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Title: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-16 18:05:31
I tried my hand at a sneezing animation! It's definitely NOT the best. It's pretty bad, honestly, but it was my first try at this animation. Which I probably shouldn't do since I have NO experience with animating, and the fact that a sneezing animation is one of the hardest/most complex ones out there.... yeah...

But hey, it could've been worse amirite?

(https://66.media.tumblr.com/730d0e980131ae035c8673241dd985cc/tumblr_oafp1qsk6K1u08pr2o1_1280.gif)
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-07-16 18:22:40
Well, this is a good start. ;)
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-16 18:44:38
Hey it's not that bad! And everyone is gotta start somewhere. The drawings are good, I guess there just needs to be more frames so it's not so stilted. But all the expressions you have drawn are great. With some extra work and frames I'm sure it'd look amazing!
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-07-16 18:48:14
Very nice start indeed. :D  Looks very good.  I can picture some fill-in scenes to smooth it out and add those minor spray details. ;) 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2016-07-16 19:19:12
Honestly, anyone can animate.  It just takes time and dedication to a subject you want to do.  I think this looks good for a rough animation. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-16 19:23:10
Ye, a LOT of dedication lel.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-16 21:54:25
This is so good, S4. :D  I like what you have done. :D 

Makes me wonder what happened to that FC animator (https://derpibooru.org/987010?scope=scpe4d47d751601de5e8a0e91650115fd1c0025748b7). 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-16 22:02:23
Oh yeah, he was really good man.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-16 22:04:36
Oh yeah, I've seen a few of their stuff. Was he on the original psf?
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-16 22:19:30
He was. I think he might be here, I'd have to check, but he did reappear on the temporary site if I remember correctly.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-16 22:22:46
Yeah, he came for a tiny bit and released a good animation that was not sneeze related.  I don't know what happened to them. :-/ 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 00:12:23
Damn, It'd be pretty cool to meet him. Maybe I could've learnt a thing or two!

Also, I decided to extend the animation! Also, I think it looks smoother! (kinda)

(https://67.media.tumblr.com/0faade9c0b74ceee31434b45e9d2ff54/tumblr_oag6kfaecz1u08pr2o1_1280.gif)
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 00:16:59
OH MY WORD!  Look at that cute nostril flare and that lovely little snot dribble.  Nice improvement and smoother. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 07:10:52
Love the extension, such a cute little snot dribble. Very very adorable. Did you add some frames inbetween the previous ones? It looks a bit smoother :) Doesn't Zippy also animate? Perhaps you could ask him for tips in general?
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-07-17 09:23:39
Nice extension, super cute dribbly nose.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-07-17 09:35:21
HNNNG
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 10:06:39
Love the extension, such a cute little snot dribble. Very very adorable. Did you add some frames inbetween the previous ones? It looks a bit smoother :) Doesn't Zippy also animate? Perhaps you could ask him for tips in general?
I think he does, ye. Not sure if he does frame by frame tho.

I didn't add any inbetween frames, actually. I think it might be the speed that I changed that made it looks smoother, not sure.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2016-07-17 10:25:31
The length made it feel more complete because we saw more happen instead of just a quick and abrupt sneeze.  But if you add some in-between frames, this could come off as really smooth and nice.  You are in a good position with it now.  Looks good.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 10:31:15
Ah, perhaps. The first one seemed a bit slower and stilted. So look at that, speed helps a bit. Though watching a sneeze in slow mo is also pretty awesome. Not as much nostril flare as you usually draw I noticed, still cute as hell though.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-07-17 10:31:44
It is better longer. :D  It looks great, thanks for sharing, Miggs.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2016-07-17 21:28:43
Oh my gosh, it's so cute, S4. :)  I love what you've done.  Wish I could HEAR her sneeze. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 21:39:21
Oh my gosh, it's so cute, S4. :)  I love what you've done.  Wish I could HEAR her sneeze.

Haha, I wish I could hear it too, sometimes. Recently I decided how she would sound normally, and although it's not exactly what she'd sound like, this is how she would be close to sounding like. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_iRY3B5Pz4)
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 21:41:04
That is a cute voice. :)  I like it. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2016-07-17 21:42:37
That is a good voice. :)  I really enjoy it too. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-07-17 21:44:02
Yep, that kind of voice seems to fit Cherry. :)
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 21:47:02
She seriously has like the cutest voice. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 21:49:58
Eyo, you decided on a voice for her brah? And here I was ready to record something for her :P
But seriously, Cherry is the cutest.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 21:53:35
I dunno, Leap. Both voices are real good.

Hell, you could technically voice any of the three. It fits pretty well with each one!
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 21:53:41
Do you have voices for them all? 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 21:55:14
All I know is Mal sounds a bit tomboy-ish tone but high voice, and Viewing would sound... well, I guess like an older Cherry. Haven't thought much about her voice.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 21:56:53
I am listening to my idea of a Mal voice in my head.  It... it.... you really can't describe voices.  It's hard to explain. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 21:57:05
Apparently my natural voice was a good Cherry, but that was some time back when we called each other on a regular basis. I think we tried out voices one time. From what I recall, the hardest one was Viewing (at least for me), I just really wouldn't know how exactly she'd sound like, and at the moment I forget what Miggs said he heard her sounding like in his head.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 21:58:35
I always heard Mal as having a lazy, somewhat laid back voice. Almost like the stoner friend style of talking, but without the whole stoner part. Just cool and doesn't really give a fudge tone.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 21:59:44
Hah, sounds accurate!
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 22:00:21
I always heard Mal as having a lazy, somewhat laid back voice. Almost like the stoner friend style of talking, but without the whole stoner part. Just cool and doesn't really give a fudge tone.

This is what I pictured. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 22:01:19
So does she talk slow too, Miggs? Or does she have a normal talking speed?
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-07-17 22:02:00
You want the truth of what I think of the new improved animation... YOU WANT TO KNOW?  Well you can't handle the truth!  Now drop down and give me forty, then do five laps.  GO GO GO GO!  Maggot! 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 22:02:46
I intermix her talking slower and faster.  But she can drawl a bit in a depressed sounding tone, sort of like she doesn't give a care. 
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-17 22:05:04
So does she talk slow too, Miggs? Or does she have a normal talking speed?

Normal speed

You want the truth of what I think of the new improved animation... YOU WANT TO KNOW?  Well you can't handle the truth!  Now drop down and give me forty, then do five laps.  GO GO GO GO!  Maggot! 
ON MY WAY SARG.!!
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-17 22:08:10
Ah, okay.

You know, I've been so sorely tempted to voice the blog. Kinda like that dude used to do for Molestia, and how BaldDumboRat does for her own Tumblr Asks. But I'd need help and fluff.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-07-17 22:54:07
What would you need help with?
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-18 06:20:53
I obviously wouldn't want to try and be the voice of all of them, so I'd have to ask a few of my VA friends if they'd like a shot at it then I'd probably need extra voices to do the asks. And then probably to find some sound effects. I could probably ask my buddy who does the audiobook of Fallout Equestria for help on that.

But yeah, I'll try to get that project up hopefully before school starts, with Miggs permission :P in case he doesn't want his blog to become a YouTube reading thing.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-07-18 12:12:08
There are a few othere comics I wish that were read too. :)  Cool idea.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-07-18 13:03:25
That'd be pretty cool, Leap. I don't mind, but really you don't gotta do that.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-18 13:14:01
But I wanna.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-07-18 13:20:57
She needs a computer.
Title: Re: Sneezing Cherry Animation (F, OC)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-07-18 13:50:43
Yeah, I need that too.