I like it. Here's a tip... instead of trying to focus and draw slowly to make a shape the right "size and look," instead draw the shapes very fast. Don't try to focus too hard on one shape because they may be bumpy and rough. Do fast shapes and you will be surprised at how it smoothes it out. It may take time, but you will get used to it.

So happy you did new characters, AND A FEMALE! I like that.