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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: TheBeesSneeze on 2024-08-04 17:43:51

Title: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: TheBeesSneeze on 2024-08-04 17:43:51

Artist Pudding Pup drew this commission of Ember being forced to sneeze! Ember is a female dragon from MLP:FiM.  Click the image to enlarge.

Source (https://www.furaffinity.net/view/45633225/)

(https://i.imgur.com/zk7g1sH.jpeg) (https://i.imgur.com/zk7g1sH.jpeg)

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2024-08-04 18:18:17

Interesting comic!

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Silverwing on 2024-08-05 00:42:20

I'd call this maybe too simplistic.  I like the idea of teasing Ember and making her sneeze, but there just isn't enough to the sneeze to keep me interested.  It needs more.  It's like a non-sneeze artist tried to draw what a sneeze fetishist wants but has no real idea outside the basics.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Graymist on 2024-08-05 12:01:36

Nice find.  I would like to see this scenario played out more. The fact the artist only used one base drawing and kept altering her expression a bit is a bit disappointing... especially since they didn't even remove their signature on each panel.  Lazy.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: FoxTail on 2024-08-05 23:32:50

That is very snotty.  I guess since all the air is only going out of her nose is just pushes everything out.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Rainberry on 2024-08-07 00:14:00

Thanks for sharing.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2024-08-07 12:21:51

Very basic, but not bad. Nice find. It somehow snuck under our radar until now.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Spiffmin on 2024-08-08 12:21:12

Simplistic comic, but not bad. It lacks a little though. This will sound silly, but it lacks sneezy soul.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2024-08-09 12:22:26

Very basic as people have called out.  I think what makes me think less of it is because they clearly just used the same base pic the entire time and didn't even bother to remove their signature on each one.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Soda on 2024-08-12 12:20:33

^ I think this idea could be capitalized on.  An artist like @Silverwing has done fantastic sneezy comics in his style before.  This might be a fun character to choose.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2024-08-15 00:16:14

Nice find.  I like the idea as well.  Something we can probably improve on in the future. :D

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Darrin on 2024-08-17 00:39:57

Hmmm.  Not too great, but it's alright.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: flemishcap on 2024-08-19 12:16:40

I like the character choice, but this comic is lacking pretty severely.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2024-08-25 00:46:22

It's fine but it's leaving a lot to be desired.

Title: Re: Ember's Nose Only Sneeze Comic (Dragon / MLP - F)
Post by: Sniffles on 2024-09-02 22:09:41

Thank you for sharing. :)