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Title: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-06 14:11:28
Ember tries to hold it in, fails.  Second time around, lets it all out.

Please don't post to Derpibooru.

Ember Dragon Sneeze Comic (F) (https://www.deviantart.com/psfforum/art/Ember-Dragon-Sneeze-Comic-948460386)
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2023-02-06 14:21:37
Great work on the expressions!  Very impressive comic once again!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: flemishcap on 2023-02-06 15:41:57
AWESOME!! This is awesome stuff man!  As I said elsewhere, I love how you allow us to see the pre-sneeze.  I love how she tries to hold it in and we see a mix of snot and smoke/flames coming from her nose.  Then when she builds up again, a string of snot from her nostrils fling around when she moves her head up to that beautiful crescendo that is an amazingly powerful sneeze to end it all off!  Awesome!!!

I wonder if she sneezes more?
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Sniffles on 2023-02-06 15:56:20
I love the build up shots and the cartoony expressions!  Both sneeze faces are excellent too.  I can't decide between the "full force" sneeze of the attempted stifle.  Fabulous!  Just fabulous!  Thank you, Silverwing! So lucky to be a part of this new generation of art you're making.  Your doodles look better then most people's full-blown art!  lol!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Roul on 2023-02-06 16:47:38
Ooooooooh boy that is one explosive and messy stifle.  I love the recent messy sneezes you've been drawing, and this one is no exception.  I also love how her buildup shows how intense the urge is, and the 2nd buildup (at least to me) really shows that she can't stop her mini fit at that point.  Additionally, as flemishcap mentioned, I love the little detail regaring her snot string flopping around when she throws her head upwards prior to her second sneeze explosion.  Thanks for the comic, I enjoy your work a lot! [excited]
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2023-02-06 17:41:24
Coming home from work and seeing new artwork from Silverwing makes me so happy!  This didn't let me down as it was a great comic!  I love seeing you draw Ember.  I can't believe how little art there has been of her sneezing!  This is great! Really love the expressions and all the details.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Blurr on 2023-02-06 18:39:04
Fire out the nostrils. BEautiful beautiful beautiful! Well done, Silver!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: MrDark1amao on 2023-02-06 18:50:23
Amazing artwork
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: timmelon on 2023-02-06 20:50:45
Looks great!
A good blast through the nose from a canonically sneezy character (unlike Sunset Shimmer or Cadance ;D). I like the expanded chest and the flaring nostrils, also, she wisely don’t put her hands into the fire ;D, well, she even holds them down before a second sneeze (I actually like whe the character with nice hips keep hands on them while having a buildup :nervoussmile:)
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2023-02-06 21:27:46
I like this!  I like this a lot.  I love how she tried to hold it, but didn't keep her hand there to get FLAMED.  Then the sneeze came back with a full fury and exploded out!  Really awesome stuff! I like your full body design of her.  BIG improvement in my mind.  :nervoussmile:
Title: More Dragon Sneezes!! (F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2023-02-06 22:57:03
This is a good representation of how difficult it may be to have to sneeze as a dragon!  I love how you made this comic and showed us her buildup to these two powerful blasts!  I hope you do more of Ember in the future, because she is sorely underrepresented in the sneeze community!  Dragon sneezes are awesome, so I love it!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: TheBeesSneeze on 2023-02-06 23:13:44
This is so enjoyable!  I love how you included an attempted stifle and a full blown sneeze.  I also noticed how you didn't give us a post-sneeze ending, so I am kind of hoping this continues!  I like how you draw her and her sneezes a lot.  It's a fantastic comic and I love, absolutely love, love, love, the sneezy details in this!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2023-02-07 00:24:12
Woah!  Another one?!  You are on a tear creating great content this week!  Fantastic set of sneezes by one of my fav dragon sneezers around.  It's awesome canonically that Ember AND Smolder are sneezers!  So this just adds fuel to the flames, pun intended! ;D  Awesome comedic expressions and I love how you curved Ember up!  You did an awesome job here, Silverwing.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Soda on 2023-02-07 20:20:34
Oooh, this one is just incredible!  I absolutely love the comic here.  All the expressions and emotions in this sneezy dragon are so apparent.  I can read her mind!  Lol!  Awesome work.  Her attempted stifle is really good and how it leads to a massive sneezy blow!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 15:57:45
AWESOME!! This is awesome stuff man!  As I said elsewhere, I love how you allow us to see the pre-sneeze.  I love how she tries to hold it in and we see a mix of snot and smoke/flames coming from her nose.  Then when she builds up again, a string of snot from her nostrils fling around when she moves her head up to that beautiful crescendo that is an amazingly powerful sneeze to end it all off!  Awesome!!!

I wonder if she sneezes more?

Oh she does sneeze more!  I am sure of it.  Maybe it will be continued in the future.  ^-^
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 15:58:07
I love the build up shots and the cartoony expressions!  Both sneeze faces are excellent too.  I can't decide between the "full force" sneeze of the attempted stifle.  Fabulous!  Just fabulous!  Thank you, Silverwing! So lucky to be a part of this new generation of art you're making.  Your doodles look better then most people's full-blown art!  lol!

