(NEW REVISION!) Dahlia Mist (OC, F) + revision I made (Messy, still OC, still F)

[Silverwing]

I really could use a new duct tape tie.

[Kiwi]

The original is very nice.  I really like the sneeze, but why are her eyes open when she sneezes?!  That bugs me!  Great nostrils and sneezy faces though.  I didn't get to see the other one because it didn't open for me? 

[Kiwi]

EDIT: I figured it out, nvm.

[1234]

I'd say it's because of her "skree"-ing, but come to think of it, that's no reason. Either way, the artist did a great job. I started following them.

Did I do a good job? ^^'

[Kiwi]

No you didn't do a good job.

[1234]

Whoops. ^^;

[Kiwi]

Because you did an excellent job!  You, in my humble opinion, made this picture far better then I could have done!  It is now very in line with my fetishy likes!  Such a great revision to this!  Nice work on this excellent piece!

[Silverwing]

Did I do a good job? ^^'

No you didn't do a good job.

Cold as ice.

[1234]

Dang it, I was aiming for just "good".

Pffhaha, thanks, Kiwi.

Sorry I had to ask. I just want to hear the most opinions possible before I can officially proclaim that I made something good.

[Kiwi]

I can officially proclaim that I made something good.

You didn't make something good!  You made something excellent!

[1234]

Okay! Okay! I MADE SOMETHING EXCELLENT! XD

"You're so modest."

[Silverwing]

Kiwi knows what she's talking about.

[1234]

Another version. No mess, just the colors.

(Added to OP.)

[Rainberry]

Well look at you! Getting all excited and doing more!

At first I didn't think I would like it without mess, but now I get to see those lovely nostrils!  Really nice.

[1234]

The shades I used are a tiny bit different cuz I had to color it all over again. ^^'

I think it's the nostrils that finally pushed me to make that other revision... XD