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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Roul on 2022-03-26 17:26:39
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Good evening, everyone. It's been a while since I have posted art, but since it's near the end of my break from university. I was able to draw and am interested in sharing my sneeze art with you.
Now, for the sake of organization, I do like and plan to dedicate this one topic to the numerous artwork that I draw (and plan to draw) as opposed to a separate topic for a separate character. I hope you don't mind and that this is acceptable :D. As a disclaimer, please do note that my sneeze art is generally focused on characters from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and that the sneezes I draw are moderately (to extremely) messy. Sneezes feature buildup, release, and aftermath.
(EDIT: Thank you Kiwi for the suggestion)
With this in mind, I will use this initial post to list the characters I have drawn sneezing. This includes art from other topics I've started as well as art posted here.
My Little Pony: Generation 4
•Tempest Shadow/Fizzlepop Berrytwist (Unicorn) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=3860.0)
•Tempest Shadow/Fizzlepop Berrytwist [Extended Comic Version] (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4015.msg553077#msg553077)
•Queen Novo (Seapony) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=3873.0)
•Mage Meadowbrook (Earth Pony) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=3894.0)
•Mage Meadowbrook [Extended Comic Version] (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4015.msg625683#msg625683)
•Princess Skystar (Hippogriff) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=3902.0)
•Somnambula (Pegasus) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=3925.0)
•Princess Ember (Dragon) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=3991.0)
•Mistmane (here)
•Lily Lace (Unicorn) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4015.msg537654#msg537654)
•Strawberry Sunrise (Pegasus) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4015.30)
My Little Pony: Generation 5
•Opaline Arcana (Alicorn) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4015.msg625683#msg625683)
My Little Pony Original Characters
Sometimes, I may draw original characters:
•Smiles2Us (Earth Pony) (https://psfforum.com/index.php?topic=4422.0)
Mistmane (Unicorn)
For the first post in this topic, here is Mistmane!
Mistmane finds beauty in everything, even in her own sneezes.
Image too small? View a larger resolution here. (https://sta.sh/025pqh0xvxw4)
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df2g7hj-5b1c90f5-9070-471f-bfe0-695d6a8155ea.png/v1/fill/w_710,h_1125,q_70,strp/mistmane_sneeze_by_kmlp1999_df2g7hj-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MjAyNyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGYyZzdoai01YjFjOTBmNS05MDcwLTQ3MWYtYmZlMC02OTVkNmE4MTU1ZWEucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.bbUbWS09quMZvhnPbvQmHqEJR3mm7sryga7YGnZfNmw)
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Your mess is on a whole other level! It is incredible! That fourth panel is intense! Same with the second one!
Having your art in one place is nice if you choose to do so. :) Awesome work, and I hope you had a good break from university.
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Your mess is on a whole other level! It is incredible! That fourth panel is intense! Same with the second one!
Having your art in one place is nice if you choose to do so. :) Awesome work, and I hope you had a good break from university.
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WOW! Now that is a messy and an explosive sneeze! Awesome job!
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Great stuff as always! :D Mistmane is not someone I ever expected to see I must admit. As always, you carry on your signature look in yet another incredible piece!
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I look forward to seeing what you come up with for this topic! You are off to a terrific start based on your other art you've shared and this one. :) Anything you draw, it will be fun!
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Thank you guys. I am glad that this form of organization is acceptable and it does mean a lot that you enjoy my drawings :nervoussmile:
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Awesome new comic! I don't know how to keep heaping praise without sounding redundant. ;D
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Lovely! Extremely messy! You have earned a place in the heart of messy sneeze lovers everywhere!
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Nice new comic, Kmlp. You always choose someone I never expect. She's a little too old for my tastes. Apparently I am age-ist. ;D
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Awesome new comic! I love how you color these too. They are very good.
I am curious how you will change the topic titles (if you do) when new characters are added. The only negative with this is if you search for a character in the art section, it might be hard to find them. I guess you can change the specific title to the post to reflect the character's name.
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Humungous is an understatement here! Fantastic!
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When she sneezes her magic also goes nuts! She's dangerous! Good job on that 'see through' effect on her manetoo!
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I know I'm repeating myself, but thanks for the feedback guys :nervoussmile: I'm glad I'm able to organize my art in a single topic.
I am curious how you will change the topic titles (if you do) when new characters are added. The only negative with this is if you search for a character in the art section, it might be hard to find them. I guess you can change the specific title to the post to reflect the character's name.
