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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: sarahgirl on 2016-12-24 08:50:18

Title: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: sarahgirl on 2016-12-24 08:50:18
I didn't add arrows this time, but the lower-left picture (where he blows his nose) is meant to go before the lower-right one (where he rubs his nose). But it can be the other way around if you want.

Also, just for the heck of it, I added a "variant" of the colored comic. On said variant, I just colored his nose red so that it looks like he actually has a cold. I'm sorry if it doesn't look quite right.

And I'm sorry if it's too cute for you to handle. I actually think this is pretty darn adorable :)

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Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Soda on 2016-12-24 11:34:10
That is loud!  Nicely drawn, and some nice variety too! 
Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-12-24 11:35:46
Lumpy needs some rest and shizz.

You're makin' progress, Sarah!
Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-12-24 16:07:36
Good variation on this one.  You got hand movements, tissues, red nose!  All good work.  Poor Lump is going to have one sore nose with all the sneezing you make him do.
Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2016-12-24 23:01:39
I have to agree with the comments before me.  You keep getting better and you have a nice variety.  The comics nicely show the progression.
Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-12-24 23:48:08
Hun, these are cute. :)  Keep it up.
Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Anyponedrawn on 2016-12-24 23:49:13
I think the nose blow was a very nice touch here.  You don't see many artists do that, and I don't know why.  I like your pacing and set up for all your sneeze comics.
Title: Re: Lumpy's Loud Sneeze (M, Happy Tree Friends)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2016-12-25 00:11:49
Nicely drawn sequences.  I like it.