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« on: 2021-09-17 20:01:31 »

See comic at the bottom

I found this story on an old CD ROM.  Sorry to say but I can't remember the name of the author.  I do remember that he didn't have a sneezing fetish which I'm sure made this difficult to write. He also drew a comic to go with it.  The comic was great the only thing was that he didn't have Scooby Doo sneeze at the end.  I decided a few years back to re-draw the comic more to my liking and including a Scooby sneeze at the end.

Enjoy the story and artwork but I'm sorry about his spelling :).  I was really nice of him to do this for me.

Scooby's Nightmare.

Once again the small room looked familiar........"I've been in here BEFORE!" Scooby thought to himself. He had no memory of how he got here, but here he was JUST THE SAME. It was as if he had it memorized. The room was six feet by six feet and twelve feet high, with one, lone lamp hanging from the cement ceiling. Cement walls. Cement floor. There was an air vent up near the ceiling of one of the walls. Scooby couldn't move because he was tied up on a wooden chair in the center of the room. He actually felt a sort of peacefulness. It was a holding cell in a prison somewhere & the door to his cell was made of iron with large rivets and it had a slit in it about half an inch high & 12 inches wide. He could see a faint glow of light coming thru it -- no doubt some of the luminence from one of the lights out in the corridor. From past experience he knew that his old lovely nemesis "Sonya" must be nearby & would come IN his cell any second.........BUT as he thought this he heard a light tapping on the big metal door. "Tap-tap-tap". It repeated two more times. "Scooby? Scooby-Doo? Are you awake? an you hear me?" It was a soft & friendly sounding woman's voice whispering, but NOT Sonya's. Scooby sat there pretending to be asleep in the chair. "My name is Sasha, I am one of Sonya's operatives and I will help you escape but I want you to do me a favour first....will you?" Scooby was puzzled. He opened one eye, keeping the other eye shut while THINKING; "you're WHO? you want to help ME??" Scooby still didn't answer. Scooby waited. He couldn't hear anything. He held his breath for about 10-12 seconds to see if he could hear better. Nothing. Nothing but dead silence. Scooby started to regret not answering the voice he'd heard just moments before. His eyes were wide open now, glancing upwards & sideways while straining his ears to hear....ANYTHING! [see attached picture] While glancing at the wall, he didn't see the long strand of hair sliding thru the slit on the iron door. It slid right in, right up to him. He felt this tickle on his right jowel & looked to his horror, this black silky lock of hair was sliding over his muzzle, just like a deadly snake waiting to crush it's victim! The hair reminded him of Sonya's hair, except THIS hair was LARGE! It was joined by another stand of hair just like it, also sliding into the cell from the slit on the door. Scooby was petrified! The first hair tickled & rubbed at his right nostril, tyring to invade that big glossy curvascious sexy nose of his. He couldn't move because he was tied to the chair -- all he could do was push his head back & feel his whiskery chin press against his big sexy neck. The hair entered his nostril. "Oh NO! This hair is ALIVE!!" he thought. "ROOOH NOOO -- GULP!" He exclaimed outloud. The second big black sexy strand of hair entered his left nostril. They BOTH were tickling and sliding in & out of his nostrils, never completely leaving them. With each determined but GENTLE thrust the strands made their way further up inside his nose. "Ruuuhhhh--RUUUHH!" Scooby muttered to himself. His eyes were tearing up. Liquidy snot was gently dripping from his nose, soaking the hair that was just outside his big black nose. He felt a sneeze coming on, but he couldn't he didn't dare!!!!!!!!!  He found it hard to consintrait but the one thing he knew for sure was if he sneezed it might just blow his only chance of escape. 
Both locks of hair softly slid out of his nose and gently tickled the large round openings of each of his straining nostrils.  Thick snotty mucos dripped from his nose before the hairs once again began to take there turns plunging deep into his nostrils!!!  A goofy contorted expression came over the large Great Danes face as a powerful sneeze began to build. As his nostrils flaired and convolsed the locks of hair began to THRUST in and out of each nostril.
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Raaaa! RAAAAAA!!!! the great dog mutterd as he felt his chest expanding with air.  The hair continued it tickling attack as the sneeze continued to grow deep in the back of his large nose. Reeeee, RAAAAA, RAAAAAAAAAA, RAAAACHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! 
The sneeze was so loud that it woke Scooby up from his deep sleep.  "Click clank....BANNG!!" He heard this sound coming from the door as it startled him.
. He felt a cool breeze of air waft from the doorway into his cell. He was still sweating and his eye's were still tearing.  The brightness of the lamp above caused him to squint as he suddenly realized THE HAIRS were GONE!! They had just dissappeared! "SCOOBY!! SCOOOBY DOOOOBY DOOOO!" the voice shouted at him from the door. He jerked his head forward & looked at Sonya, now standing in the doorway "Sounds like my puppy was having himself a sneezy nightmare.
 Scooby was still nervous & jittery from his wild nightmare. He was completely awake by this time & noticed why the cell he was in looked familiar -- because he really WAS in this SAME cell. Sonya looked out into the hall & called; "Sasha!" and motioned for her to come to the doorway. Scooby heard footsteps & a 5 foot, 5 inch tall sexy woman with thick, silky long black hair stood next to Sonya. She told Sasha; "he's all yours now, YOU know what to do, hmmm hmm" . Sasha grinned at Scooby. Scooby gulped.....