I'm not sure exactly how to be honest lmao. I'm likely going to go with a title change approach though if my next character's name is not too long.
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If you add other art to the topic, you might want to make the first post have links to the other art within the topic so they don't become lost. You don't have too, but you can.
Great work on the comic as always! I really am enjoying your series of sneeze pics.
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Lovin' it! Also kudos on the different angles and perspectives you drew her in. I would think that is difficult. That angle in panel three in particular seems complicated, being lower and her head being raised. Impressive.
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Really nice new piece! :D I love these comics. I have them saved as a mini collection of your talent! They are very cool!
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Hi guys. Here's another new sneezy pone [excited]
Lily Lace (Unicorn)
Here we have Lily Lace, also sometimes nicknamed unicorn Fluttershy.
Her sneezes ain't elegant like her dresses, but it is dramatic.
Image too small? View a larger resolution here. (https://sta.sh/014fj7hu31dm)
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df3pbbl-e12ea2d3-a6de-48d6-a317-6f54118e0314.png/v1/fill/w_1095,h_730,q_70,strp/lily_lace_sneeze_by_kmlp1999_df3pbbl-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9ODU0IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvNTJlMDg1NDAtNmJmZC00MjYxLWFiODktNjY1ZTYwZWM1NGM3XC9kZjNwYmJsLWUxMmVhMmQzLWE2ZGUtNDhkNi1hMzE3LTZmNTQxMThlMDMxNC5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTI4MCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19.Q8ncUnUWQTFOyqBFSCAAjkjqdiKGKeF8PD_-T-XKH6Y)
PS: I strongly believe her dialogue is funnier when you read it in her own voice. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-yZrsBIHxY) ;)
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Wow. :nervoussmile:
She needs not only a tissue box, but the bucket as well.
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That is some insanity levels of mess right there. Wow.
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It is hard to do, but this one went over my limit for snot. AHH! Lol! That said, I am so glad someone else remember Lily Lace! :D Also that first panel of her worried "I'm gonna sneeze" face is classic! Love it! Also skill on that see-thru dress.
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Nice job on the coloring on this one. The colors are ever changing with the lighting. Nice touch with the subtle shading work and even those clouds! Good work on your latest creation.
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Her reaction seems exactly as I would expect! Lol! Fantastic!
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It is like her nose was a ticking time bomb. I believe it has exploded. Call the American Bomb Squad. (I think I said that right, lol)
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Always love what you do. WOW, she had a lot of stuff in her nose to clear out. Holy shnikey!
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Wow. That is a pretty messy sneeze!
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I like her design and her see-through dress thing. I really like your work. Personally, this is too much mess for me, but it's fine because, as I said, I love your work. ;D
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Very good expressions and forceful sneezing! :) I admit I have to try to look beyond the mess, but that's OK. ;) Keep up the great work, @Kmlp !
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I like some mess, but this is too much for me, this time. But I do really LOVE what you draw and your character designs too. I like the "softer" colors you tend to choose. They are overly saturated and give me sort of a picture book vibe. It's peaceful. I like it a lot. I love how she is set off so randomly to sneeze such a massive blow.
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I really enjoy your comics. :D I like how you draw and color them a lot. Keep it up. :)
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Hello guys. Sorry I haven't been active lately. I got busy with schoolwork and have been attempting to develop my art style since. However, I did find time to draw and eventually finished this new sneezy pone piece. On another note, I read, appreciated, and listened to your feedback for my previous piece, so while I do love over-the-top mess, I think it'd be fun to tone it down but include a bit of humor too, and my attempt starts with this new sneezy victim pone. Enjoy! [excited]
Strawberry Sunrise (Pegasus)
Here we have Strawberry Sunrise, the mare who hates apples for some reason.
Apples were superior after all, I guess.
Note: I initially drew this at a smaller-than-usual resolution to reduce file size, but then I realized in the middle of drawing this that there was a better way to do so without sacrificing resolution :nervoussmile:. Please view a larger resolution here. (https://sta.sh/01n2z7bl6sez)
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df5xsg5-71836cb3-7c8e-4716-b9a3-a9db89a1b055.png/v1/fill/w_653,h_1224,q_70,strp/strawberry_sunrise_sneeze_by_kmlp1999_df5xsg5-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTkyMCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGY1eHNnNS03MTgzNmNiMy03YzhlLTQ3MTYtYjlhMy1hOWRiODlhMWIwNTUucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEwMjQifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.PO-VVDXO8ZHLM9qsHQor2-a5ZFSYeynWaCssd4o6hIg)
If you enjoy my comics, please bear with me for the upcoming weeks: I have sneezy plans for two of the ponies I've already drawn ???
