2 Massive Fireside Twilight Sneezes (MLP - F)

[EvergreenPinewood]

Two images of Twilight sneezing beside the fireplace.  Really working on the sneeze spray.  These might be crude, but I want to emulate the amazing details shown in sneeze spray art by creators like @Anyponedrawn, @Graymist, or @Silverwing without directly ripping them off. Trying to make my own style if you will.  I think these sneeze spray flumes are too intense at the moment.  I am happy with the posing.

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[Spiffmin]

I like the first sneeze spray with the swirls.  The swirls were what @RainySunshine did on their art and they were well known for that in the sneeze fetish circles.  The second drawing, if toned down to not be so heavy and intense, could be a good balance.  You want to see the background, not have it whited out by spray.  Both of these are nice.  I particularly like the posing of the second one with Twilight's bow-legged sit.

[FoxTail]

These are both good and done in a more-show accurate style for the characters.  I like them! Twilight sneezes are always good.

[Soda]

These are both great.  I like the spray clouds.  Keep tweaking them for sure.

[Graymist]

Superb! Both turned out nicely.

[Bumble]

These are okay.  I think the second one is better, but they aren't the best.

[RainySunshine]

These are nice, the second one is best. 

[Sniffles]

I like how the first one, her pose really looks like she is sneezing, as does the second.  Both are good studies in body to sneeze relations.  The body moves differently under the pressure of a sneeze.

[Kiwi]

Both are pretty cute!  I think I do prefer the second picture and her sitting there all cute and sneezing.

[Anyponedrawn]

These are both real good!  They look complete with no ai oddities. They look like big sneezes too, which I approve of of course! 

[Rainberry]

It looks dusty in that wooden shack of a room!  No wonder she is sneezing.  The first drawing shows us a massive sneezy blast, but the second one seems to fit her better!

[Wolfwood]

Awesome sneeze blast!  I think you did an awesome job on these and your sneeze spray already looks great!

[flemishcap]

I like them both and they show off how good a sneeze they are.  I bet she felt super satisfied with these. 

[Silverwing]

Powerfully awesome looking sneezes!  I love these.

[MasterXtreme]

Each has it's own strength and weakness.  I like the spray from the first image better.  Apply that to the second one and you have two winners.