That is way too kind of you, Sniffles.  Thank you truly.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 15:58:43
Ooooooooh boy that is one explosive and messy stifle.  I love the recent messy sneezes you've been drawing, and this one is no exception.  I also love how her buildup shows how intense the urge is, and the 2nd buildup (at least to me) really shows that she can't stop her mini fit at that point.  Additionally, as flemishcap mentioned, I love the little detail regaring her snot string flopping around when she throws her head upwards prior to her second sneeze explosion.  Thanks for the comic, I enjoy your work a lot! [excited]

Hahahaa!  Thank you Kmlp!  I am happy to see you on again and posting!  I really appreciate the very awesome response.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 15:59:15
Coming home from work and seeing new artwork from Silverwing makes me so happy!  This didn't let me down as it was a great comic!  I love seeing you draw Ember.  I can't believe how little art there has been of her sneezing!  This is great! Really love the expressions and all the details.

I am glad I could make your day a wee bit better, Rainy!  Thank you for the kindness and support over the years.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 15:59:42
Great work on the expressions!  Very impressive comic once again!

Amazing artwork

Fire out the nostrils. BEautiful beautiful beautiful! Well done, Silver!

Thank you so very much you guys!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 16:00:17
Looks great!
A good blast through the nose from a canonically sneezy character (unlike Sunset Shimmer or Cadance ;D). I like the expanded chest and the flaring nostrils, also, she wisely don’t put her hands into the fire ;D, well, she even holds them down before a second sneeze (I actually like whe the character with nice hips keep hands on them while having a buildup :nervoussmile:)

If we make enough sneezes for Cadance and Sunset Shimmer, we will MAKE it become canon.  We'll do it by force. ;D Thank you.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 16:00:50
I like this!  I like this a lot.  I love how she tried to hold it, but didn't keep her hand there to get FLAMED.  Then the sneeze came back with a full fury and exploded out!  Really awesome stuff! I like your full body design of her.  BIG improvement in my mind.  :nervoussmile:

Right on!  Very nice to hear, Wolfwood!  Thank you. 
Title: Re: More Dragon Sneezes!! (F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 16:01:34
This is a good representation of how difficult it may be to have to sneeze as a dragon!  I love how you made this comic and showed us her buildup to these two powerful blasts!  I hope you do more of Ember in the future, because she is sorely underrepresented in the sneeze community!  Dragon sneezes are awesome, so I love it!

Hahaha!  I am glad it represents a sneezing dragon well in your mind!  I agree, she is sorely underrepresented.  We need to change that.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2023-02-08 16:01:57
This is so enjoyable!  I love how you included an attempted stifle and a full blown sneeze.  I also noticed how you didn't give us a post-sneeze ending, so I am kind of hoping this continues!  I like how you draw her and her sneezes a lot.  It's a fantastic comic and I love, absolutely love, love, love, the sneezy details in this!

Thank you so much TBS!  I really appreciate it.

Woah!  Another one?!  You are on a tear creating great content this week!  Fantastic set of sneezes by one of my fav dragon sneezers around.  It's awesome canonically that Ember AND Smolder are sneezers!  So this just adds fuel to the flames, pun intended! ;D  Awesome comedic expressions and I love how you curved Ember up!  You did an awesome job here, Silverwing.

You're speaking to a man of culture, APD.  ;p ;D  Of course she was curve up.

Oooh, this one is just incredible!  I absolutely love the comic here.  All the expressions and emotions in this sneezy dragon are so apparent.  I can read her mind!  Lol!  Awesome work.  Her attempted stifle is really good and how it leads to a massive sneezy blow!

You are a mind-reader!!!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Bumble on 2023-02-08 16:14:13
Good looking build up shots and sneezy expressions!  I truly enjoy the different sneezes here whether kinda stifled or full blown explosive!  Really nice work here, Silverwing.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2023-02-08 19:41:58
Awesome stuff here man!  YOU ARE ON FIRE! Incredible comic and some nice powerful sneezing!  Even her half-stifle was incredibly powerful!  This is a very satisfying comic.  Awesome content, awesome art!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2023-02-08 21:58:34
Oooh!!! A nice set of strong sneezes from a dragon!  I love dragon sneezes and I love Ember.  Combine the two and we got ourselves a great comic!  Thank you, Silverwing. This is awesome!  I would love to see this maybe continue, or just see more Ember sneezes.

Gallus would be great too, just sayin'. ;)
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Tüsszent on 2023-02-09 23:55:21
Very good comic!  I like the added curves to Ember's character.  It fits her nicely. :)
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Darrin on 2023-02-14 17:56:58
Really a good comic, Silverwing.  Dragon girls, especially Ember, hold a special place in my fandom heart.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2023-02-17 16:56:08
Dragon sneezes are so good and a pleasure to view!  Every artist puts a nice bit of their personality with each dragon sneeze and these are no different.  I love the expressions.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Kiwi on 2023-02-17 21:06:03
That's my girl Ember there sneezin' and I love it!  Such a great comic.  You are a storm creating content!
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: Graymist on 2023-02-19 20:44:47
You really cannot go wrong with a sneezy female dragon!  Really well done.
Title: Re: Ember Strong Sneeze Comic (MLP:FiM - F)
Post by: flemishcap on 2023-02-23 16:58:10
Seriously, I think it is impossible to go wrong with a sneezy female dragon. ;D