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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Silverwing on 2016-05-16 13:49:27

Title: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-05-16 13:49:27
I don't know the anime, I've never watched it, but here we go!!  I got a commission to draw this character named Asuka.  They wanted her sneezing due to pepper and they wanted very big breasts and all the stuff you would expect for fan-servicing!  I toned all that down and came up with this! :D  Hope you enjoy. 

>>Sneezy Comic (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Asuka-Pepper-Sneeze-Comic-609203421)<<
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-16 13:51:22
HNNNG!! *THUD*
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2016-05-16 13:52:02
Full on anime, Silverwing!  You drew some crazy craze here!  She looks great and I love how we see the build up and sneezes!  Multiple sneezes with tons of cute expressions and sniffly noises.  Very nice work.  I hope the commissioner loved it! 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2016-05-16 13:52:27
HNNNG!! *THUD*

*Lightly kicks you with my foot till you move.*
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-16 13:54:02
*wakes up* Huh? What happened? *sees comic again* HNNNG *THUD*
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2016-05-16 13:55:02
*Drags Numbers out of the vicinity of the picture then lightly shakes you.*

Wake up. 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-16 13:56:15
I'm awake, I'm awake.

Cute comic, Silver. ;D
"No, really?"
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-16 13:59:21
The eyes are so adorable I must say! It's anime but it's still your style eyes in there. I love the cute expressions and build ups and snifflyness. Heh heh, look at how her breasts move. Overall it's really cute! I hope the commissioner was very happy :D there's a lot of panels of sneezy goodness for them to enjoy!

(Also, 'm seeing a certain someone scrounging around to ask for another commission. Be prepared and have strength, Silverwing).
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-05-16 16:38:05
Lookitdis cutie! I feel like I know the design somewhere but can't put my finger on it.

Anyways, I like the build ups! I get the impression of a real adorable sound! Awesome as always, silver!
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Umbreon on 2016-05-17 03:56:36
Aww the cuties nice job :)
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2016-05-17 10:43:34
That is really good!  Wow!  You continue to show off all you can do! 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2016-05-17 22:01:28
I may be a little silly, but to be honest one of my favorite details...is the words XD The "predator" is a pepper shaker? The victim is a sweet designed girl? Makes me think back to when Discord suddenly made a pepper shaker appear out of thin air in the earlier/older episodes.
 
My favorite expressions are the two middle top expressions. Seeing her eyes open and then close like that as the peppery scent gets too much for her to handle is honestly REALLY funny to me because if she's who I think she is, she wouldn't like to have pepper do this to her XD

It's odd though. Asuka is a common Japanese name. I thought I knew who this girl was but there's honestly a few girls that I have heard of, in anime and real life, that have this name. I'm not sure what the name means specifically but it's cool you drew this comic :)

The way you drew her eyes and eyebrows is cute to me. Great expressive eyes ^^ I think something you did that also made me smile is how her hair bangs and even her bow thing gets a little crazy when she releases her sneezes!

Thank you for drawing this Silverwing. I really enjoyed seeing something unexpected from you :)
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-05-18 09:04:29
This is really cool to see your skills here, Silverwing.  I think you did a good job overall and her hair is well done!  It moves around!  Nice anime style too. 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2016-05-21 07:48:22
Check out IdiotFarm's latest comment.

"After checking the list and examples, is there a reason why the prices are so high.
I could understand if the quality was a lot better, but there's no way something like this fav.me/d9qdq9e should be priced at $5. Wanting $9 for a sketch like this fav.me/d9qeyw8  is crazy. Then asking people to shell out an extra $10 for some ultra simple cel style coloring fav.me/d9qicbk is just insane.

When the majority of the material being offered for sale here is just basically warm-up doodle quality, the prices should reflect that."

Sigh... so full of anger. 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-05-21 08:02:41
I am sure I shouldn't have responded, but I did earlier this morning to him. 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-21 08:04:08
Check out IdiotFarm's latest comment.

"After checking the list and examples, is there a reason why the prices are so high.
I could understand if the quality was a lot better, but there's no way something like this fav.me/d9qdq9e should be priced at $5. Wanting $9 for a sketch like this fav.me/d9qeyw8  is crazy. Then asking people to shell out an extra $10 for some ultra simple cel style coloring fav.me/d9qicbk is just insane.

When the majority of the material being offered for sale here is just basically warm-up doodle quality, the prices should reflect that."

Sigh... so full of anger.

Translation: "I can't afford them." ::)
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-21 08:30:04
We have to recall he only wants the highest quality and has unreasonable demands. If he's unhappy with the costs then he doesn't have to buy anything, and he for sure doesn't have to be an ass about it. Saying that Silver's art isn't quality. I think you responded well Silverwing, it's in a way where he can't say something back without looking like even more of an asshole. Good job there.
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-21 08:31:45
Oh no, Numbers, more like "I think your art is too shit". This guy has been known to shlock out $50 for sneeze art. And then still bitch about it.
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-21 08:59:53
Geez. :o
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: yasl on 2016-05-21 10:40:19
It is a Known Thing that IdiotFarm is a douchenozzle.  He's not worth any attention.
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-21 13:02:13
He says: "It really wouldn't kill you guys to lose that elitist attitude for five minutes."
...douchenozzle.
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-21 14:00:26
He really is becoming ridiculously irritating.
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2016-05-22 01:06:48
I will be blunt and honest about this.

He is an ass.

He's and armchair quarterback who points out all the flaws with the world, but doesn't actually solve anything himself. He wants to be a good artist, and he is decent, but he sucks overall.  I am done giving him credit, we've all tried too much.  He sucks. He causes more problems then he is worth and then he has the gal to call US elitists?  No, the only elitist I see is him.  He thinks he is better then everyone, and that the world owes him everything.  Well actually, he does owe apologies to a lot of people.

But yeah, he is an ass. 
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-22 05:35:39
*applauds* Well spoken.
XD
Title: Re: Asuka Pepper Sneeze Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-22 06:47:00
While I agree with most of what you say, we shouldn't stoop to his level and insult his art. We know that he's very self conscious about his art. And saying he sucks overall is just... Well mean. I know he's worse than that, but I just don't find it right to stoop to his level.