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Title: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: ✨proponypal✨ on 2016-03-19 13:38:37
This is a trade I did with @mysteryserpent! Judy Hopps! I hope I did okay, cuz it's my first time drawing this character and animal lol.

Enjoy!

Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Ari-Dynamic on 2016-03-19 14:23:23
Hehe, that's so cute! I'd imagine she'd have a fine sneeze. :3
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2016-03-19 15:46:33
Hey, very cute job, ProPonyPal!  Nice to see it, thanks!  I will be a stickler on one this, but ti appears her eye layer was placed behind her head layer, so her eye lids go under her head a bit in one section. ;)

Other then that, everything has the traditional amount of spray, you do, and the good quality! 
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2016-03-19 15:55:43
I'm looking at this and I'm smiling in a big way *blushes* I think, especially since this is a first time drawing, you surprised me with how great this turned out! :D Her gray fur texture is very nice to me, and I love how you drew her eyebrows and eyelashes being the way they are. Her closed eyes have a lighter shade of gray than her face fur, and that's a smart decision :)

The blushes are perhaps my favorite part of this drawing. It looks like she feels embarrassed while sneezing ^^ I also think how you did her pre-sneeze mouth looks awesome, and I picture in my mind the sound of hitching breath just by looking at this :D The dusty air with the sneeze also looks natural. Dusty air is something that is more easily seen with a sneeze instead of normal air in real life, and you showed this in your drawing. Again, that's a smart drawing detail here :D

Her nose is...awesome XD I know it's a different kind of nose but honestly you did a really good job with doing the different nose for the first time ^^

One small detail I think that could be improved is something very small. Her eyebrow and eyelash I think should not be overshadowed by her gray outline, but the black should go over/be on top of the outline. Other than that, I love this :D
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-03-19 15:58:03
Very nice for a first time drawing.  I like her nostrils and wrinkled little bunny nose! :D  Thanks for doing this. 
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-03-19 15:59:30
This looks terrific.  Lots of detail, especially her fur, which looks great!  Nice touch that might go by unnoticed to the untrained eye.  Pre-sneeze is great then the sneeze is nice and spray-ey!  You did a nice job with the head on view. 

I have been working on a Judy Hopps pic for three days now, and should have it done soon.  I am going all out on it. Shh, tell no one.
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2016-03-19 16:02:51
I am surprised that as I wrote the comment Master made a comment too XD

I am working on a lot today and I will finish your part today ^^ Thank you so much for doing this trade with me. I hope you like my story as much as I enjoyed seeing this.

Seriously, you did more than I expected and I'm very happy :) I wasn't expecting Judy to look so...natural looking in your style. It's like she had been drawn by you more than just once ^^
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2016-03-19 16:04:51
*AHHH!!! MORE PEOPLE COMMENTED WHILE I WAS TYPING XDDD*

Seriously though, it's not just me that liked this :)

*hugs PPP* Thank you so much for drawing this.

Silver, no hurry. I'm curious what you have been doing but just have fun with what you draw! :D You've been very busy...thank you for all you do Silver ^^
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-03-19 17:04:15
Wowzers! This looks great, 3P! Look at that cute little nostril flare! I love her pre sneeze expression, it looks so desperate. You are amazing beyond ponies, 3P. Like seriously. You're so talented ;w;
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-03-19 17:54:36
Beside the eyelid flub, overall it looks good!  You have a done great with the color and the fur on her.  I like her sneeze.
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: FoxTail on 2016-03-19 18:25:11
The blushing is what makes this. :D  Very cute, Proponypal! :D  I love seeing new stuff from you. 
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-03-20 09:55:45
She looks nice and cute!  Love bunnies!
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-03-20 10:19:19
Branching out!  ProPonyPal can do more then just pones!  She can do anything she puts her mind too!  Nice one! 
Title: Re: (F) Judy Hopps Sneezes (Trade)
Post by: Erudork on 2016-04-01 17:02:02
Ooh, nice work!  I wouldn't have minded seeing her sneeze in the actual movie, hehe.