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Title: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Roul on 2024-01-16 17:49:21
Hello guys.  It's been a very long time since I have posted or interacted here, but after months I have finally been able to contribute something I promised a few of you guys :).

Where I've been
I do feel bad that I haven't been active here, and I'd like to quickly explain what's been going on for those who may have been wondering what's up.  To begin, shortly after I graduated, there was one specific thing that hit me pretty hard and still sticks with me right now.   On top of the numerous times my partner refused to put in effort in our relationship, not only did I get cheated on, but she attempted to defame me towards other friends on top of straight-up cussing me out and sending specific threats if she were to not casually be accepted back into my friend circle.  This was especially taxing considering this happening shortly after my family's dog passed away, which also happened during the first few weeks I had to initiate the breakup.

On a more positive note, I've been working on many personal projects and have been making great progress. :)

Where I've been: Short version
Lost my pet, got cheated on, got caught up in real life stuff and projects, but I'm alright as I can be now 8).

•••

Comic & Individual Pages
Now with my update off my chest,  I have finally regained my motivation and discipline to complete something I teased a few months back.  Here is an extended comic featuring an iconic pony that many of you are likely familiar with.  I hope you enjoy the comic despite it arriving much later than I wished. [excited] [excited] [excited]

Note: All images total to 85MB, which may be too large to view all at once if using a mobile phone (such as mine ;) ).  To save your data, I have elected to not share thumbnail previews.

Summary/Synopsis
Margo's 764th day-in-a-row of no sneezing is ruined after an unfortunate run-in with a crazy, psycho bunny.

Special Thanks and Notes
@Anyponedrawn for permission to draw Margo.
@Rainberry for permission to draw Raine (cameo).

As another update, I am currently (highly) occupied creating my own video game, which means tons of original assets (music, art, characters, gameplay, etc).  I am expecting to be extremely busy; however, I may also stop by and say hello once in a while  ;) .

P.S.: Thank you to all who pinged me in the past months.  Although I didn't respond, I did highly appreciate the best wishes!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: timmelon on 2024-01-16 20:39:07
Thank you! It's a good long comic with an epic anime battle!
Of course, I still don't understand the point of a non-sneeze marathon... from one side, and shoving a full vial of Chhinkni (overloading all the sensors), from the other side.
For me, at least one snee per day is needed just to keep the nose fresh, and the best way to induce is to aim a tiny particle right into the most sensitive area (some magic can be used for this) so the victim has no time to react and the sneeze is built purely on natural reflex without any playing ;D.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2024-01-16 23:59:39
HOLY MOLEY!!! This is huge!!!!!  This is amazing!  You did such an amazing thing here.  I am utterly shocked and super impressed!!! Margo not sneezing for that long though, that is pure blasphemy. ;D Lol!!! At least it ended so well!! :D The level of detail and backgrounds and shading... like seriously, it all is a huge step up!  Your Margo is very pretty looking as well!  Also the action and references are great!  It's like silly and doesn't take itself too seriously, I love your humor! RAINE and SMILES references!!! Also the costume by the rabbit had me laughing. ;D Awesome job on this massive project!!

On the personal level, sorry you are and had to deal with all that drama.  It stinks when stuff like that happens, especially when related to relationships.  I hope this is improving for you though. 
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Yourtourguidefortoday on 2024-01-17 00:17:26
Margo is always best pony <3

Also, sorry about what happened.

Stay strong buddy.  :-]
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2024-01-17 00:23:19
Why does this rabbit want to make her sneeze so bad?  Who are they and why are they on this mission?  How on earth did Margo make it 764 days without sneezing?  Is this an alternative universe?  Has there been a time break? ;D  Hahahaha!  The Matrix jump, the corny lines, this was perfectly perfect!  I truly loved this!!!  Superb work on this comic! 

I'm sorry for what happened to you, but I am very happy you have motivation again and I hope you keep doing great things like this.  Remember in your low points in life, PSF is there for ya if you need us.  Great work on the comic!!! I know this is going to be a huge hit that randomly was released on a Tuesday night during a work week.  Give it some time, people will see it, and it will explode! :D
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2024-01-17 01:22:54
I'm sorry for everything that happened to you.  I am happy to hear you are better.  It is through hardship we become stronger, if we allow ourselves to learn and grow from it.

