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Creative => Artwork => Topic started by: Harmony on 2016-02-03 15:12:03

Title: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Harmony on 2016-02-03 15:12:03
Well,  I was talking to RainySunshine over chat the other day, and we got into a short discussion about drawing. I had some extra time over the past 2 days, and decided to (attempt) to draw something. I went on a pony creator on Deviantart, and made a pony, to get an idea of what sort of thing I wanted to draw. (One of the hardest parts for me is thinking of something to draw). I think it came out pretty good, but there were some parts I didn't get right like I wanted them to be. So, then I started drawing, and this is the finished product:

http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/mysterygirl12468/media/webcam-toy-photo2_zpsdzfemnay.jpg.html

It is Delilah Design, and interior designer. (Her cutie mark is the paint strip things that interior designers use to pick colors) Hopefully, there will be more pictures to come. Feedback is appreaciated!
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-03 15:19:42
Pretty alright. Is this your first time?
There's something a bit off with her back leg, the butt is a bit too small I think.
And I think the cutie mark is too big, but that may be a result of the butt being too small.

Her hair shape and design is nice. Not sure if I'm liking the color choices, but I like how the hair is shaped and stuff.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Blurr on 2016-02-03 15:24:15
Ooooooooooooooooo qt pi she is
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Harmony on 2016-02-03 15:25:54
Yeah, this is my first time. The back half of the her was definitely the hardest, and the butt and cutie mark were the things that I didn't like.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Blurr on 2016-02-03 15:26:44
Keep on going if you so desire
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-03 15:27:13
Yeah, I feels ya.
The butts always the hardest for me. And the nose. I tend to make their bodies too long. Tempts me to make a new species of weiner ponies so I can draw their bodies long and not be criticized for it XD (jk though)
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Harmony on 2016-02-03 15:29:19
I re-did the nose about 50 times before I could get it good. Same with the butt and cutie mark. And yes, a new species of weiner ponies would be sooooooo much easier, lol ;)
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-03 15:30:57
Lol XD
Yeah, the nose is a tough shape to get. I tend to see most artists not really do the exact show style for noses, and just do their own style.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-02-03 16:09:15
This is really cute, Harmony!  I like her happy face, and i like her snout.  The hair is also really good.  Too me that looks like the most difficult part and you did a great job on her! 

Reading what was said above, I actually like how you drew her nose.  It is unique and different for her character. 
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Soda on 2016-02-03 16:14:07
How long have you been drawing, HARMONY?  :D  This is really good and I am impressed.  Her back half is kind of blobby, but that is the hardest part with the bum and the legs.  I think you did a super good job with her face and hair.  I like her little mug. :)  She looks great.  Keep working on her. :)  You will only keep getting better.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-03 16:25:50
"Practice will never make me better!!! *runs and cries in a corner*"
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-02-03 17:00:27
Pretty good job, Harmony! The back leg is a bit off, but hey, it's not that bad! I'd say my only sort of "complaint" or "criticism" is the coat color, it's a bit too bright, but besides that, it looks noice!
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Harmony on 2016-02-03 17:34:32
Thanks, you guys! <3 I will take into account all of the constructive criticism when I draw another picture.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Blurr on 2016-02-03 18:56:00
Good luck!
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-02-03 19:43:37
Very nice, Harmony!  You obviously have drawn before.  :)  I like her.  I as well like her face and that mane.  The main on her head is very complex and the complexity nicely continues on her tail.  Very nice work!  Thumbs up!! 

Despite everything I or anyone says, draw what YOU like.  People will complain and moan about certain things, but as long as you do what you like, that is all that matters.  Walk away happy with what you did, whether it is a design trait, quality, or even just the colors.  Be happy with your work. 
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Miggs on 2016-02-03 19:48:58
Very nice, Harmony!  You obviously have drawn before.  :)  I like her.  I as well like her face and that mane.  The main on her head is very complex and the complexity nicely continues on her tail.  Very nice work!  Thumbs up!! 

Despite everything I or anyone says, draw what YOU like.  People will complain and moan about certain things, but as long as you do what you like, that is all that matters.  Walk away happy with what you did, whether it is a design trait, quality, or even just the colors.  Be happy with your work.
^^^ all of this
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Rainberry on 2016-02-03 20:56:32
I like her, Harmony!  So happy to see you shared something with us.  I like her and I think she looks great.  Good idea starting with references. :)

Is there any background to this character you created, or was it just for fun? 
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Grapefoot on 2016-02-05 21:22:50
This is great, Harmony!  Thank you so much for sharing!  What are some of your fav things to draw? :D
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Harmony on 2016-02-06 04:19:15
Thanks, Grapefoot. I really only draw in Art class, but I like drawing letters and words in different ways.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Erudork on 2016-02-06 04:36:25
This is cute!!  With practice you can only get better. :) Thanks for sharing!   Hope to see more from you.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-06 09:08:26
Oooh, so you're into calligraphy?
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Smiles2us on 2016-02-06 11:30:18
This is really cute.  I love your character and I can see you got a ton of potential!  I really hope we see you draw more.

...but I like drawing letters and words in different ways.

You do fancy text writing? :)
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Harmony on 2016-02-06 11:58:18
Yeah, I love calligraphy, and fancy text writing. :)
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: RainySunshine on 2016-02-06 12:02:03
So you don't draw often then?  Shame, because I think you are really good as is, and can keep getting better!  You have the potential. 
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-06 12:11:31
That's cool.
I love looking at pretty handwriting and text. So much variety.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Silverwing on 2016-02-06 13:23:37
Incredible start here! Welcome. I like your picture. If you ever want tips let me know. You did a great start and i look forward to more posts by you.
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Bird on 2016-02-06 22:42:20
The colors are a little bright, but the overall design looks great! Her cutie mark is really unique; I like it a lot. :)
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-06 23:00:44
Ah! Love your new avatar, Paws! Did Erudi color it in for you?
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Darrin on 2016-02-06 23:17:22
Look at all this great feedback, you got Harmony!  Great pic you shared with us.  Keep drawing and sharing! :D 
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Bird on 2016-02-06 23:42:42
Ah! Love your new avatar, Paws! Did Erudi color it in for you?

Thanks! I lined and colored it myself. :3
Title: Re: Delilah Design-(No sneeze)
Post by: Death Blossom on 2016-02-07 00:49:34
Oh okay! Still looks super cute ;3;