well! I can do all those sneezes in one day! :D LOL! I loved the humor is this because it was so spot on and funny!
Wow, you must be incredibly sneezy!!
...Unlike me that I can spend entire months without sneezing even once! Ahaha!
Honestly, this is one of the best ideas for a sneeze comic I’ve seen. ^-^
Thank you so much, LSA!^^
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This is super good! :D I love how it goes straight to their sneezes and shows them. Fun idea for a comic too!
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I'm glad it makes sense. I'm sometimes not great with language words tomato encased 4 banger hybrid low pressure system Cordoba.
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I'm glad it makes sense. I'm sometimes not great with language words tomato encased 4 banger hybrid low pressure system Cordoba.
You know who are you nipple saladin' to?
Trust me, I have problems finding the right woomies too!!
I just take my frag time to write my words good! XD
...and I often fail anyways.
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This is such a cute comic. I like their conversation and how you present to us their sneezes. :D
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Really great comic. It's endearing. :) I love the conversation going on here because it's silly but there is truth in what she is pointing out. :)
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Your amazing also this was really funny I've never played persona but I will now for sure so many great girls
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Something I like about the way you do comics is the writing you do. It's easy to read and I like how even with some panels having a lot of text, it is positioned in different ways so it is clear to see the art in each individual panel =) Honestly I love the written things you do for the panels! You have fun ideas and I agree with what others say here. You have a cool sense of humor, and it is clear you know about the characters too.
I like long hairstyles in general a lot, but I think the way you draw different types of hairstyles is really neat to see! =)
Nice Haru hat, different outfits, and the designs of each character in your own style look great :D
Poor Niijima though...at least her friend next to her has got her back! The dialogue her friend said made me smile a lot though and makes me wonder what could be done in order to actually succeed with her plan XD You put some nice small details with the friend too. She has one of my favorite designs out of all the characters in this comic.
Overall though, I have to agree with what Inari is talking about ^^ I liked hearing what Inari said.
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Something I like about the way you do comics is the writing you do. It's easy to read and I like how even with some panels having a lot of text, it is positioned in different ways so it is clear to see the art in each individual panel =) Honestly I love the written things you do for the panels! You have fun ideas and I agree with what others say here. You have a cool sense of humor, and it is clear you know about the characters too.
I like long hairstyles in general a lot, but I think the way you draw different types of hairstyles is really neat to see! =)
Nice Haru hat, different outfits, and the designs of each character in your own style look great :D
Poor Niijima though...at least her friend next to her has got her back! The dialogue her friend said made me smile a lot though and makes me wonder what could be done in order to actually succeed with her plan XD You put some nice small details with the friend too. She has one of my favorite designs out of all the characters in this comic.
Overall though, I have to agree with what Inari is talking about ^^ I liked hearing what Inari said.
Thank you so much!
Your comments are always so detailed. They are always a blast to read!
Makoto's (Niijima) friend is Hifumi Togo (https://sidequestthrough.files.wordpress.com/2018/11/6f6b692d8eb2e085c969208aa7b70881.png?w=1024&h=733). She's a master tactician, I'm sure she will find a way to achieve her objective! ahaha!
And Yusuke (Inari) is such a lovable weirdo! ahah!
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The long awaited sequel!
Well, it's not exactly a sequel... It's more like a part 1.5...
I'm going to make a proper part 2 when The Royale will be released!
Full size: here (https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/611395005478862853/P5-2.jpg)
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/611395005478862853/P5-2.jpg)
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I 👏 LOVE 👏 TISSUE 👏 INDUCING
Very cute lil 1.5 c:
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Your comic...:D :D I'll say this first. Your idea for 1.5 is a really enjoyable idea to see! =) I was not expecting this at all, but I am very happy seeing you draw your own idea ^^ You think of great ideas!
I went back to see part 1 again because I wanted to, and seeing 1 and 1.5 together on my computer is like a mini manga chapter. I love how you were able to draw these characters in your own way!
