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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Ari-Dynamic on 2016-05-27 01:12:49

Title: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Ari-Dynamic on 2016-05-27 01:12:49
http://fav.me/da420vq

Background's not all that great because I'm on a time limit, but I have plans to go back and revise it before all my big commissions come my way. XD

Friend and I have been RPing this with Edmond as the instigator of her sneeze fits. x3
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-05-27 02:40:20
You do such a good job with the pre sneeze expressions, like in this pic.  I like how her finger (FEATHER) is on her beak!  :D  Ha ha, very cute, Patripony. 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-05-27 04:40:01
You have some of the most interesting animal choices.  A pheasant? :D Lol!  How cool and really nicely done. 

I like how you claim this background ain't great!  Looks great to me. :)
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-05-27 04:50:01
Goldie Hawn.  Heh.  They could make a character called Goldie Fawn and model her after a dear.  See, when you named this Pheasant, Goldie, I thought of dumb things!

This is really nice, Patrimony!!!  Ha ha ha!  I made funny with your name too.  I like the poses her hands and fingers are in too.  Seems like she really can't control it.  I guess with a birds beak, you would only need a finger to cover those goofy little nostril spouts.  Nice one! 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2016-05-27 06:12:40
Backgrounds don't have to be detailed, it can detract from the source matter, which in this case is Goldie here.  Great finger placement and funny expression!  She's trying, but will she succeed?  I doubt it. 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-05-27 06:19:24
Heh, cute. 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-05-27 09:28:03
Good one, Patripony. :)  I like how you made this character.  Original? 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2016-05-27 09:41:40
Hehehe!  I like her, she's cute! :D  Good character design and nicely drawn sneezy sitch!
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2016-05-27 10:56:05
She's from a movie that you showed me, and honestly I'm surprised at how fun and nice she turned out in your art style here :D I honestly do not think the background is bad at all. The reason why: the background shows what she is feeling. The sneeze is distracting her from her performance, building more and more and the background is SHOWING that, just like how when a sneeze in real life really needs to happen, sometimes we ourselves lose focus of what's going on around us and just focus on our noses and trying to either hold it back, or just let it loose. It is very, VERY easy to see which one she's dealing with now. I can't blame her. Sneezing on stage is...*blushes* awesome to me, but I feel for her. She's trying the best she can though.

I've said before I love long hair, and she's got a dang good set of long hair XD. Her design is like a feathery version of Minerva Mink or Hello Nurse. Something I notice about her outfit design is how her dress near her hips has a flowing kind of wavy pattern and I like how you did her tail feathers. Also, that beak. I think you did a very nice job with it! :D I think what impresses me the most is how each hand is drawn. You took time drawing details with her, and your effort shows =)

The only thing I am a little confused on is who exactly she is nervous about sneezing in front of. It's not the audience. She's trying to say something else...I am curious what it is and how this sneeze actually will sound. Anyway, seriously though, this is a fun image and I'm happy you did something fun and based on what you wrote in something ^^
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Soda on 2016-05-27 11:36:11
What is she from?    It reminds me of those animated cartoons from the 90s (her design).  I like it. 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Ari-Dynamic on 2016-05-27 15:25:39
The cartoon Rock-a-Doodle. :3 It's hard to find movie clips of her I think, what with youtube and all, and anything left are AMVs and tribute videos. XD

Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: FoxTail on 2016-05-31 18:30:48
I forgot that movie existed!  I remember when grocery stores had movie rental areas, I remember always seeing this movie on the rack.  I never have seen it though!

Wonderful art. 
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-05-31 18:32:29
The movie is pretty subpar. I do remember watching it once though.

I don't remember this character though beyond Nostalgia Critic mentioning her. And that one line where she cries out about loosing her shoe haha
Title: Re: Goldie Pheasant (F, no-sneeze, build-up/tension)
Post by: FoxTail on 2016-05-31 18:33:52
The movie is pretty subpar. I do remember watching it once though.

I don't remember this character though beyond Nostalgia Critic mentioning her. And that one line where she cries out about loosing her shoe haha

Sounds like I didn't miss much then. :)