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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Miggs on 2016-08-02 16:42:17

Title: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-02 16:42:17
Friendo and I were having a conversation, eventually I doodled up some cold denial scenarios with Mal, and decided to include his character. By canon the characters are dating, so ye. That explains that.

Mal's real grumpy when she's sick, she's also trying to deny she's sick, and since my friend's Oc keeps insisting she IS, she's obv. not happy about that.
She's not abusive, she's just really grumpy.

"She's Not Sick You Homo" (https://www.dropbox.com/s/5zo7cfm0it9j72i/shesnotsickyoufuckinghomo.png?dl=0)
"Denial" (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8e8sd6kcbd847k0/denial.png?dl=0)
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-08-02 16:47:15
Oh. My. God.
I just want to write a fic now.
Mal is such a bitch XD

But love the build up, love the sneezy spellings of her hitching and just yes! The second pic for me on phone is blurry so I can't make it out to well, but the first one is great. I love it!
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Kyrl on 2016-08-02 18:08:03
They're all so cute.  You have a character page/sheets? 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-08-02 18:29:34
I just read the second page on a computer, it's great!
Mal is so mean, also that messy ass sneeze, oh my gosh it's adorable! And then the drawing of snot stuck to her antenna is great, so unf!
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-02 19:14:43
They're all so cute.  You have a character page/sheets?

Like uh... a ref page?
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-08-02 21:00:31
This is really cute. :)  Nice job, S4.  Good comic overall. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-08-02 21:04:14
Great doodle comic. :)  I like the last scene when Mal cuddles up with Friendo?  His name is Friendo? 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-08-02 21:13:12
Uh I think his name is Flask something.
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-02 21:25:45
^Flask, ye.
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2016-08-03 00:13:39
I like their interaction together.  You can totally get the relationship they have, and it's really neat. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Soda on 2016-08-03 11:43:44
Super adorb comic.  Love their little banter back and forth.  Mal is so cute when she is fussy and in denial.  I could hug her as she pouts. 

Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2016-08-03 12:39:50
Wonderful.  She's really cute when stubborn and in denial. :)  I love it.  Could watch that all day. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-03 21:47:32
Doodled up a bit more during a stream!

Here! (https://www.dropbox.com/s/9ynf5h99gx7789g/denial2.png?dl=0)
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-08-03 23:53:38
:D Part 2 is wonderful.  Lots of snot, so cute.  Cough drops! :D 

Mal is pretty bossy and demanding.  Is she usually like this?  I didn't think she was.  She seems angry when sick.  The poor thing just wants sex... GEEZ!  Not her fault she is sick. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-03 23:58:48
Hahhah, nah she's not. She's just super grumpy. It's cold denial, so when she's getting told the opposite and gets insisted that she IS sick, she gets CRANKIER, more cranky than when she's just sick.

Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-08-03 23:59:54
Yeah, she is usually pretty quiet I thought.  She's just being a little cranky bitch.  It's cute though, and she is lucky to have such a patient and carrying BF. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-08-04 05:29:12
Mal is such a bitch XD
Did she really dump her soup right in front of Flask? She's so mean!
I think I died when Flask asked her why she was wearing two hoodies and she said she got fat XD she'd rather say she's fat than admit she's sick. She's hilarious.
That last one though, "what did you put in your mouth?" "LSD". Also, her blowing her nose- er, practicing her elephant imitation. Man, she's like the queen of coming up with excuses. So when she's sick, does she not go to Viewings place? Does she only cold deny around him, or does she do it around her friends to? Mal is pretty cute when she's being a jerkass XP
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-04 07:03:02
Its mainly around Flask and at work.
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-08-04 07:21:54
Gotcha. She's gotta save all that bitchiness for her beloved XP
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-08-04 10:09:40
She's taking "drugs"...  What a great excuse.  Lol!  I never knew about this side of, Mal.  Very fun comic.  A little all over the place in terms of direction, which had me and my old set ways a tad confused, but I eventually figured it out after calling the help line and speaking with some people who had very good English voices... but a few words tipped me off to them not being from Cincinnati. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-08-04 12:30:53
*comes in, whistling* Oh hey, what's this?

...HNNNNNG *THUD*
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-04 15:32:25
AAaaaand the possible Finale to this little series of doodles.

Here (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8678784o7hcvqqq/denial3.png?dl=0)
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-08-04 15:46:32
Aw.... What a very sweet ending. Mal realizing what a bitch she's been. Man, her little tearing up and runny nose, so cute. I just wanna hug her. It's good Flask is so loving and patient. Just, so sweet. What finally got it through Mal's thick and stubborn head?
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-08-04 15:53:33
How worried he was
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-08-04 15:58:50
She finally had that "ah ha" moment.  She realized why he was there the whole time, it clicked.  Beautiful moment... too bad she looked far from beautiful as a dripping, sick mess.  Love it.  Great end if that was the end. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2016-08-04 16:21:13
I think this was the best of all three, only it had NO SNEEZES. ;)  Lol!  It was good.  Thanks for making this. 
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-08-04 17:08:11
What a cute ending... ;D
Title: Re: Mal's Cold Denial (Doodles, F, Messy, Oc)
Post by: mysteryserpent on 2016-08-08 10:53:33
What a barrage of relateable character development! I didn't know this side to her but honestly I myself can get very cranky while sick. Honestly her pre-sniffle as her sneeze tickles its way around her muzzle is my favorite expression, but honestly the eyes of Flask really are my favorite part of the entire series of comics here. I like him! He's quick to observe but isn't judgemental at all. The "a ha" moment when she realizes he really does care is an amazing face expression, especially how her eyes change. It's a lovely last page and she definitely needed to blow her nose XD