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Hey, no worries! Take the time you need.
That said, this is great! I love how she tosses the strawberries to safety so they don't get covered in her mess. Strawberries can be washed from the soft grassy ground. You also greatly accelerated your style! A very interactive comic, various awesome angles, good lighting/shading, and dang, that background and lighting is awesome! I love those clouds ad how you did the mountains and trees. That looks really good. I love the low angles then how the 'camera' angle isn't afraid to move anywhere it needs to go. You did a great job showing the fluidity of body movements! Everything about this is improvements!
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Wow, she is a real fan of strawberry, even the spray cloud is strawberry-shaped ;D.
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She got wrecked! I take it you like messy sneezes? :D This looks great, artistically, it is a step forward for the reasons @Silverwing said. Nice job!
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Oooooh, she's got a tickly nose indeed! :D I wonder if she's allergic to grass or strawberries, or maybe both?...
Great job!
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Explosive! Thank you! It does look really good and I do think your drawing style keeps getting more and more refined.
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Awesome! Silverwing really said it best, you are getting better with each and every piece you do.
Even thought she hates apples (for some reason) I feel bad for her here.
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Great work on this! I have to point out the background colors and the clouds and the colors on them. They look great! But the real star of the show here is Strawberry Sunrise's crazy sneezes and the angles you drew her in! Great stuff, Kmlp!
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Thanks so much guys 😁. It does mean a lot that you too can see the changes and development of my artstyle as the pieces go on. I look forward to sharing an upcoming redraw [excited]
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First of all, this whole topic is awesome! I just stumbled into it and was smacked across the face with pages of art! Thanks!
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^ I am intrigued.
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Somehow, this is the first time I see sneeze sprays with 2 colours haha. These green and blue outbursts of snot and saliva (and possibly tears), along with your unique pony style make for very enjoyable art pieces. Kudos! ^b-
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Somehow, this is the first time I see sneeze sprays with 2 colours haha.
You've missed a lot then. Lol. Some have been doing it this way since the first pony artists came out and did spray sneezes. :nervoussmile:
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A few weeks ago I mentioned that I have plans for drawing a sneezy character I've already drawn before. Thought I'd just share a very small preview on what's to come soon.
Remember her? Hope she looks tough, because she's going to get absolutely demolished by sneezes. ;)
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df7cnlz-472422ea-f9fd-42aa-b1e8-e3fef56fc30f.jpg/v1/fill/w_989,h_808,q_70,strp/tempest_sneeze_preview_by_kmlp1999_df7cnlz-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTA0NSIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGY3Y25sei00NzI0MjJlYS1mOWZkLTQyYWEtYjFlOC1lM2ZlZjU2ZmMzMGYuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.sRbcErAYiqNzdcWNZFdhhPhyXfbCdnMQQ53BifpgEmo)
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I can only imagine where this is gonna go! :) Good work on the forest behind her too. Like, legit!
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Her armor is pretty neat. Looks like she is running fast for some reason.
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That armor is pretty legit. :)
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Thanks! Glad you liked the armor change and the background :)
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I'm real curious as to what this will become! Consider my hyped!
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She looks pretty intense and serious. Oh how the mighty will fall.
Also her horn is fixed! :D Or maybe this was before all that stuff happened.
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Hi everyone. As usual, I've been busy with school, but I'm on summer break now ooh yeeeee.
I promised a redraw of a MLP character I've drawn before, so here it is :).
Tempest Shadow/Fizzlepop Berrytwist (Unicorn) [Extended Comic]
This was the first character I've drawn sneezing; however, I decided to draw her again since my artstyle has developed over the months. If you'd like to see the old version, you may view it here (little mess, by the way ;) ). (https://sta.sh/02be9sw47j9j) Personally, I didn't think she was defeated that badly in the old version, so here I attempted to completely destroy her [excited] [excited] [excited]. Hope you enjoy.
If you're having a bad day, cheer yourself up by reminding yourself that you didn't have to report to your quest-giver with a face full of your own... you know.
