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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Silverwing on 2017-01-09 12:53:30
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2 versions. What started out as a grim dark doodle became a comic.
So in the episode, "The Saddle Row Review," I always felt that some of Coco's sneezes looked very strange, especially when her mouth was a "O." So I changed that a little bit and added some creative "juices" to the scene. There is some mess.
Coco Pommel's Sick Sneeze (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Coco-Pommel-s-Sick-Sneeze-656432242)
Coco's Sneeze of Doom (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Coco-s-Sneeze-of-Doom-656359561) < This one destroys Rarity.
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The doom one I was expecting the typical bone to be showing and a little smoke trickling from the neck haha. Like in the old cartoons. But wow, Coco needs to learn to cover her mouth! Was a gross hoers. Really funny. Great expressions, even if they're taken kinda from the show I like the added lip tremble. I think your creative juices were really flowing haha. Can't wait to add this, Coco doesn't have a lot of art. Only like 2 pieces. Only one that's actually sneeze, besides this one.
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I do have a version that was pretty nasty with a bone... but I didn't keep it. lol.
Yeah, there were pretty much direct mimics of the scene.
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Oh my gosh, YES! :D This looks way better then her sneeze from the show. Such a nasty pone though, not covering at all. That surprised me in the episode too, because she seems like she would be well mannered. Guess not in sneezing.
Lol! These are great, the first one I see you toned down gore and just made her like dust blowing away.
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Coco is a gross. Although, no other pony has ever covered their sneezes. Maybe it's just not in ponies manners to cover? Because yeah... Every pony that's sneezed, even Rarity, just sneezes out in the open like gross animals.
You mean the second one haha, just dust. Whooooosh. I woulda died if you did just the cartoony bone. Such an old school trope.
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So I did d a doodle that was like five panels... and it had Rarity's head literally ripping off. It was very lazy sketch.... but I thought it would have been too nasty to share. I didn't save it.
I would say Vapor Trail sort of blocked her sneeze.
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I really want to see that now, lol!
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Sort of? I saw it kind of her body pinching in on itself. But besides her... Yeah.
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Ponies just don't cover their damn noses. Tsk tsk. They need to carry tissues with them.
Also RIP in peace Rarity.
These are top notch, Silver! I personally think you kinda fixed the original sneeze, tbh. The whole O thing was kinda weird looking. Not BAD but just kinda weird. But your style, the way you drew it, I like it waaaaaaaaay more. Although I'm not for sneezing on someone, that mess tho *thumbs up*.
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Vapor Trail. She blocked her sneeze, kind of. She turned away...
(https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2016/10/15/1273545__safe_screencap_cute_animated_sneezing_top+bolt_spoiler-colon-s06e24_vapor+trail_sky+stinger_vaporbetes.gif)
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Looked like she was raising her hoof too
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Ponies just don't cover their damn noses. Tsk tsk. They need to carry tissues with them.
Also RIP in peace Rarity.
These are top notch, Silver! I personally think you kinda fixed the original sneeze, tbh. The whole O thing was kinda weird looking. Not BAD but just kinda weird. But your style, the way you drew it, I like it waaaaaaaaay more. Although I'm not for sneezing on someone, that mess tho *thumbs up*.
I really worked on some mess in a future picture! I tried to get mess down to your levels of intricacy, but it's hard, and I still don't think I did. Thanks so much for the kind words, my friend.
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She attempted, she raised her hoof, but didn't fully cover it.
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Turning away is still sneezing in the open. You just don't sneeze on people. Which is only what Coco did. Rarity kinda turns away at times too, but it's still in the open.
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So Coco's a sick little bitch then for sneezing several times openly on Rarity. What a pig!
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Yeah. I actually wrote something for Rarity after the episode. But only a piece of a morsel.
So predictable lol.
But yeah, coco's a gross bitch :p
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Yeah. I actually wrote something for Rarity after the episode. But only a piece of a morsel.
So predictable lol.
Hmm?
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I still think Coco's adorable though.....
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I will be back in a bit to post more. Going to go draw some more stuff. Probably in like 30 minutes.
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Oooh, hoe exciting.
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Hype!
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Ohmigosh! These are adorable. I love it when you draw pones sneezing! I forgot how much I miss your art. :D
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Thank you, Smiles. :)
Uploading more now.
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Wow. Both of these pics look very nice and hilarious as well, SW! I like her "choo" face isn't just a big "O". Cause. Screencaps for that face has been used for some....uh...interesting edits. And the one with Rarity exploding is hilarious! And I thought Ty's sneezes were destructive. XD
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Way better then what the show did. I'm sure some would even be happy to see Rarity end with such a fate.
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Such an improvement! Oh my word, yes! :D These are lovely. I love how you drew her sneezes, and that spray! She's a very messy girl. ;)
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These came out great! A major improvement over what the show did with the "O" mouth. They had to have known that was going to produce some.... risk'e.... content.
These are really good.
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Thought it was worth mentioned. I know people have talked about the artist, "Binkyt11" before for drawing a lot of sneeze art. They recently commented on this pic of Silverwing's. They were either looking at sneeze tagged art, or following up on Silverwing.
Comment (https://derpibooru.org/1335565)
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Well what do you freaking know, they did.
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Because they probably totally weren't looking at the Coco or Rarity tag? Idk.
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Totally not. They like sneezing.
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I could ask them. I talk to her through PM's.
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If you want to know the truth behind the ole' Blinkster, send me a message. I can answer questions. :)
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Why not just answer here?
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Why not just answer here?
Because they don't necessarily want everyone to know their life's story. It is common courtesy.
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Thought it was worth mentioned. I know people have talked about the artist, "Binkyt11" before for drawing a lot of sneeze art. They recently commented on this pic of Silverwing's. They were either looking at sneeze tagged art, or following up on Silverwing.
Comment (https://derpibooru.org/1335565)
Thank you! I did see it now. :)
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Don't gotta give the whole life story, jeez. Just yes or no. What are we gonna do, judge her for having a sneeze fetish?
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I'm using "life story" as an example. I don't know the situation, but sometimes it isn't respectful to talk about other people in public, especially if they probably don't want it.
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By the way, Silver, you have plans to do anymore Coco anytime soon?
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No, I don't think so. Go ahead and do something if you want.
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I had an idea for a quick edit.
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Go ahead and PM me.
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A deed is done.
(https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/9f/91/09/9f9109ecb92288e67a29d8c76dbbdc6d.jpg)
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Oh my. Is it the bone sticking out of Rarity's neck lol
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Lol! Now I am just imagining a cartoony bone sticking out of her neck. Lol!
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That's what I imagined since the begin it when Silver said one was doom or what not hahaha
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Oh man how'd I miss this one? Nice job, Silverwing!
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Coming soon to a PSF near you . . . SILVERWING: DARK.
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Dear Heavens Me! Silverwing: Dark has a picture of a pone back-sassing their superior! So Midnight! So Dark!
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Totally not. They like sneezing.
Talked to them. It was a no but yes sort of answer. They think it's comedic and draw sneeze stuff when bored or sick themselves. And as for her comment, she likes tropes. She also "sweetied" me, so I'm not sure how old she thinks I am XD I always felt she was younger than I lol.
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Must be because she likes you. Sweetie. ;)
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Babeh, LP!