My Little Pony in hiding, how about some pepper! (F)

[Daphine]

A special gift for all of my new friends on the PSF Forum.  I hope you enjoy it .

Rarity was working late one night in her shop the Carousel Boutique when she heard some noise coming from the front part of the shop.  At first she thought it was Spike stopping by for a late night visit.  Occasionally he would do this, hoping he could convince his long time crush to take a romantic walk in the moonlight with him. 
Rarity opened the door to the front of the shop a crack, just enough so she could peak through and see what was going on.  All she could make out was a couple of other pony's dressed all in black searching the front room. Suddenly she heard one of them speak, "it’s not here. Her secret designs must be in the back room". A wave of fear crashed over Rarity as she saw the two dark figures heading for the door that she was just behind. Quickly she went into the first display case in her shop and took the place of one of the manikins. Right then she saw the door open and the two figures walk in. Rarity stood as still as possible as she watched the two figures start to go through all of her files.  Suddenly Anthony, a new character to the my little pony universe appeared just above Rarity.  He looked down into her display and saw her hiding. “Hey little pony” he said in a mischievous sounding voice, “how about some pepper?” With that he took out a small pepper shaker and began to sprinkle it down onto Rarity’s  nose. Quickly her body was covered in a thin layer of sweat. Her heart began to pound in her chest as she could feel a ticklish sensation come over her nose. Pepper the poor pony thought to her self. Not pepper that will make me sneeze! Rarity could feel her eyes begin to tear up as the tingling in her nostrils became much more intense. Sweat beaded up on her forehead and began to run into her eyes. Anthony looked down enjoying all of the ponies growing sneezy misery. Rarity’s nostrils began to flare and twitch.  The more her nostrils flared the more the pepper was able to float deeper into her nasal cavities.  This caused the pony’s nose to begin to run. Rarity’s  eyelids began to hover halfway open as her lower jaw began to fall slack. Helpless against it she began to feel her chest expander as she began to draw in more and more air. She could feel a powerful sneeze beginning to grow. She fought against her sneeze with every ounce of her being but her need to sneeze was way too powerful. Ahh, AHHH, AHHH. Rarity's building sneeze became audible. The two intruders stopped what they were doing to listen. “Do you hear that” the one said to the other.  The other pony replied “it sounds like somebody is in here and that somebody needs to sneeze !” At this point Rarity couldn’t take anymore. Her nostrils flared as wide as possible while her nose dripped. Finally her eyes closed tight as her nose burst with a powerful sneeze giving her away AA, AACHOOOOW!

https://imgur.com/a/NH4Fidg

[Anyponedrawn]

Wow!! thank you.  You drew her quite well.   

*High fives*

[Silverwing]

There are so many new topics on PSF today, I'm getting lost on where to post. That is a good problem to have though, lol!  Hey thanks, Daphine!   Nice too see something like this.  You went out of your way to do this and try something new for the community.  I personally really appreciate that and I know others do too.  You scored some PSF points with this, lol.

What a strong and ferocious reaction Rarity had too!  Thats the best part.

[timmelon]

You decided to play in another field .
Great face expressions! I like it.

[Soda]

Very fun facial expressions!  Wow, what ah harsh sneeze!!  She became a mess from that better!

Also that dude is like... super macho.  lol!  He looks like he could be a military general.  Very rigid and square jaw-line.

[Wolfwood]

Now that was a complete overtake of the senses.  That sneeze is controlling her WHOLE body!  Great job, Daphine!

[MasterXtreme]

Rarity's nose couldn't handle it!  I notice the story with this post has been expanded from it's original posting too!   

[kiku]

Wow, such a lovely drawing and a great, forceful sneeze! Your description of Rarity desperatly fighting against her urge to sneeze is wonderful as usual too. Keep up the great work, @Daphine ! 

[Daphine]

Wow!! thank you.  You drew her quite well.   

*High fives*

There are so many new topics on PSF today, I'm getting lost on where to post. That is a good problem to have though, lol!  Hey thanks, Daphine!   Nice too see something like this.  You went out of your way to do this and try something new for the community.  I personally really appreciate that and I know others do too.  You scored some PSF points with this, lol.

What a strong and ferocious reaction Rarity had too!  Thats the best part.

You decided to play in another field .
Great face expressions! I like it.

Very fun facial expressions!  Wow, what ah harsh sneeze!!  She became a mess from that better!