Page 1: The Beginning
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df7s071-86646fba-e614-42ef-967a-8779d674c1e5.png/v1/fill/w_710,h_1125,q_70,strp/tempest_shadow_sneeze_1_by_kmlp1999_df7s071-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MjAyNyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGY3czA3MS04NjY0NmZiYS1lNjE0LTQyZWYtOTY3YS04Nzc5ZDY3NGMxZTUucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.AOL5fbXJAD__bEhaQzAq0mT_590DatycQb7OSjcmrhc)
Page 2: The Middle
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df7s06r-1d8cef2c-2b2a-4fc2-86f9-9ced05b25662.png/v1/fill/w_710,h_1125,q_70,strp/tempest_shadow_sneeze_2_by_kmlp1999_df7s06r-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MjAyNyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGY3czA2ci0xZDhjZWYyYy0yYjJhLTRmYzItODZmOS05Y2VkMDViMjU2NjIucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.E3KkkjLsCNVNwMP2DHfusx7BS1GfZ5cetsXLPH9fpVk)
Page 3: Despair
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df7s06c-c07303b1-e257-4805-ac57-b194c732e826.png/v1/fill/w_710,h_1125,q_70,strp/tempest_shadow_sneeze_3_by_kmlp1999_df7s06c-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MjAyNyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGY3czA2Yy1jMDczMDNiMS1lMjU3LTQ4MDUtYWM1Ny1iMTk0YzczMmU4MjYucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.79P39blIq356KWfLVArCx5_-CPWGBJWMedCsALSd8Dc)
Page 4: The "SIKE one more" part & Aftermath
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/52e08540-6bfd-4261-ab89-665e60ec54c7/df7s067-46487463-2a91-47c9-ac60-a8efaa7681c4.png/v1/fill/w_710,h_1125,q_70,strp/tempest_shadow_sneeze_4_by_kmlp1999_df7s067-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MjAyNyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzUyZTA4NTQwLTZiZmQtNDI2MS1hYjg5LTY2NWU2MGVjNTRjN1wvZGY3czA2Ny00NjQ4NzQ2My0yYTkxLTQ3YzktYWM2MC1hOGVmYWE3NjgxYzQucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.UsHqN3QmDKgjLbmsh9pVpMksYo2-MFFTVOxE0vWn3i8)
Images too small? View a larger resolution below:
Page 1: The Beginning (https://sta.sh/0bvoij1pkkc)
Page 2: The Middle (https://sta.sh/01cxxnl0biun)
Page 3: Despair (https://sta.sh/0s36kc7o7o4)
Page 4: The "SIKE one more" part & Aftermath (https://sta.sh/01m8l952kyfh)
PS: If you do enjoy my comics, I do plan on making another redraw (extended comic), so I hope my idea is not too complicated to draw out :nervoussmile:
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Oooooohhh, what a lovely tickly nose, and forceful sneezes! ^-^ I especially like the images with the white flower on her nose. Keep up the great work! ^b-
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Oh my goodness! This is like a MOVIE-Comic because it's so long and detailed! By far, this is the best one you've made (but don't feel you have to make them to this caliber all the time, lol). This is awesome. The lightning bolt from her horn is also awesome. My fav sneeze is when she sneezes while laying on her back and that bolt shoots out. ;D Awesome work.
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WOW!!!! This is incredible! It is your current magnum opus! :D The entire story is funny with that silly light-bug going up one nose, then the other. Then the surprise sneeze at the end. I absolutely loved the force of her sneezes and how you remember to draw in areas where it was previously. :) Awesome! This is fantastic!
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I am at a loss for words here. This is incredibly awesome! You really captured some comedic moments here with that silly bug going out, then promptly flying in the other nostril, lol! Then how the sneeze leads to a branch snapping and the flower perfectly landing on her. Good stuff all around! I love the sneezes and their force. The mess is good, especially how you keep it in every panel instead of forgetting it. I love that attention to detail. I really thought she was going to slip on her own snot or something goofy. Fantastic! My favorite one you've done yet, and that's an accomplishment. You keep getting better and better all the time!
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Each and every comic is like a stepping stone. Each step you keep improving on one aspect here or there. It's incredible the quality you are churning out now in such a short span of time! This is fantastic! I will let the words of others fill in my blanks, because they are spot on! The various angles, and having to redraw new sets/scenery for each angle. You ability to properly draw a pose and the various angles of the body and head, you're doing great! Really good work again, Kmlp.
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This topic already has 8 or so pictures/comics and they just continue to be excellent! This is probably your most detailed one I've seen. I love the sneezing scenario and how it just keeps coming. The force and strength of her sneezes are awesome. I love how she goes down on her back and humorously sneezes upward, which then results in it splatting into her face. ;D
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Thank you guys ;D. I'm very glad that you enjoyed my first full-on comic lol. I definitely agree that this is by far the best sneeze comic I've made, and I had fun drawing it just as much as you guys had fun reading the scenarios here [excited] [excited] [excited].
