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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Silverwing on 2017-01-10 13:39:56
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Equestria Girls version of Sunset Shimmer in this comic. Hope you like it. I may fix up the last panel with a new version, and if I do, I will share it here.
Comic (http://psfforum.deviantart.com/art/Sunset-Shimmer-Feeling-Comic-656644473?ga_submit_new=10%253A1484084373&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1)
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YES!!!! The people spoke and you delivered! Looks great. I really love her expressions. That false start was wonderfully tossed in there!
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Thanks. Not happy with the ending. I will probably remove her stifle-ish sneeze and just make her have a post-sneeze face. :D
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I absolutely adore this the build up and detail.
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Silverwing. You have made an awesome piece that many users requested, and therefore will be forever remembered on PSF for being... a great artist. Thank you.
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I know that feeling! I know it all too well! What a fun comic! I really like how you made her character and she always looks wonderful when you draw her.
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But your Sunsets usually have the clenched, stifled sneeze. It's a Sunset staple. I kinda like that little headcanon you had for her in earlier pieces.
I like how she let the first one loose, must've felt good especially after that false start and it going away. But then back to stifling, because I guess it's her thig lol. Loved her expression when it went away. So annoyed and just "dang it". Was good. And all her ther expressions were great, the first two, her trying to coax it out, sniffling and wanting it to happen. I've had that feel. Then when it finally happens, nice reserved amount of mess. Not like splurge, but nice mist detail, and then the little snot haha. This was really nice, Silver :D I really liked it ^^ thanks for listening to us!
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Jolteon - Thank you! I'm really happy you commented and enjoy it.
Numbers - And you will forever be known as Numbers. :) Thank you, Artichoke...errrr...Numbers.
Soda - Soda Pop! Thanks!
LP - Of course! I love you guys! Thank you for the little review there, I loved reading it and hearing your input.
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Hey hey! The sunset lip bite sneeze! I love seeing that drawn on her by you. The buld up is beautifully drawn to as well as her face when the sneeze won't come and slipped from her. Then BOOM! Instant double. Very nice Silver. Very very nice work from you.
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This was awesome! This is what I am talking about when I think of Silverwing quality in comics! I love how you not only teased her, but the reader with that false start that went away! How horrible of you!!! Then she is treated with an awesome double, the first so good, she couldn't hold it back!
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I wanna give her a big squeezing hug for some reason! I love that false start more then anything, I think. I haven't seen someone do that in our corner of the fandom in a comic! That was absolutely lovely! She even was aimed down ready to sneeze and it didn't happen. Also her signature stifled sneeze, love it! I really liked how after that false start, the sneeze built up very big she had to let it go.
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I'm pretty sure there've been false start comics before... But it is nice to see. Not done often. So it's a nice rarity because we get more fun expressions.
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I'm not sure how much work goes into a comic, but I know it's more then single quick sketches! I always appreciate them and their extra drawing goodness.
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Comics are life. Because they bring a sense of story to still frames.
I've always been more of a fan of sneeze writing than just pictures. But comics have best of both worlds and I love them for it ^^
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Imagine... some of our best sneezefic stories.... with pictures... or in comic form, like manga or graphic novel, or whatever. It would be SICK!
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Ha. Funny.
Mangas would be backwards lol.
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YESS this is so good, Silver! All the build up and then the release! Aaaah it's so good!
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She's pent up! Then explodes.... heh.... heh... think about it.
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I can't say enough positive things about this one. Great job!
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I can't say enough positive things about this one. Great job!
Thank you everyone and thank you, Sudo! Happy to hear from you.
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I just realized, you actually draw Sunset Shimmer a lot. That is awesome. I was looking back on the MLPS.
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It's mainly because she is a well designed character compared to most. She can actually be pretty.
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I mentioned that on the MLPS thread lol. He's literally the only one who draws Sunset. Except for Rainy and MasterX because of request. And that was long ago. I kinda wanna see Pone Sunset. She's got a cute design. But human sunset is much yes. So good looking.
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So you don't plan on stopping drawing her then?
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Goodness no.
