[COMPLETED] Kushun Maid - An original story (OC - F)

[Silverwing]

*Stands up and claps*

Bravo, bravo, bravo.  Boss's sneezes make me so happy and I like that character interaction between the two.  I guess it's canon that pine makes da' Boss sneeze.  The sneezing fit stifles by Misaki is attention grabbingly awesome. Living up to the term, "sneeze maid."

For those who are not aware, an onsen is a hot spring.  I am going to overly look at this and see pine tree's and mountains.  That limits their real world location as to where this series takes place. 

[Soda]

Super comic and perfect timing for the release!  Valentines!  You really packed a lot of sneezes in this comic and it was really cute!  I really liked it. 

Is it weird that some part of me ships these two?  Maybe sneezing together in a kiss-fest?  Okay... I'll stop, lol. 

[1234]

WOOO NEW CHAPTER! MUSTACHE OF EXCITEMENT

This was pretty cute. Misaki and da BOSS sneezing, how could you go wrong with that?

My congratulations. Thank you very much for sharing this.

[Kiwi]

I like how it's sort of become official that everyone is calling Boss, "DA BOSS."  I can get along with that.   Misaki is adorable in this and probably did her best to sort of hold in those sneezes.  Da Boss's sneezes were super.  I love how that first one echos through the forest.  Must have been powerful and loud!

[Darrin]

I really smiled after reading this new part of the series.  Love the sneezes, love the drawings, and it's quite dynamic in terms of the angling.  Very good!  Also the cover art is well done.

[Wolfwood]

Another great update!  Love the characters and their sneezes.  Those sneezes are the icing on the cake and you somehow keep the story going INCLUDING sneezes.  I guess when you have sneezy characters it works out.

Also... Boss is kinda.... hot.

[Ynona]

I just got struck with an UKNOWN ALIEN ENEGRY that made me achieve ABSOLUTE... * ARTISTIC ILLUMINATION*

With this new found INSPIRATION and DETERMINATION I created the best artwork in existance! OF ALL OART. NOT JUST SNEEZING ART. OF EVERYTHING!!1
Take a look at this absolute MASTERPIECE.. be careful not to be blinded by its majesty:



I know... thisi s too good for this plane of existance. your souls feel unworthy of beauty.
You can feel better by sending me some mad ca$h to my patreon. If you're a pretty girl, send wavs.

[kiku]

LOL, this is majestically cute!   

[Silverwing]

We are not worthy. 

[Soda]

Well, time to call it quits.  You've completed your masterpiece.  You can never top this.  Stop while you're ahead.


J/K

[Grapefoot]

[FoxTail]

^ LOL!

[Ynona]

I DID IT! NEW CHAPTER!


Full size: here

[timmelon]

Great!
That «your stifling is painful to watch»-like line is a common thought for me , I often see people in situations where a normal sneeze would be a better choice.

[Silverwing]

YES YOU DID!   And it's great! 

So much sneezing, from all these lovely ladies.  The stifling hurt me too, lol!  I wanted her to let them go, but i understand her dilemma.  I love how the BOSS can sneeze out loud, bit no one else around her is allowed too!  Lol.  Lovely visuals, nice to see this progressing!