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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Rainberry on 2022-07-11 20:42:50

Title: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2022-07-11 20:42:50
A character named Deliambre (https://www.derpibooru.org/tags/oc-colon-deliambre) is drawn sneezing as a commission by Stormcloud (https://twitter.com/Storm_SCR/status/1507821817167286278).

Derpibooru Link (https://www.derpibooru.org/images/2905127?q=sneezing)

(https://i.imgur.com/J8ZEof3.png) (https://i.imgur.com/J8ZEof3.png)
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2022-07-11 20:45:01
Colored and shaded well.
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2022-07-11 20:46:24
It is honestly quite forgettable.  Sorry, sorry.  No really good sneezy content.  But as for the art itself, the artist did a fine enough job.  (aok)
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: timmelon on 2022-07-11 20:47:47
That’s what we call a double covering — hoof, then wing... and the handkerchief is waiting for its turn.
Something tells me this pony don’t very like the open sneezes ;D.
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2022-07-11 20:48:42
Hoof and wing protection, but she still exposes part of her mouth and nostrils.  She needs to work on this practice. ;)
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2022-07-11 20:56:01
Cute.
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Soda on 2022-07-11 21:00:26
I think the colors on her are pretty good.  Very tiny, uneventful sneeze, but what do you expect from non SF's?  :D
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: timmelon on 2022-07-11 21:02:18
...uneventful sneeze...
I like how it sounds ;D.
Not shy, but uneventful.
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Soda on 2022-07-11 21:04:10
I wouldn't buy tickets to this sneeze show. ;D
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2022-07-11 21:04:45
uneventful sneeze

This describes it perfectly.  This drawing and sneeze are uneventful.  (aok)
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: timmelon on 2022-07-11 21:08:15
This word describes the opposite of one of common sneezing styles, where there is no so much nose cleaning, but a lot of screaming «ACHOO!», like this person tries to make an event.
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2022-07-11 21:10:14
It's so lazy when someone just write "Achoo."  It's like they didn't even try to make it sound cool, unique, or diff! 
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: timmelon on 2022-07-11 21:13:05
It could be funnier if they write «...sneezes...» in that cloud.

Like here (https://derpibooru.org/images/2286738) ;D.

BTW, in the official MLP Wiki most of transcripts are made in that way.

    Rainbow Dash: Take cover!
    Twilight Sparkle: Ah... Ah... [sneezes loudly]
    [magic zap]
    Applejack: Uh-oh! Whoooaaa! [screaming]
    Twilight Sparkle: Sorry, Applejack.
    Rainbow Dash: I'll get you down!
    Twilight Sparkle: [sneezes]
    [magic zap]
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2022-07-11 21:15:14
It could be funnier if they write «...sneezes...» in that cloud.

Like here (https://derpibooru.org/images/2286738) ;D.

I was just going to say the same thing.

*Sneeze* or *sneezes* is the absolute laziest! Whomever does that needs to be thrown in jail!  C:-)
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Soda on 2022-07-11 21:19:09
Lock em' up! Throw away the key!
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: timmelon on 2022-07-11 21:19:45
*Sneeze* or *sneezes* is the absolute laziest! Whomever does that needs to be thrown in jail!  C:-)

Well, in favor of this technique I can say there are people (like me) who prefers voiceless sneezes, and that rich sound (https://vocaroo.com/1nk4PHNOw5NY) made by nose, lips and cheeks may not be transliterated well.
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2022-07-11 21:21:26
True...... but I still say throw em' in jail.  [wink]
Title: Re: Sneeze Into Hoof (F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2022-07-17 17:07:51
It's fine.  Nice colors.