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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-05-19 08:28:59

Title: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-05-19 08:28:59
Just something I have played with many times, but redrew with two random pones.  I like the idea and keep playing with and probably will continue to do so. 


Sneezy comic (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Swapping-Spit-609935298)
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-19 08:54:16
Haha, I just saw it on Derpibooru. Which also brings the question, was it you that uploaded it: https://derpibooru.org/1157748. If not...

But ha, this is really funny actually. The expressions are great XD I love how his lips droop down after she sneezes on him. And really quite the appropriate reaction from both lol, with Henry being pretty squicked out. Poor them, they both have tears in their eyes at the end of it all. Btw, I really like their designs, they're pretty cute. Love that bow in the females hair, and just love her hair design in general.
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-05-19 08:56:52
I can picture this animated!  I got exactly what you were trying to do in my head.  She sneezes, his lips cartoonishly droop, probably accompanied by a funny drooping noise.  It was really cute, and funny.  I also give props for using to completely made up designs because we have no association with these two.  They were just funny. :)  You also did a good job on their designs and colors.  All too many designs or horrendous when average people try to make a character.  You are no average person though. ;) 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-05-19 08:59:04
Thank you for the concern.  I did post that on Derps. 

Also thank you guys.  I am glad you like them both :)  I like the word "Squicked" used by LP.  Not sure what it means, but I made up a fun meaning in my head.  Yeah, they were both kinda weak sauce since they had tears at the end.  Henry just wanted a kiss (Tried to think of a very average name).  I like the idea of faces being touched or squished like this and a sneeze.  It always intrigues me. :) 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Soda on 2016-05-19 09:03:43
I love how her eyes get all big and teary after she is done.  That moment of pause between the sneeze and talking is classic too. :)  Very cute couple here. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-19 09:25:01
Alright, just wanted to be sure.

Ah, well, squicked (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Squick) is a TvTrope. It usually is used to describe something icky or gross. So I use it as a verb. Face squishing is a thing people like during sneezing it seems, I know Rainy did something similar with a Lyra comic he did. It does make for cute faces.
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2016-05-19 10:49:18
This is lovely!  Oh my!  What a cute comic and funny scenario!  Poor Henry!  Henry just wanted a kiss, is that too much to ask for? 

Based on the set up though, it seems they were both gonna have kissy kissy play time.  He had his hooves in a very lovey spot for some endearing kisses, and based on her reaction, she wanted to kiss too.  It just snuck up on her. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-05-19 11:38:39
APD, this is awesome.  I love it when you do comics! 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-05-19 12:08:39
That was so f%#$ing cute. ;D

Poor Henry.
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: NostradamusTheSeer on 2016-05-19 14:06:30
And it's so something that could happen.  The perils of a sneeze (or any body function or noise, really ) during an intimate moment. An understanding partner will take it in stride (no Pony pun intended).
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-05-19 19:06:03
RIP Henry

Sneezeblocked

I bet they were dating too.
That's a cute character btw! Her giant bow is adorbs!

THIS is an adorbs pic!
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2016-05-19 20:54:19
They come off as young to me.  But they are both very cute in design.  They are probably in the early phases of dating maybe? ;)  It's a cute little comic here and very nicely drawn, with bright, happy colors. The expressions won me over too.  Poor Henry.  If he is going to stay with her, he might have to get used to that. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-05-19 20:56:07
I just noticed the snot string in panel two, then it breaks apart in panel three!  I love little details like that, and how the spray on poor Henry actually moved down his face between the two panels.  Nice generic pone designs.  The bow is pretty cool, and giving you props for not following the norm of making a female pone pink, just because she is female.  You even gave her dark blue areas. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-05-20 03:08:50
This is a win.  Just start stamping WIN all over this pic.  :)  Very cute. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-05-20 03:36:57
I just noticed the snot string in panel two, then it breaks apart in panel three!  I love little details like that, and how the spray on poor Henry actually moved down his face between the two panels.  Nice generic pone designs.  The bow is pretty cool, and giving you props for not following the norm of making a female pone pink, just because she is female.  You even gave her dark blue areas.

I loved that too! :D  I love it when there are minor details like that. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-05-20 04:24:36
Sorry to bring this up, but I love the comments. 

I know that the one person who mentioned sneezing was a fetish was trying to mention it in a negative light.  I love how someone said, "cool," about sneezing fetishes.  Kind of made them have nothing more to say. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-20 07:14:15
I saw that too XD Whoever that was, just yes. And then the other comment.
That poster does go around and say things like that so I wasn't very surprised to see him there.
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2016-05-20 07:19:22
I saw that too XD Whoever that was, just yes. And then the other comment.
That poster does go around and say things like that so I wasn't very surprised to see him there.

And then they acted like they had never seen a sneeze fetish before by saying they were surprised. Previous topics they knew exactly what they were talking about and trying to be negative.  Glad for that anon.  :) 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-05-20 07:36:26
This ... this.... hhrrrrggggg!!!!! So.......hhrrrrrrrr........cute!!!!
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-20 07:53:27
No, I don't think he was acting surprised, he was merely stating it so anybody faving it thinking it was an innocent picture knew an was probably hoping they'd down vote it out of disgust or something.
Lol nevermind, I just saw his most recent comment. What a dick.
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-05-20 08:01:36
They were just being a dork.  For some reason it is "cool" to be hating on sneezing fetish material on Derpibooru.  It is cool to give it down vote.

But go ahead and up vote far more devious pics, thats cool. 
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-20 08:26:07
I'm tempted to anonymously reply and comment on how one can be surprised more than once on the same topic.
Title: Re: Swapping Spit Comic (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-05-20 09:16:32
I'm tempted to anonymously reply and comment on how one can be surprised more than once on the same topic.

*Nudges*

Do it. 

Or do what you want. ;)