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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Ynona on 2019-07-28 17:35:40
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Also known by the masses as VA-11 Hall-A, this game has a simple premise.
You're a bartender named Jill that works in crappy bar (the Valhalla) in cyberpunk world.
Usually, cyberpunk settings are dark and gritty.
And while this one is not exactly an exception, you're still going to meet quite the colorful cast of characters.
Between floating brains in a jar, mutated cat-people transformed by an accidental nano-machine rejection and talking dogs that are running multinational companies you're never going to get bored at the Valhalla.
Full size here: Link (https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/583639368237842433/605190606561476620/9.jpg)
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/583639368237842433/605190606561476620/9.jpg)
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Not gonna lie, in the time I've played the game, I've always kinda wondered if she'd ever sneeze for no real reason. Or if you could put like a tissue box in her room or something, since you can customize it. :P
Jill's great, though, it's even nicer knowing she sneezed 17 more times before this comic.
Btw, in case anyone wants a real chill game where you can just sit back and read conversations and shit, make some drinks, this game's great for that.
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Something I notice is the way you use the information about the games themselves to create your ideas. I have never heard about this game, and I have no idea who anyone is, but I learn about them based on what is drawn and what is said. I like your sense of humor in your comics! =) I smile when I read what the characters say. I feel bad for her at the end! I can't tell if the boss is joking or not XD
The outfits here look great! The way the dog turns and looks concerned towards Jill is a sweet moment...and it made me laugh when the dog went back to the normal face expression when the boss spoke up again at the end :)
A detail with your art style that I see is the ways you draw hairstyles. I love long hairstyles in general, but you do a really great job with the variety of short and long hairstyles you draw for the characters you do :D
I think Jill needs a hug after this.
Great comic and I love this idea you had :D
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I thought the blonde girl was cute as well just a small complaint the girl with black hair kinda looks like a dude it looks she has a mustache but great job this shits so detailed
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"Your fired."
I smirked.
What's with the dog? Lol.
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LOL! That's funny. The dog seemed so concerned for a moment. ;D
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Superbly done! Probably one of my favs by you. :)
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Thank you everybody for your nice comments! :))
What's with the dog? Lol.
One of those talking dogs I was talking about. He's a regular at the bar.
I thought the blonde girl was cute as well just a small complaint the girl with black hair kinda looks like a dude it looks she has a mustache but great job this shits so detailed
Sorry about that, I'll try to make less "mustachey" girls next time! ahah!
But thank you anyway!
I feel bad for her at the end! I can't tell if the boss is joking or not XD
Objective complete! XD
But do not worry, she's just joking. Jill and Dana are actually really good friends in the game!
Not gonna lie, in the time I've played the game, I've always kinda wondered if she'd ever sneeze for no real reason. Or if you could put like a tissue box in her room or something, since you can customize it. :P
Jill's great, though, it's even nicer knowing she sneezed 17 more times before this comic.
Wow, I think I was victim of a Mandela Effect right now...
I was absolutely sure there was pack of tissues in her room by default... O.o
Oh well, here couple of lousy headcannons:
Jill is a normal sneezer, nothing too amazing. Normally, she sneezes just a couple of times in a day.
However, she is so professional at her job that every time there are customers around she just stops being able to normally sneeze, kinda like a mental block.
She only sneezes when there a customers around if she has a cold or, like in this case, if she has allergies...
She sneezed a double earlier in the day when there where no customers at the bar.
The other 15 sneezes happened almost non-stop after the dog entered the bar.
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Aww this is so cute though >3
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Really cute!
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Superb!
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This is really funny on top of being a sneeze comic! I like how you do that. Grapefoot, our writer comes to mind. He creates stories that are good, but also contain sneezes. That's what your work reminds me of but in drawing form.
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Really really like this one. Thanks so much for making it. :D Probably my fav by you in my ever expanding folder of your art.
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So cute! SO CUTE.
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Oh that's just cute! REALLY nicely done.