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« on: 2018-11-15 13:04:45 »

Would love to have some feedback on how this turned out.  I know it's not the smoothest, but for the most part, I am pretty happy with it.  Feel free to be harsh on your feedback. :)  Thanks and hope it helps me make better content for you guys.  This is my first animation of an actual character and not some generic pony.

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« Reply #1 on: 2018-11-15 14:50:05 »

Heyyy, that's pretty cute! I think the animation looks good. :) Nice job! :))
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« Reply #2 on: 2018-11-15 19:32:09 »

Not the smoothest, but that doesn't mean it's not great! It's very nice to see another animation from you!
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« Reply #3 on: 2018-11-15 22:32:33 »

I think it turned out really good.  I watched it about a trillion times and I like how well you followed everything frame by frame.
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« Reply #4 on: 2018-11-16 14:17:21 »

Really good if you ask me.  Maybe a few extra slides for smoothness, but it's pretty detailed now as is.
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« Reply #5 on: 2018-11-16 15:43:50 »

This turned out great!  I love watching the spray over and over and how well you complete it all.  It loops perfectly to play over and over without any weird break. 
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« Reply #6 on: 2018-11-17 14:12:54 »

You did a great job, FC. :)  Nice expressions and detail on the release with all the particles being spread around.  You followed them up well and did a nice job overall.  Maybe just a few in-be-tweener slides for smoothness, but overall it was a great animation.
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« Reply #7 on: 2018-11-17 14:34:58 »

Fantastic work here!  A very cute animated piece.  I know it is a lot of work to create even short animations.  So thank you so much for doing this and sharing it.
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« Reply #8 on: 2018-11-18 12:51:55 »

Great job on this, FC!! How long did it take you to make this?
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« Reply #9 on: 2018-11-19 13:39:21 »

You could take commissions if this isn't too daunting a task to do.
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« Reply #10 on: 2018-11-19 13:41:41 »

Really great animation, FC.  I love how you make these once in awhile.  Always worth it to me.
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« Reply #11 on: 2018-11-19 16:59:50 »

Really cute animation here, FC. :)  I think it was very good. 
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« Reply #12 on: 2018-11-24 17:40:54 »

You did a nice job on this.  It's a lot of work to make an animation, especially without the hardcore tools.  :)  You did really good.
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« Reply #13 on: 2018-11-26 18:29:22 »

Really good job on this animation!  I would recommend adding some more frames in there, but it is great as is too!  I think you did the sneeze really nice with the spray.  Also the loop cycle fits perfectly.  Really great stuff!
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« Reply #14 on: 2018-11-30 00:41:30 »

I hope you respond back, FC.  Would love to see what your plans are in the future. :)  You got a lot of potential.
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