I'll definitely be looking forward to my second redraw, which will also be an extended comic ;)
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Hey there @Kmlp. Haven't seen you post in awhile and just wishing you a good day! Hope you are doing well. :)
You redraw was also spectacular.
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Terrific redraw!!! TERRIFIC! I think you improved every aspect of it all. The original was good, this made it better!
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I love it. The details, the fine, fine details. They are everywhere in this. The improvement of character models, expressions, and backgrounds. Awesome work.
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Hello everyone, it's Kmlp. I'm here to provide an update as well as a new post.
Where I've been.
TL;DR Got busy with school projects, personal projects, and hardships at home.
Before I begin, I want to apologize for my sudden and long inactivity. There has been many things and developments that have occurred for me in the past few months, including dealing with (very) difficult parents, difficult school assignments, and getting caught up in personal programming projects too; however, I am happy to announce that many of those hardships are over for now since I have finally finished college :) . Because of this, I am able to enjoy more free time (or rather: more time without feeling like I'm walking on eggshells lmao) as I continue to search for a full-time job. In the meantime though, I've decided to draw more sneezy content and I'd love to continue interacting with this community more.
I promised a redraw/extended comic; however, I drew a second piece too [excited]
Opaline Arcana (Alicorn)
Opaline is the evil menance in My Little Pony: Generation 5. She is the first alicorn I've drawn sneezing. Let's destroy her!
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Mage Meadowbrook (Earth Pony)
Meadowbrook is the third character I've drawn sneezing; however, I wanted to draw an extended comic version of my fav character [excited].
Extreme mess. You've been warned!
Page 1: The Encounter
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Page 2: Buildup
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Page 3: Sneeze fit & Aftermath
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The mess is really extreme. ;D
I can say I like the concept of a butterfly-caused sneeze. MLP universe have used it from the very beginning.
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First of all, CONGRATS! You finished college!! :D That is a huge deal! I am very happy for you! I hope the hardships at home get better though (even though you said they did). I hope they stay better. :D Congrats on all you have accomplished.
I'd consider Opaline somewhat destroyed. She got off too easy. ;) Lol! Fantastic artwork by you here.
Also the extended Mage Meadwbrook comic is top notch. NOW THAT is what I call destroyed. She has been completely taken out by her sneezes! The mess is incredible and how she just keeps sneezing is AWESOME. Such a great comic! Even the shine from copious amounts of fluids is really nicely detailed. You have to appreciate and love mess to truly appreciate these highly detailed comics.
I have a dumb idea that I am floating out there. What happens if in the future one of these messy sneezing fits consumes a pony in front of public? Such as Octavia during a concert or Vinyl Scratch during a show? Twilight during a friendship mission or something. Just a thought.
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Well these are being saved into the Kmlp folder of art alongside some other icons of the PSF art community! Absolutely awesome stuff here!
(https://i.ibb.co/TvFV4LS/Screen-Shot-2023-04-11-at-6-20-30-PM.png)
The explosive snot bombs Opaline sneezes are pretty intense. A fit of three sneezes got her down, but I don't think I would call it punishment for her evil deeds, lol! Really good comic.
The Mage Meadowbrook comic got even better with these additions, but I cannot help but feel sorry for her. She's essentially a good pone, but she got completely wiped out with her sneezing fit. I love (and if I was there in person, would be disgusted) by the puddles and trails of liquids she leaves behind on the ground. But I love the attention to detail on keeping it right where it lands and not just disappearing like in a video game or something.
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I love it, I love it! These are truly not for the faint of heart! The sneezing mess from these exploding snouts are a masterpiece in their own way! Haha! Kudos on the see-thru liquidity of the fluids. You did that very well and the mixing of spit and snot. The expressions are good and the eyes, especially on Mage Meadowbrook, are really nice! How her hair becomes undone is perfect and the splatter of sneezy shame all around them really sets the tone. How can I not love the nostril flaring and pre sneeze faces? Superb! I love these.
I have a dumb idea that I am floating out there. What happens if in the future one of these messy sneezing fits consumes a pony in front of public? Such as Octavia during a concert or Vinyl Scratch during a show? Twilight during a friendship mission or something. Just a thought.
I like your thinking.