Oh my goodness! Margo withholding from sneezing for so long?  Surely this must be a dream!  The comic was drawn and colored beautifully and I noticed several references to things which made me smile!  What made me smile huge was seeing how sneezy she became as she was taken down by this masked villain!! But I also honestly felt bad for her. She seemed so proud of not sneezing (even a bit arrogant at times).  I don't know why the bunny was making her sneeze and why he wanted to so badly.  He also said to see him as a hero?  Hmmm.  Is there something deeper to this? 

Now what made me smile EVEN MORE was the end! I was in it!  My pony was in the comic!!! :D  <3 <3 Thank you for sharing this beautifully made comic! It's super long and super good!  You did an awesome job!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2024-01-17 01:37:01
I got a name drop!  I told Margo to watch out about that trail! It's not safe!! Lol!

I loved that crazy set of situations and how good the aim of that bunny was!  Throwing chikinni (spell) and having it go perfectly in her nostril!  That bunny has good aim!  Also the situations were quite frankly ridiculous in a good way! You made the comic really funny and it could actually work as a non fetish comic, because it's silly enough people would probably laugh at it and wonder why all this was happening. ;D Super stuff! I loved it.

I hope things keep getting better for you.  We are here for you if you ever need to talk.  Many have used us before to share their troubles and I'm sure many more will in the future. We got your back.  You're PSF fam. 
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Kiwi on 2024-01-17 01:37:05
Woah! This is incredible Kmlp! Beautiful and detailed. I love the progression of this comic and I must say this Margo seems different in personality from the one I knew in the past.  Granted this is the most we've ever seen of her.  It seems when she doesn't sneeze, she becomes far more confident in herself... though maybe this isn't the same Margo?  A different take on a classic. :D  I got to say though, her hair and eyes were lovely in your comic.  Her break down and sneezing fit were really nice with lots of good sneezing material, especially that sneeze towards us near the end.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Bloogap on 2024-01-17 05:12:08
Very fun, very silly, all around good time.  ;D Not having a single sneeze in almost 2 years sounds impossible, especially for someone sneeze prone as Margo haha.

Best of luck on your future endeavours!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Crimson Crest on 2024-01-17 11:19:34
I want to feel bad for Margo, but she should be happy. After all, now that her no–sneeze streak has been broken, she doesn't have to worry about maintaining it! Besides, sneezing is completely normal, and a good thing at that. ;D
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Blurr on 2024-01-17 11:27:17
Holy damn this sure was something to read. Amazing job with every single bit of this. And I’m sorry about alll that crap that happened to you. You didn’t deserve it.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2024-01-18 00:13:18
Margo seems kinda snotty here in her attitude.  Not sure what to think about her, but I am even more curious why this bunny wants her to sneeze?  What is the shady background organization who wants to make her sneeze? lol! Seriously, great comic!  So much content here and some super sneezes! Very wet.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2024-01-18 10:26:59
I keep re-reading through the comic and keep finding new things to examine.  It's so well made and put together!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Spiffmin on 2024-01-18 10:31:46
This is awesome! Thank you for taking the time to draw this awesome mass of comic good-ness! For a pony who is so sneezy, how did she not sneeze for so long? Also the action sequences were super fun to look through! You'd make a good comic artist!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2024-01-19 00:09:32
This is GREAT Kmlp! The expressions, the scenario, and just the overall tone of it.  It's quite funny and has tons of good sneeze content too! Great job and well worth the wait.  The colors, the backgrounds, shading, it all looks great. I love this and love seeing your art. :D  I hope things continue to get better for you after that rough period too.  That's a tough thing to go through. 
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Roul on 2024-01-20 06:43:51
Heyo everyone.  Thanks for your viewing, and glad you enjoy the comic  [excited].  Margo sure does have an attitude huh? Looks like her sneezy mascot pride gets to her just a teeny bit  ;)

