Bad Gift Redrawn (M)

[Umeko]

Four years ago I made this:

I decided to redo it as there were things that bugged me and also to see if I had improved any over the course of 4 years.

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Skyiler is sitting on the porch enjoying a beer as Olivia comes over.
He picks her up, then she holds out a small bouquet of wild flowers.
Olivia looks confused at her dad as his facial expression changes from happy to a stressed one.

Being only 5, she does not know what allergies are, he never gets angry at his children for not knowing or not remembering.

Enjoy lol

Art & Characters © Me


Here is the updated version, same drawing 4 years apart

[MasterXtreme]

4 years of progress is shown too!

[Darrin]

The lighting also shows how much you've improved.  The lighting now looks legit!  Well done.

[FoxTail]

Much improved.  He probably needs to sneeze now, ha ha!  He's got powerful sneezes.

[Umeko]

4 years of progress is shown too!

Thank you
I'm pondering doing this with all of my fetish pictures that I made ages ago lol

[Umeko]

The lighting also shows how much you've improved.  The lighting now looks legit!  Well done.

Thank you, yeah I like the lighting here more, I also shifted his tail from being squished in the corner there of the bench, to the other side where there is more bench for his tail!

[Umeko]

Much improved.  He probably needs to sneeze now, ha ha!  He's got powerful sneezes.

Oh yeah this was like seconds before an allergy attack