Nick Wilde's allergy sneezes on micro mouse (Zootopia, Macro/Micro, Messy - M)

[N@ndo]

As a first post after taking courage to be active here (7 years, argh!), here's a commission I did for someone. I hope I'm following the post rules.

I didn't initially thought I could post anything besides ponies, but I saw other shows and games here, so what the heck, as I have some sneeze artworks I did in private (including for the previous deleted Noastrel FurAffinity), and I wish I can upload 'em all here.

It's Nick Wilde from Zootopia after an accident, where his muzzle is stuck in a cute mouse's wall (an OC I created for this comic, her name's Emily, if you want cute sneezes from her just comment below). The last page was finished 2 days ago, but the first was made almost a year ago, so please don't mind the quality difference 

Yea, I hope I can make more artworks faster. 

P.S. if I can put inside views in every sneeze art, I WILL!!1 


https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1018605643000729601/1125978482392977448/Nick_Sneeze_Fury_pg1.jpg


https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1018605643000729601/1125978490802544710/Nick_Sneeze_Fury_pg2.jpg


https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1018605643000729601/1125979108329914428/Nick_Sneeze_Fury_pg3.jpg

[mysteryserpent]

Inside nose views are rare and honestly amazing to see. A nose feels more sensitive and more itchy when both the outside view and inside view are drawn.

Emily looks great! Her eyes are very pretty. I like the color you gave her. I am curious about Emily. I honestly want to see her sneeze in any way you imagine her sneeze to be.

Something that is amazing to me is your letters and how you use the size and look of the letters to give urgency or power to sounds. The lines alone are very nicely drawn. I think your WIP early sketches or lineart sketches alone would get people's attention.

The coloring and lighting/shading is really charming to look at. There is a LOT this commission has with smaller details.

Thank you so much for taking time sharing this art here on the forum =)

[N@ndo]

Emily looks great! Her eyes are very pretty. I like the color you gave her. I am curious about Emily. I honestly want to see her sneeze in any way you imagine her sneeze to be.

Examples? 

Again, thanks for your comment  really glad you loved it.

[Crimson Crest]

I agree with you and mysteryserpent about inside views. They're few and far between, and I love seeing those, soft, tender, comfy nasal passages...

On a slightly unrelated note, Nick's plea for Emily to hold his nose kind of contrasted with Emily's answer. I meant, doesn't holding one's nose mean pinching it shut?

...Not that I disliked Emily's interpretation of Nick wanting her to hold his nose. I would have loved to see her put her hand inside Nick's giant nostril. Hand– and finger–induced sneezes have a very special place in my heart.

[N@ndo]

On a slightly unrelated note, Nick's plea for Emily to hold his nose kind of contrasted with Emily's answer. I meant, doesn't holding one's nose mean pinching it shut?

...Not that I disliked Emily's interpretation of Nick wanting her to hold his nose. I would have loved to see her put her hand inside Nick's giant nostril. Hand– and finger–induced sneezes have a very special place in my heart.

English isn't my main language. The logic was: Nick asks Emily to hold his nose to stop the incoming rocket explosion, Emily is "eewww!!, gross!!!", but she does it against her will due of the consequences, but poorly and ineffective. So the "point-of-no-return" suction.

[Crimson Crest]

English isn't my main language. The logic was: Nick asks Emily to hold his nose to stop the incoming rocket explosion, Emily is "eewww!!, gross!!!", but she does it against her will due of the consequences, but poorly and ineffective. So the "point-of-no-return" suction.

Oh, okay. Sorry, I'm the kind of guy who always notices small things like grammar issues. Still a great comic, though.

[Smiles2us]

Fabulous!  What an energetic comic!  Nice to see you posting again!  Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Bumble]

P.S. if I can put inside views in every sneeze art, I WILL!!1 

I like this.   AND I like the whole comic!  Very creative stuff! 

[Rainberry]

This is fantastic!  I love snouts being stuck where they shouldn't be.  

[Kiwi]

The sneeze panel is incredible.  Love seeing all that strength blast from his nostrils.

[mysteryserpent]

Emily looks great! Her eyes are very pretty. I like the color you gave her. I am curious about Emily. I honestly want to see her sneeze in any way you imagine her sneeze to be.

Examples? 

Again, thanks for your comment  really glad you loved it.

You are welcome!

Examples...not many people ask me this question. I will say what I think =)

Emily may have a limit to how much she can resist before her build up gets to 100 %. She could have different build up face expressions at different % of how close the sneeze gets to happening.

Maybe her inside of her nose has sensitive ticklish spots.

Maybe instead of tiny little angel and devil on the shoulders, a tiny devil and angel could appear whenever a beginning of a sneeze happens.

Bare feet could be more clearly visible/seen when a sneeze happens.

I do not know what emily's nose is weak with. Dust, pollen, perfume, Emily may like something but be sensitive to a different thing.

[TheBeesSneeze]

That sneeze is incredible! What a great build up to it all.