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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: sarahgirl on 2016-08-03 17:16:31

Title: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2016-08-03 17:16:31

The cat is from the "Cat and Flower" comic that I posted on this site. The evil wolf (or at least canine that looks like a wolf) who makes her sneeze, however, makes his first appearance here. Neither of them have names yet because I can't come up with any.
"Pretty much the only evil thing that the wolf has done involves making other animals sneeze with the pepper shaker that he carries around, but that doesn't stop him from becoming a feared creature. His most frequent victim just happens to be this poor cat."
Errors to point out: The cat is missing her whiskers in the 14th picture and is missing her eyelashes in the 15th picture.

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: FoxTail on 2016-08-03 17:56:06

This is a long comic! :D  I really like it.  I also like how you are building up characters to, you just need to come up with names.  Maybe even as simple as Cat, Wolf, Canine, lol!  I really like it.  Many sneezes from Cat, thanks to that mean old canine. 

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: MasterXtreme on 2016-08-03 18:44:45

Going to have to agree with Foxtail on this one.  It is nice to see you developing these characters.  They are becoming entities, actual beings with this kind of development!  Keep going at it and you can have yourself an actual series! :D  Right on, Sarah! 

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-08-03 23:56:34

Does the wolf like sneezing? :D  Hahaha!  Maybe he just likes getting pepper in her eyes?  Cool nostril flare too. 

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-08-04 10:10:09

Much agreed.  Very nice comic and a lot of sneezing, A LOT.  Pepper really trips her up. 

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: 1234 on 2016-08-04 12:31:57

God that's cute. ;D

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-08-04 16:00:52

Nice work, Sarah! :D  This was a long comic. :)  I think what I am most pleased with (besides the build up and sneezing) is how you started to make these characters... CHARACTERS.  :)  They will eventually graduate into beings that was can feel for, long for, love, laugh, etc. :)  You are starting to make them more then just drawings.  Keep it up and I look forward to your progression. 

If you ever want comic tips or paneling tips, feel free to message me or ask.  I would be happy to provide some advice.

Title: Re: The Cat and the Pepper-Carrying Wolf (F, cat)
Post by: Wolfwood on 2016-08-04 16:20:40

The numbers make it very easy to understand, thanks for that.  I like the length and it is quite good.