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Incredible new comics here! I love everything about these including the color choices and the build ups to these sneezes. You have great panels showing buildups tickling in their noses, nostril flare, eyes rolling back, movement of the hooves in a desperate attempt to hold back the sneezes. I love these! I really do. Seriously these are great and I like them each for diff reasons. The hairstyles on both of these characters is very labor-intensive looking to draw, so great job on doing them both flawlessly!
We always see them sneezing alone, I think other than seeing new characters, it would be interesting to see them sneeze in front of others, or maybe sneezing with someone else? That make take it to a whole new place for some fun. How do two character react when sneezing at or around each other, to try and avoid hitting each other?
PS: I love Meadowbrook with her mane down! [excited]
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These are lovely, not in the mucus and spittle kind of way, but the drawing talent kind of way! Congratulations on the graduation and I really hope things go well in your career hunt. Take it easy and aim for the stars (or not). Back to the comics. These look like they take a ton of time and effort. It really shows the work you put into these and I kind of feel wrong if there is a pressure from us to have you make these. I hope you make them because you want to and enjoy it. But I cannot deny how INCREDIBLE these are. Every one of these comics you've made has been a sneeze fetish masterpiece to examine and enjoy. Frame by frame, detail by detail. I find so much joy in looking at these and see their true fine print. :D
^ My wall of text with no paragraph breaks. :nervoussmile: Oops.
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Can we also take a moment to appreciate their art gallery of creative, colorful, and lovely drawings as well? If y'all haven't noticed, Kmlp has some great stuff on their DA page. (https://www.deviantart.com/kmlp1999/gallery)
If I may be so curious. Who has been your favorite character to draw a sneeze comic for so far?
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Very nice artwork, @Kmlp ! ^b- I like both comics - the colours are beautiful, and the sneezy expressions, nostrils, and the force of the sneezes are awesome. :) Keep up the great work! And congratulations on your graduation!
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These are so good, Kmlp! I had no idea how much I missed seeing your art because these are great! I like the colors and all those sneezy expressions. Frame by frame, you do not disappoint with the sneezy content and taking it to the next level! Awesome work and congratulations on your graduation! That is a big accomplishment!
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Thank you guys for the warm welcome-back! :) And yee I agree: finishing college is a massive accomplishment; I feel so free right now.
Gonna try to respond to all y'all without messing up the format and pinging too many members at once.
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@ timmelon
Ooooh yeee dat mess is plenty. And oo MLP has butterfly-induced sneezes? I don't remember seeing any, but knowing that it's canon is sweeeeeet.
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@ RainySunshine
Ooh yes I agree: Opaline was somewhat destroyed; Meadowbrook on the other hand is a goner [excited]. Also, do you mean "consumed" as in a sneeze destroying a pony or "consumed" as in their mess turning into the Smooze?
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@ Grapefoot
Thanks! That means a lot that you have a dedicated Kmlp folder 😅. And yee, I'm glad you enjoyed the attention to detail too regarding the mess. Gotta admit too that I feel bad for poor healer pone.
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@ Rainberry
Thanks! And LOL "sneezy shame" is the best way to describe the aftermath stage. I'm glad you enjoyed Meadowbrook's mane coming all loose too :)
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@ Graymist
Yeeeee both of these characters' hairstyles took quite a bit of work to get right; I'm happy with the results though. Glad you enjoyed these comics :)
P.S. IRK she's so pretty with her mane loose. [excited] [excited]
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@ Kiwi
Thanks for the graduation congrats! I'm gonna try to aim for the stars; hopefully it doesn't supernova before my shot lands :nervoussmile:. And don't worry, I do not feel any pressure at all from this community to create these comics. Whether regular comic or extended comic, I choose to include these many panels and details for my own personal enjoyment and self-improvement for art; it helps me a ton.
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@MasterXtreme
Thanks for the showcase! Glad you love the colors in my art as well. As for my fav character to draw a sneeze comic, dat's easy: it's Meadowbrook [excited][excited][excited].
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@ kiku
(I lost count of how many times I said thanks, but pls bear with me lol) Thanks kiku :). I'm glad to have finally finished college . I'm happy to hear that you love these colors and the expressions of these characters too.
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@ Anyponedrawn
Yeesss I agree; graduation is a massive accomplishment and it's hard for me to say in text how happy I am to finally finish it lol. I love taking sneezy content to the next level too :).
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Awesome! These turned out awesome and I really like the additions to the Meadowbrook comic. As others said, I do also like her hair down. ;D As for the Opaline comic, very good! I think she got off fairly easy compared to some. ;) But wow, all of these are fantastic with their colors, background, expressions, movement, and various 'camera' placement for each frame. No two are the same and you are always keeping the angles fresh.
