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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: !xOWOx! on 2020-04-13 20:42:23

Title: New chars (no sneezing tho) (M)
Post by: !xOWOx! on 2020-04-13 20:42:23
https://x-0u0-x.tumblr.com/post/615341257174237184/new-characters-emma-and-robbie-honest-to-god

These are supposed to be the secondary characters for the plot that I’m making up in my head, but since finishing this drawing, I’m not sure that they can work anymore. With the way I imagine it, the common cold’s supposed to just be this person/entity that wanders around and goes from place to place in order to spread the cold. He’s like a hitchhiker, except he’s also a germ. If there are secondary characters that would tie him down to one area, then the concept kinda doesn’t work anymore. What do you think of these characters? Should I keep them or no?

Also, this is a continuation of my last post: https://x-0u0-x.tumblr.com/post/615216243053674496/more-common-cold-enjoy-if-anyones-even-out
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho)
Post by: flemishcap on 2020-04-14 01:06:04
Hehehe.  I like your cartoony style.  Emma and that dude that pulls her back is cute! I say keep em'.   But do as you please.
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho)
Post by: timmelon on 2020-04-14 01:58:40
I just love the first frame ^-^.
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho)
Post by: Soda on 2020-04-14 15:24:34
I like those new characters and how they look! So cute.
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2020-04-14 15:49:13
It is all up to you, but you often need a few characters for people to latch on to when reading a story/comic.  Having someone to counter balance the common cold is good.  I like their designs.
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2020-04-15 13:38:06
Really it is up to you.  The character expressions especially on panel three is good!
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho)
Post by: Ynona on 2020-04-15 15:01:35
Clean and nice art style! Great job!!
Title: Re: New chars (no sneezing tho) (M)
Post by: Bumble on 2020-04-16 01:24:13
I like the designs of the two new characters.