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« Reply #1 on: 2021-09-17 21:03:54 »

Nice work on the drawing there, Daphine. The tempting with his nose is well shown here.

I am curious, do you still have the original comic they drew for you as well?

I think it's fun how you keep slowly unraveling your treasure chest of content.  It's like a history book of your journey into sneeze-dom.
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« Reply #2 on: 2021-09-17 21:26:13 »

Nice work on the drawing there, Daphine. The tempting with his nose is well shown here.

I am curious, do you still have the original comic they drew for you as well?

I think it's fun how you keep slowly unraveling your treasure chest of content.  It's like a history book of your journey into sneeze-dom.
Yes MasterXtreme I actually do still have the original comic.  The first three pictures are basically the same but in the original the fourth drawing had Sasha's hair pops out of his ears dripping with snot :)).  It was funny but it wasn't the story I was looking for.  It was part of a trade,  I have a bad habit.  I never like being a pain so if someone gave me something in a trade and it wasn't what I asked for I would say anything.  I would just keep it and fix it myself to how I wanted it :(

Thank you, it's fun for me also.  I had a bunch of things on a CD ROM and for the longest time I didn't have access to a computer that had a CD ROM player so I'm finding things I haven't seen in years ;D.  Honestly I really should figure out what to do with all of this before I do get in trouble :(
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« Reply #3 on: 2021-09-17 21:32:16 »

Nice work on the drawing there, Daphine. The tempting with his nose is well shown here.

I am curious, do you still have the original comic they drew for you as well?

I think it's fun how you keep slowly unraveling your treasure chest of content.  It's like a history book of your journey into sneeze-dom.
Yes MasterXtreme I actually do still have the original comic.  The first three pictures are basically the same but in the original the fourth drawing had Sasha's hair pops out of his ears dripping with snot :)).  It was funny but it wasn't the story I was looking for.  It was part of a trade,  I have a bad habit.  I never like being a pain so if someone gave me something in a trade and it wasn't what I asked for I would say anything.  I would just keep it and fix it myself to how I wanted it :(

Thank you, it's fun for me also.  I had a bunch of things on a CD ROM and for the longest time I didn't have access to a computer that had a CD ROM player so I'm finding things I haven't seen in years ;D.  Honestly I really should figure out what to do with all of this before I do get in trouble :(

You sound like me.  If it's not perfect, I don't want to pain them to change it, especially if they did it out of the good will of their heart, lol. :D

You mentioned at the end about figuring what to do with the stuff on the CD ROM. I would convert those things (drag and drop) files you want kept from the CD-ROM onto some memory stick or other memory device you may have.  Just so you have some extra safety incase one stops working and you don't lose stuff forever.
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« Reply #4 on: 2021-09-17 22:32:37 »

Nice work on the drawing there, Daphine. The tempting with his nose is well shown here.