The sneeze connoisseur in me loves the expressions, the build up, and the celebration of sneeze mess to it's highest level. Most artists in the community focus on buildup and maybe a frame of the sneeze itself and one of the post sneeze. You on the other hand give us several panels exploiting the sneezy situation in a celebration of sorts to see the explosion of the sneeze and post sneeze. You give us tons to see instead of one or two panels. There is truly so much to each comic and they are awesome to see!
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And oo MLP has butterfly-induced sneezes? I don't remember seeing any, but knowing that it's canon is sweeeeeet.
It was in the very first installment.
(https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2017/5/6/1429663.jpg) (https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2017/5/6/1429663.jpg)
Rescue at Midnight castle, which also has the famous Shoo-Be-Doo song.
[spoiler]and... the facefin!
(https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2018/7/11/1778892.png)
Not only facehooves can be shown by ponies![/spoiler]
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Sneezy shame indeed! :D lol! Thank you for making these!
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Wow, wow! These new ones are absolutely amazing. I had to recap a bit with some Tempest Shadow, which ended up in a complete mess! Loved it. But I really like the new Opaline and additions to Meadowbrook. So good! These are so good!
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Wow, wow! These new ones are absolutely amazing. I had to recap a bit with some Tempest Shadow, which ended up in a complete mess! Loved it. But I really like the new Opaline and additions to Meadowbrook. So good! These are so good!
Thanks :) . Looking back too, it also surprised me as well what aspects of my artstyle has changed.
@ Rainberry yeeeeee ofc [excited] [excited]
It was in the very first installment.
That poor pony :nervoussmile: :nervoussmile:
Awesome! These turned out awesome and I really like the additions to the Meadowbrook comic. As others said, I do also like her hair down. ;D As for the Opaline comic, very good! I think she got off fairly easy compared to some. ;) But wow, all of these are fantastic with their colors, background, expressions, movement, and various 'camera' placement for each frame. No two are the same and you are always keeping the angles fresh.
The sneeze connoisseur in me loves the expressions, the build up, and the celebration of sneeze mess to it's highest level. Most artists in the community focus on buildup and maybe a frame of the sneeze itself and one of the post sneeze. You on the other hand give us several panels exploiting the sneezy situation in a celebration of sorts to see the explosion of the sneeze and post sneeze. You give us tons to see instead of one or two panels. There is truly so much to each comic and they are awesome to see!
Saaame. I really like her mane down a lot, and this was a great opportunity for me to showcase that [excited] [excited] . I'm rly glad you like the flow of these comics too: I too enjoy seeing many panels that showcase the micro-moments of a sneeze fit :)
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Also, do you mean "consumed" as in a sneeze destroying a pony or "consumed" as in their mess turning into the Smooze?
Sneeze consuming her and destroying her will to go on... temporarily. ;)
How these sneezes take over the characters in your drawings, it's as if they have been defeated in battle! They are worn out after the sneezing ordeal.
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These are both spectacular, Kmlp! I have to repeat much of what was said. I love the many-panels, and expressions. Great presneezing faces and crazy sneeze mess! There is no hiding the facts from the viewer with these. ;D I love how you color them and all the angles too. You are such a fun artist to watch grow! I also want to congratulate you on your graduation!
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Your artistic ability and skills in drawing a comic are truly exceptional! Your attention to detail in this, your use of color, and ability to convey emotion through your characters is truly impressive. Your comics are always a joy to read and a visual feast for the eyes. You have a real talent at making my imagination animate these characters! Keep up the fantastic work, and know that your artistic talents are greatly appreciated and admired! Congrats on the huge achievement that is graduation!
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I just wanted to take a moment to say how much I admire your talent as a comic artist. Your work has a unique style and combined with your use of color and angling, you have an ability to convey sneezy mess like no other. Keep up the fantastic work, and know that your artistic abilities are truly appreciated and admired, Kmlp! I can't choose a fav between the Opaline and Mage Meadowbrook FULL comic! That's a good problem to have. ^_^
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These are so good! I love them and I do like the obscure characters, but I also would love to see some more mainline characters too (if you continue to make these, which I hope you do!). I do have one obscure character you might like to look up. Ms. Harshwhinny (https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Ms._Harshwhinny). She has a big nose that might be fun for you to play around with.
I can't really add more to what has been said. You are doing an awesome job and the comics are fantastic!