Also that dude is like... super macho.  lol!  He looks like he could be a military general.  Very rigid and square jaw-line.

Now that was a complete overtake of the senses.  That sneeze is controlling her WHOLE body!  Great job, Daphine!

Rarity's nose couldn't handle it!  I notice the story with this post has been expanded from it's original posting too!   

Wow, such a lovely drawing and a great, forceful sneeze! Your description of Rarity desperatly fighting against her urge to sneeze is wonderful as usual too. Keep up the great work, @Daphine ! 

I just wanted to say thank you to anyponedrawn, Silverwing, timmelon, Soda, Wolfwood, MasterXtreme and of course my dear kiku .

I'm so happy you all enjoyed my work.  Since this was my first time drawing Rarity or any pony I really wasn't sure how it would turn out .  Even after I was done I had no idea if it was any good.  I want to thank RainySunshine for first given me the idea to try and draw new charactor's in my own sneezy style.  If it wasn't for there comment back on my    Re: New sneezy Scooby Doo drawing. Scooby trying to save Daphne! (M) post I wouldn't have tried my hand at Maximus, Maximus the horse gets a ticklish nasal smear test (M) or Rarity.  I drew both of these because I thought you would enjoy Rarity & Maximus because they are both horses.

I do have a quick question.  I know that people enjoy my attempt at artwork but how many stick around to read the story I write to go with the drawing?  Last night I noticed that quite a few people commented on this drawing before I even finished the story.  That was my fault.  I'm back to using my backup laptop computer because my other one is in the shop again.  Long story

[MasterXtreme]

I think it varies. Most people come to the artwork section probably just for the art.  Though I am sure some also read the content, but don't always comment.  The artwork section of this website historically always gets way more comment and feedback then the writing section.  It's a shame, because the writers don't get the kudos and feedback they deserve for their work. 

That said, PSF still often provides more feedback to the writers than most other forums, which is quite shocking.  We think there isn't enough here, but there is less feedback on other competitive sites much larger than PSF.

[RainySunshine]

I want to thank RainySunshine for first given me the idea to try and draw new charactor's in my own sneezy style.  If it wasn't for there comment back on my Re: New sneezy Scooby Doo drawing. Scooby trying to save Daphne! (M) post I wouldn't have tried my hand at Maximus...

You're welcome!  Thanks for taking that leap.  It's honestly kind of scary sometimes trying something new, especially if you worry about others opinions on what you do. Honestly, just have fun, don't worry what others think.   Thanks for sharing!

And yes, to answer your question, I do read them.  Thanks for sharing BOTH your talents, writing and drawing.

[Rainberry]

Nice new cartoon!  This Anthony guy sounds like a real badie!

[Grapefoot]

As I have said before, I enjoy seeing you expanding your horizons.  It's neat to see you progress and expand your artistic talents.  By trying new things you learn new styles and techniques too.  Also it grows your writing skill!

[Daphine]

I think it varies. Most people come to the artwork section probably just for the art. 

LOL, MasterXtreme I honestly did laugh out load when I read your comment only because I never thought of it  .  Talk about feeling dumb  .

I want to thank RainySunshine for first given me the idea to try and draw new charactor's in my own sneezy style.  If it wasn't for there comment back on my Re: New sneezy Scooby Doo drawing. Scooby trying to save Daphne! (M) post I wouldn't have tried my hand at Maximus...

You're welcome!  Thanks for taking that leap.  It's honestly kind of scary sometimes trying something new, especially if you worry about others opinions on what you do. Honestly, just have fun, don't worry what others think.   Thanks for sharing!

You are right, I do worry about what people think about my work and I should just try and have fun.  When I draw a comic or write a story I almost always work on something that I enjoy or something for lack of a better phrase "turns me on".  That's why works like this past one was a little difficult for me to do so I hope that I did do a good job.  I really did want to do something nice for all of my new friends here on PSF.

Nice new cartoon!  This Anthony guy sounds like a real badie!

I was going to use my own personal favorite bad guy ( or girl ) agent Sonya but I honestly wasn't sure how well that would go over on here so I decided to try someone new!

[Rainberry]

I'd say use any characters you like.  I personally think it's fun to use YOUR creativity and not base it on what others may perceive. Do what YOU want to do.  Sonya would be interesting in this (or any other character).  You'd have to explain how she fits in their world and Scooby's world, lol!  Maybe it's just a giant Daphine Universe filled with any characters from anything she see's fit.