Ho boy...this...whoa!!!! I am stunned. First...I haven't heard of this character in years. I am surprised anyone remembers her!
You either played the recent games or have done a lot of research, because you got a lot of great details correct about the facts on the different pokemon in this comic!
The best way I can describe this comic is clean. Seriously. Each panel has a clean, clear style that makes the viewer easily able to see what is happening in each scene! This cool type of tones you use for the light and dark shades do not need a rainbow gradient for the R. The R on her shirt looks great the way it is drawn in your comic =)
Even if I myself am not a messy sneeze lover, I actually really like the way you drew her allergic reactive sneezes! Her wet releases match what is hinted at in the only place she shows up in the entire franchise. She is very allergic to pollen, and your comic shows that =) RIP cutiefly...you were just doing what you normally do...but an allergic nose happened to cross your path.
One other reason why this comic shocked me is who exactly she comes in contact with. A Gardevoir and a female Aether grunt! Gardevoir herself is one of my all time favorite pokemon (and she's incredibly useful with her typing XD) and I was not expecting you to draw a gardevoir. I think she looks really nice in this style you did! The panel where Gloom is nervous about how imposing Gardevoir looks is honestly one of my favorite panels throughout the entire comic. Gardevoir can be extremely powerful...and Gloom unfortunately is a horrible match up XD
The poses you drew for Kaede look both cool and cute at the same time. She is capable and certainly much more dependable than James/Jessie/meowth...if her nose didn't get in the way of her mission.
I specifically wanted to say thank you so much for deciding to use Gloom the way you did!! I loved seeing the pokefact about Gloom's pollen! The only other pokemon I know of besides Gloom that specifically mentions sneezing or pollen allergies (besides Vileplume) is a 4th generation pokemon named budew.
Seeing the Aether Grunt sneezing was a great idea, and I honestly loved the idea you had of drawing Gardevoir sneezing too! Having all three have very different sounds and types of sneezes made me smile a lot when I saw that detail you did.
Honestly my favorite face expression throughout this entire comic wasn't anything to do with a sneeze. Kaede's face expression has a surprisingly cute looking grumpy frown while she waits for Gloom to do something. I was not expecting her to look like that, but she looks so cute in that panel I couldn't help but smile seeing her cute side after the desperate yelling in the previous panel.
The ending status report text was a great way to end this comic. It was funny but also very accurate
Thank you so much for taking time doing this comic!! You seriously put a lot of small details in it, and I loved seeing the different sneezes from characters I was not expecting to see!
Whether a sneeze idea is one panel, 2 panels, or the massive length of a comic like this one here, I really appreciate seeing the sneeze ideas you do =) I hope you had fun drawing what you wanted to! It was amazing to see your idea.
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