I am curious, do you still have the original comic they drew for you as well?

I think it's fun how you keep slowly unraveling your treasure chest of content.  It's like a history book of your journey into sneeze-dom.
Yes MasterXtreme I actually do still have the original comic.  The first three pictures are basically the same but in the original the fourth drawing had Sasha's hair pops out of his ears dripping with snot :)).  It was funny but it wasn't the story I was looking for.  It was part of a trade,  I have a bad habit.  I never like being a pain so if someone gave me something in a trade and it wasn't what I asked for I would say anything.  I would just keep it and fix it myself to how I wanted it :(

Thank you, it's fun for me also.  I had a bunch of things on a CD ROM and for the longest time I didn't have access to a computer that had a CD ROM player so I'm finding things I haven't seen in years ;D.  Honestly I really should figure out what to do with all of this before I do get in trouble :(

You sound like me.  If it's not perfect, I don't want to pain them to change it, especially if they did it out of the good will of their heart, lol. :D

You mentioned at the end about figuring what to do with the stuff on the CD ROM. I would convert those things (drag and drop) files you want kept from the CD-ROM onto some memory stick or other memory device you may have.  Just so you have some extra safety incase one stops working and you don't lose stuff forever.

I's nice to know that I'm no alone.  At times I feel like I'm way to nice.  Like ou said, if some does something for me out of the goodness of there heart I'm just thrilled that they thought of me in the first place.  This was a trade so it was a bit different.  There was a short part in the story that described Sasha's hair and Scooby's nostrils and building sneeze as a form of sexual act.  I personally enjoyed the comparison but I knew I couldn't post it on this board.

I was thinking of the CD ROM but I'm also thinking of everything I have.  I have a whole foot locker filled with sneezy Scooby stuff :-]
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« Reply #5 on: 2021-09-19 14:19:29 »

Thank you for sharing. :)

It's funny you mentioned this was on a CD ROM.  Computers now days are being sold without a disc drive to even play CD's.  Thats crazy!  Heck, new cars don't have disk drives anymore either.
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« Reply #6 on: 2021-09-19 14:31:24 »

Wow, thank you for sharing this little treasure with us, @Daphine:)
Your drawing of sneezy Scooby is terrific!  ^b- You're always doing such a great job.
In the story, I love the way the hairs tickle Scooby's large round nostrils... very nice description.  ^-^
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« Reply #7 on: 2021-09-19 17:35:14 »

That hair goes deep in those nostrils!!! Well done.
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« Reply #8 on: 2021-09-20 20:58:23 »


It's funny you mentioned this was on a CD ROM.  Computers now days are being sold without a disc drive to even play CD's.  Thats crazy!  Heck, new cars don't have disk drives anymore either.

It's so weird how technology has replaced or removed so much.  My new car doesn't have a CD player in it and I really miss it.  A ways back I posted some pictures of mine that I found on an old 3 1/2 inch floppy disk.  I have m old Scooby drawings hiding on all kinds of outdated technology :)).

Wow, thank you for sharing this little treasure with us, @Daphine:)
Your drawing of sneezy Scooby is terrific!  ^b- You're always doing such a great job.
In the story, I love the way the hairs tickle Scooby's large round nostrils... very nice description.  ^-^

Thank you @kiku  , you are always so sweet and supportive :).  I really can't take much of the credit.  I just found the screen name for the kind person who drew most of this comic and wrote the story.  His screen name is judgebear from the big cartoon data base.  Thank you again judgebear :).

That hair goes deep in those nostrils!!! Well done.

How right you are Wolfwood.  That had to be madding to poor Scooby Doo's nose ;D.  I LOVE IT!!!
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« Reply #9 on: 2021-09-24 08:22:37 »

Ooo, this was nice! The drawings were lovely as always  ^-^
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« Reply #10 on: 2021-09-25 13:28:08 »

Ooo, this was nice! The drawings were lovely as always  ^-^

Thank you LocoLover3, it's so nice to see you again ;D.  I'm so glad you enjoyed Scooby's Nightmare :)).
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