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Sunset pone? Hmmm. Maybe.
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Silver is the provider of Sunset. He is our one true savior.
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No.... but I am thinking of renaming this topic, "Sunset Shimmer Felling Comic."
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No.... but I am thinking of renaming this topic, "Sunset Shimmer Felling Comic."
Oh please no... I've noticed you like to poke as much fun as other people here, but you are always so calm about it!
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I love Silver for that. He greatly amuses me when he does it.
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Topic name changed.
What? What do I do? I assure you, I am completely innocent.
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Oh my god.
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He says that without even blinking, lol!
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Smooth criminal.
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Playing my jams!
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0_0 this is one of my favorite comics you have drawn. It isn't just the sneeze, but it's her eyes specifically that I find really well drawn and notice the most out of this comic. How you draw Shimmer's hair is awesome, and I love the fact with both sneezes they were differently drawn and different sounds. There was also different results with how messy you did them!
I think out of all of these the left sketches on both the bottom and top are my personal favorites. Also, her outfit makes her look cute *blushes* XD
The title has been changed and no one can stop you. I don't know what it was before but I like how it is now.
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It was nothing different, MS. Just an inside joke about changing "feeling" to "felling". ;)
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Just loving this. Had to say something again.
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Hey, thanks again you guys. :D It's awesome you still like it and enjoy it that much to comment so much later on it. Thanks.
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(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415326373700435978/unknown.png)
One sixth of the way complete.
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Hype begins.
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Oh ho ho ho! I see something happening here!
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(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415411404024184832/unknown.png)
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(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415649659575468032/unknown.png)
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That isn't MS Paint is it? It looks so much more professional now!
Dude, your work is looking awesome!
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These are such an honor to me. I love that you do this and I am LOVING the outcome so far.
I will talk to you through PM on an... idea.
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I look forward to it~
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(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415676045224574976/unknown.png)
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(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415694346277355531/unknown.png)
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The first is normal.
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415698392006524928/sunset_shimmer_feeling_comic_by_psfforum-dauy649_-_Copy.png)
And the second version.
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/352935557443354644/415705774283554846/sunset_shimmer_feeling_comic_by_psfforum-dauy649_-_Copy_-_Copy.png)
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Awesome work, Blurr! :)) Love how her nose in the second version gets redder, lol. ;)
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WOAH! THIS IS GREAT, MAN!
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Awesome work, Blurr!
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This is beautifully done, Blurr! :D She's so cute and the color just adds to it!
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Blurr, you put a lot of hard work into the coloring you did. Honestly it was really cool seeing the progress of how you colored each part!
Thank you so much for taking the time to color this. I think both versions are great to see! Honestly I like the differences, both of them have good qualities about them =)
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You did a fantastic thing here Blurr! You did a really fantastic thing! I would totally give you a firm handshake.
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Blurr, you put a lot of hard work into the coloring you did. Honestly it was really cool seeing the progress of how you colored each part!
Thank you so much for taking the time to color this. I think both versions are great to see! Honestly I like the differences, both of them have good qualities about them =)
Exactly what he said. :D
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I'm glad you guys all like it.
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Blurr this is wonderful. :) You did a fantastic job coloring... I will be the bearer of bad news and say you forgot to color a tiny line in Sunset's hair in 2, 5 and 6.
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Blurr this is wonderful. :) You did a fantastic job coloring... I will be the bearer of bad news and say you forgot to color a tiny line in Sunset's hair in 2, 5 and 6.
I did? Where?
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2, 5 and 6. Above her forehead, there is a small sliver of whitespace with her hair.
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I don't see it
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2, 5, and 6 on both versions.
(http://i65.tinypic.com/acpfzc.jpg)
Very insignificant. I wouldn't worry about it.
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Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh
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Oooh is right. The comic is great though! You brought a lot of LIFE to it with the coloring!
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Awesome job bro!!!
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Those little slits are always hard to get.
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I wouldn't even worry about them, you don't even notice them. ;D
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Still very good though look's fantastic.
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Her expressions are so animated. I love the timeline progression as the sneeze takes hold of her very being and makes her lose control!