Looking back at part 1 makes me realize just how much fun details are involved in this comic. I like the references in the background, dialogue, and poses! =)
Ok...I'll stop getting sidetracked and focus on the new 1.5 comic.
The first thing I notice is the level of focus this new part has. The tones are easily seen and I love the way the outfits and hairstyles are drawn with these tones you used! ^^
This is newer to me. I haven't seen you draw a sneeze idea like this before. Seeing what causes a sneeze is a personal enjoyment I have because it is a mystery to me seeing what different causes or weaknesses a person could have. Different characters sneeze in different ways, and I honestly love seeing why a sneeze happens =)
I have never induced myself before, and it fascinates me seeing an induced sneeze in cartoons and anime. In real life I've actually had 1 roommate that induced himself with one of those small sticky note squares, using the tips to poke the insides of his nostril rims until he teased the stuck sneeze to come out. We actually talked for a good 30 minutes about sneeze related stuff after I saw him doing this. He does not have any fetishes as far as I know XD but we talked about a lot of different stuff when I lived with that roommate. I have no idea where he lives nowadays sadly.
Seeing the hairstyle being affected with her sneezes in different ways because she tried to be more intimidating with her second sneeze is a great detail you did with your comic! :D To be fair, she did improve and had a larger sneeze...it just was not even close to being what she wanted to sound or be like. Honestly that is a good thing! She isn't the one that wants to be true queen. Niijima is the one that wants to be a true queen XD
Speaking of Niijima, the final panel face expression and her hands like that is an expression that needs protecting. She looks really sweet!
I think my favorite part of seeing this comic is the different emotions. I love face expressions, but it is emotions with expressions that make any character stand out more. Hifumi has such determination with her face expressions before her sneezes, and the eyes. I LOVE the differences you did with the Hifumi's eyes! Whether her eyes are strong, pre-sneezy, or closed, I can see the small differences you drew with her eyes =)
Speaking of the pre-sneezy eyes, the overall build up tickling/inducing panels are honestly a lot of fun for me personally. I love seeing the process/progression a sneeze could have with a character. Even if she has adorable sneezes, her sneeze still affects her in different ways. The blushes...aww man. The blushes made me smile a lot when I saw her shy side come out. I wasn't expecting her to get so flustered over her own sneezes like this. It's awesome to see the different levels of blushing Hifumi did in this comic! :D
You are right Niijima. =) I think Hifumi is adorable too in her own ways ^^
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The long awaited sequel!
She’s very pretty! And I like when you use the background to add oomph to the sneezes!
But... we don’t see characters amplifying their sneezes on purpose very often! So for her to try and fail?! I get her frustration. I’d read her blog about it.
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Wow, I am sorry I never saw the sequel! Usually it's best to make a new topic for it. This is superb!!!!
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Wow, I am sorry I never saw the sequel! Usually it's best to make a new topic for it. This is superb!!!!
Sorry, I didn't want to clutter the forum with my Persona stuff! XD
Thank you for your comment! :D
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The "long awaited" sequel to my Persona 5 comic, this time it's all about Yusuke and Futaba!
I hope you like it! ^^
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/694345328899522560/P5-3.png)
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"I'm not one of those creepy sneeze people you showed me on the Internet."
XD
All three of these are very cute.
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I like the additions. Sorry I didn't see it sooner! The last one had me laughing a lot too. It tied in so nicely.
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Defeated Futaba
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New part added. Come one and notice people! It's a good part!
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Oh sorry. I didn't know another part was added. I don't always check topics again. Looks good, and possibly the funniest part of this comic progression. I like it.
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My favorite thing is how she keeps leaning closer! In Futaba’s head, what kinda response did she want? :P
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My favorite thing is how she keeps leaning closer! In Futaba’s head, what kinda response did she want? :P
I guess some kind of deep personality analysis like the ones in the first comic? XD
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This is adorable! :D I love how she keeps scootching closer to him too.