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Love seeing all the praise for this! :D
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Also, do you mean "consumed" as in a sneeze destroying a pony or "consumed" as in their mess turning into the Smooze?
Sneeze consuming her and destroying her will to go on... temporarily. ;)
How these sneezes take over the characters in your drawings, it's as if they have been defeated in battle! They are worn out after the sneezing ordeal.
Oh in that case, I may have a comic in the works that loosely has that scenario ;)
@ FoxTail
@ Bumble
@ TheBeesSneeze
Thanks for the congrats and reading these comics! Glad you enjoyed them [excited] [excited] . I had lots of fun coloring and shading these as well.
These are so good! I love them and I do like the obscure characters, but I also would love to see some more mainline characters too (if you continue to make these, which I hope you do!). I do have one obscure character you might like to look up. Ms. Harshwhinny (https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Ms._Harshwhinny). She has a big nose that might be fun for you to play around with.
I can't really add more to what has been said. You are doing an awesome job and the comics are fantastic!
Oooooh I may do at least one mainline character or Ms. Harshwhinny. At the moment, I have another work in progress, but yee I do plan on continuing to draw more of these comics too :) Glad you enjoy these.
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I do plan on continuing to draw more of these comics t00 :) Glad you enjoy these.
Hype!!! [excited] This is exciting news because after checking out these latest comics, I would certainly hope so! Lol! They are so well done and there is clearly so much care put into them. Absolutely loving what you are sharing with us. The expressions are great and the scenarios are somehow all different! I'd have been out of ideas by now, haha! Congrats on the big graduation! So happy for you. ^-^
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Ooooh, something in progress? You have me interested. :D
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I do plan on continuing to draw more of these comics t00 :) Glad you enjoy these.
Hype!!! [excited] This is exciting news because after checking out these latest comics, I would certainly hope so! Lol! They are so well done and there is clearly so much care put into them. Absolutely loving what you are sharing with us. The expressions are great and the scenarios are somehow all different! I'd have been out of ideas by now, haha! Congrats on the big graduation! So happy for you. ^-^
Yeah seeing the growth as an artist from drawing to drawing is sweet. Super excited for what’s next
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Really good on both of these large comics, Kmlp! I like them both, but this Opaline is an interesting character. That design. I haven't really seen the new show, but based on how you drew her, I'm expecting she looks pretty neat. ;D Haha! The sneezes and the post-sneeze content is truly amazing on all of these. There is so much sneezy content in just even a few panels of your work compared to so many others!
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What a fabulous set of new comics you made here! These are truly wonderful and SO messy! These mares really get wiped out after a sneezing fit! Very well done!
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I do plan on continuing to draw more of these comics t00 :) Glad you enjoy these.
Hype!!! [excited] This is exciting news because after checking out these latest comics, I would certainly hope so! Lol! ... Congrats on the big graduation! So happy for you. ^-^
Thanks! Finally complete after all these years lol. :)
Ooooh, something in progress? You have me interested. :D
Super excited for what’s next
Oooh yes. I don't want to spoil (promise) too much right now, but as a hint: although it's not a canon character, you may recognize the next pony regardless, especially since it's from this forum. ;)
Really good on both of these large comics, Kmlp! I like them both, but this Opaline is an interesting character. That design. I haven't really seen the new show, but based on how you drew her, I'm expecting she looks pretty neat. ;D Haha! The sneezes and the post-sneeze content is truly amazing on all of these. There is so much sneezy content in just even a few panels of your work compared to so many others!
Thanks! Glad you enjoy these comics. In my opinion, I love Opaline's design as well; however, the 3D renders of her from the official show sometimes cause some of her respective colors to clash with each other at least for my eyes. If you're interested, here is the screencap I recommend featuring dis new Alicorn menace (Derpibooru). (https://derpibooru.org/images/2955106?q=opaline+arcana%2C+screencap) [excited]
What a fabulous set of new comics you made here! These are truly wonderful and SO messy! These mares really get wiped out after a sneezing fit! Very well done!
Thanks! And yeee who ever thought that sneezes could be this destructive? ;)
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So good! What a collection you've grown here. Every one of these comics is great and you can see your progression through them each. This new Opaline comic and the new additions to the Meadowbrook one are fantastic! The 'nose abuse' is real with these! The mess is intense and definitely not for the squeamish! I think what really makes me love these even more is that they are the 'full package.' A comic, that is massive, and colored, and well drawn! All the bits to make a great comic. Usually we only get aspects, like maybe it's well drawn, but not colored, or some other combination. These have everything.