Tysm for the concern,  best wishes, and the invitation to reach out too whenever I'm in need.  The stuff I've went through was a first for me, so it hits pretty hard.  I am doing a lot better than last year though, so I'm chillin' right now.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2024-01-20 15:52:12
I can tell just by looking at this that it took a TON of time to create.  It's an evolution of your style and it looks downright pretty in areas.  Fabulous work on all of it and I love the fun story going with this.  It's quite absurd what is actually happening here if you think about it.  Lol! Awesome sneezes and so much variation.  I love the many different angles and poses.  No two panels were the same and each one was hand crafted to be different.  I am super impressed!!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Sniffles on 2024-01-20 17:31:59
Great comic, Kmlp! So much happening in ten pages. Ten pages is a ton considering how much effort is clearly put into each panel and page. Awesome work on all of that. Those may also be some of the pointy-est noses I've seen on a pony. While I prefer rounded snouts, I do like your visual style and trying unique things out. The backgrounds are a step up in quality as are the many many different angles you drew this in. Shading even! Colors are great! I am truly impressed with all the work you did here. The sneezing fits she had from these sneezy temptations were super! I really liked seeing those sneeze break downs frame by frame. Her sneezes look so wet!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2024-01-20 17:32:38
Margo has a returned, a bit different then the Margo I remember, but I like it a lot. You did a great job on this comic. I cannot believe how many pages this was, it's a ton! Great sneezes! That was probably my favorite parts, the sneezing.  But I totally appreciated the world building going on too.  It was a little strange to see this rabbit fella attack her to make her sneeze, and I am truly wondering why this is the case, but I am going to come up with a conspiracy theory that Darrin and Smiles run a dark organization to make everyone at PSF sneeze. ;D  Actually... it's probably just Darrin doing all this.  Because Smiles sneezed in the previous comic. ::) Awesome stuff!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2024-01-23 12:20:19
I have gone through this slowly, panel by panel, page by page.  It is fantastic.  You did a wonderful job on it. :)  Great sneezing fit break down.  You really know how to knock a character down and ground them to be humble and you do it all through SNEEZES!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Soda on 2024-01-23 12:28:09
This is SO good! From beginning to the end, I treasured this comic.  It's silly and has tons of great sneezes.  So why is this TRAIL forbidden?  I sense something shady about this trail.  Is there some deeper lore to this or is it just nonsense?  Great comic!  Margo's kinda a snobby brat about not sneezing too.  Just had to point that out. I think I like her more humble, nervous personality when she is sneezy. ;D
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Tüsszent on 2024-01-31 12:26:20
What a huge comic you have here. I really like this and it's pretty funny and absurd what is happening. A bunny rabbit is making a pony sneeze. I guess my only gripe is how pointy the nose is on the mares. I like some roundness personally, but that is just personal taste. I do love how you drew the mane, the eyes, and did all the colouring. You put a lot of work in to this and I can tell because it is very large and very good. Nice job.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Graymist on 2024-02-09 11:53:28
Superb comic! Thoroughly enjoyed reading through this and how wild it became. It started out so normal then went right off the deep end and never came back, lol! It was great! Awesome work on all the poses too. It takes time. Loved the sneezes! You did awesome!!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: TheBeesSneeze on 2024-02-15 12:27:02
This is great! Awesome work on all of this.  I was certainly entertained. ;D  Let's see, she sneezed... one, two... four... five... A LOT! She sneezes a lot! :D Hahaha! I love how hard she tries to fight it too.  Awesome work on a growing collection of your sneeze art portfolio! It's some of my favs!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Erudork on 2024-02-17 06:27:05
This is such an interesting premise!! And this comic must have taken a ton of work. The *deathstare music* moment made me chuckle. XD
Thank you for sharing!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Darrin on 2024-02-18 17:33:43
Margo had a lot of sneezing to make up for, so this does it I am sure! I cannot put into words how fun this was to read! Excellent comic!
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Bumble on 2024-02-25 16:31:57
Those nostrils flare out so much! I love what you did with this and the colors match nicely. I quite enjoyed her sneezing fits, it was like her breaking down, lol.  I also noticed the little touches such as sneezing out the irritant on page six.  It's a great comic! Saving all of this. :D  I also liked the green eye shadow which matched her adorable little scarf.

Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: flemishcap on 2024-02-26 12:14:01
Awww, I actually felt bad for Margo there at the end.  She was crying over it. :(  Why did you give me so many emotions?  Humor, energy from the action sequences, then sadness! Lovely work on this massive endeavor.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: EvergreenPinewood on 2024-03-13 12:20:22
This was a fantastic endeavor you did.  It's massive and sneezy!  Awesome work.

Is there lore behind this?  Who is the bad guy?  Why are they the bad guy? Are they even a bad guy?  lol.
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2025-03-30 17:39:59
This comic brings back so many great memories of reading it.  Been over a year. ;D
Title: Re: Forbidden Trail Fiasco (Pony, No Mess, F)
Post by: Soda on 2025-04-03 12:27:54
Sad it has been so long. Hope they are well.